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The Creative Corner (Art Club)! [Open!]
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Thank you!
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by Hunnie <3
art by me and pixel art by Nymph
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by kaitotemari <33
@Maria-chan
What a wonderful scene, quite adorable really~ I can't really give much that wouldn't have been said already, though the thing I noticed is that the lineart isn't the same throughout the deerling, namely the flower and the markings on the body. The lines there look a little blurry and I don't think it suits the piece, next time I would suggest either using the sharp linework you used for everything else, or no lines at all and just make the marks with colour. Either way, you did a great job!
@FawnstarWarriors
This is very nice, I only have issues with the background since those yellow spots are a little too bright and thus fight for attention with the focal point - the kittens.
@that~one~cat
Looks really cute! Though I would suggest next time to use a little off-white colour for the while, maybe with a hint of yellow to contrast the cool tones.
As for my own drawing, well it's Geisha again, will I ever draw anyone else?
But for now I present to you her pokemon form ref sheet!
Critiques:
@TOC - Reminds me of Danganronpa lmao. I'd try adding some texture into the fur w/ the help of the shading.
@Fawnstar - On the middle cat, I'd try emphasizing the hair covering the eye a bit more. I thought at first glance the cat only had one eye.
@Giltine - What a lovely character! I have no critiques, it's all so nice.
@TOC: I can’t find anything wrong XD That’s great!
@Giltine: Again, no criticism xD Keep it up!
@Furret: Nice! I really like that drawing style. One thing I’d say is potentially put the feet a little further apart? Nothing else though, just throwing an idea out again :P
Everyone’s art is so good ;w; I’ll post something in a bit, when I’m on my computer.
As giltine said, the yellow lights are a bit too bright, other wise quite cute ^w^
@me
its me
@giltine
perfect <3
@furret
![](https://i.imgur.com/LjYVMES.jpg)
by Hunnie <3
art by me and pixel art by Nymph
![](http://fs1.directupload.net/images/180410/revzr2l5.png)
by kaitotemari <33
really cute !!
but I think the tail shading is a bit - over the top, if you get me ??
the tail is also a bit smol
also the scythe should have some shading i think
but otherwise really cute !
![](https://i.imgur.com/LjYVMES.jpg)
by Hunnie <3
art by me and pixel art by Nymph
![](http://fs1.directupload.net/images/180410/revzr2l5.png)
by kaitotemari <33
i kinda like my traditional art style more
critiquing later
"Bingpot."
![](https://i.imgur.com/LjYVMES.jpg)
by Hunnie <3
art by me and pixel art by Nymph
![](http://fs1.directupload.net/images/180410/revzr2l5.png)
by kaitotemari <33