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Writers Club (Always Accepting Authors!)
Forum-Index → Fan Clubs → Writers Club (Always Accepting Authors!)Also another suggestion:
Why not have a sort of contest committee who, in co-operation with the club moderators ofc, plan and run regular writing contests?
And how about featuring stories that won the previous contests on the main post? (Unless that's already a thing. Then I'm just blind. Sorry.)
And if I may suggest a theme for the (hopefully? maybe?) upcoming contest, how about "Light and Darkness", or maybe "Loss"? Or if y'all prefer some lighter themes, how about "Pastels"?
Anyway, I've never stuck around for contests but prompts would be nice! Like, "What would you do if [insert scenario]?" or something like that. I've been writing all sorts of prompts for a while, and they really help me get creative despite the restriction in scenario. c:
the forms are mostly so we can ward off people who I, or someone else, knows is a drama-maker or something that could be problematic for the club. basically, to keep this a safe, drama-free, hate-free place for writers.
@noshunishi
i like the suggestion of having a committee, although maybe they could they could also be moderators so that they have a little more control and power. i do want to allow as many people to join as possible, though, so i'd like to stay in charge of prizes (with the exception of donations, of course). and featuring pieces that won is a great idea as well, as long as the creator is okay with it.
also, the contest doesn't just have to be a theme. there's lots of open-ended story prompts out there, ranging from "no one walked past room 124. they ran." to "night whispers." so, if you think one of those would be cool, don't be afraid to throw them here as well!
I'm more the kind of person that'd sit on the side and read through everyone else's entries instead of entering personally, honestly XD
A contest would be AWESOME. Anything for inspiration, right? But you could be even vaguer when it comes to the prompt itself, you know? Just do a genre or something like that.
@Nish
Yeah, I am DEFINITELY continuing that story. I love my two boys and I’ve got a ton of ideas for their story.
Credit to Viper
I will definitely admit that you had me extremely invested. I'm curious to see how everything plays out in the end... But honestly, my biggest complaint is that you need to proofread. You sort of switched POVs every now and then (you started in third, then switched to first?) and the pacing was very strange. Otherwise, nicely written!
@everyone
I genuinely forgot what it felt like to have such fun while writing. This story is an absolute joy to write.
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The rain stopped hours later. Andor
and Robbie had managed to fall asleep before then (after a lot of
talking), though the thunder was anything but comforting to Andor.
The rain on the tarp was truly the only part of the storm that was
even remotely comforting.
The sun is what woke him up, shining through the plastic tarp onto his face. Andor grunted and moved his hand over his eyes in an attempt to block out the rays before realizing where he was. He sat bolt upright, head whipping around. He located Robbie not far away, conked out on the ground next to the lantern. Drool dripped from the side of his mouth.
Andor made a face and looked down to his clothes. Mud. His white shirt was now splattered with brown while his red leather jacket covered in hardened dirt. His pants and shoes took the worst of it, however, and Andor’s hair was still soaked. My dad is going to murder me.
He looked over to the street and saw a uniformed soldier jog past. His eyes widened and he slapped Robbie awake. “Ow, ow! Hey--”
“Shh,” Andor moved his hand over Robbie’s mouth. “They figured out I’m gone,” He whispered, pointing to the end of the alleyway. Robbie frowned for a split second before his eyes widened. He nodded and pushed Andor’s hand away from his mouth.
“Shouldn’t you go back?” He asked quietly. “So you don’t get in even more trouble?”
Andor nodded slowly. “I should. But that doesn’t mean I want to.”
“Well tough luck. I know for a fact that you’re going to regret it if you don’t,” Robbie replied harshly. Andor sighed.
“You’re right. You’re right,” He shook his head. “But thanks for everything, Robbie. See you again soon?”
“Can you?” Robbie blinked. Andor shrugged.
“I’ll figure it out.”
They smiled at each other. Andor waved and jogged to the end of the alleyway, glancing around quickly. He took off running towards the castle.
He looked around and whistled to a guard. “Right here.”
“Your majesty,” The guard approached him and bowed. Andor couldn’t help but roll his eyes. “Why did you leave the castle?”
“Fresh air,” Andor replied simply. “But I’m ready to go back.”
The guard nodded and started marching back towards the castle, with Andor following slowly. He glanced behind him to see Robbie’s face. He waved at Andor, who smiled and waved back shyly.
*~*~*~*
Robbie went back to his alleyway and slipped under the tarp, grabbing his lantern and running out into the open space on the other side of the alleyway. He was now out of the village, in one of the surrounding meadows. The early morning was cold and he tugged on his old parka, zipping it up as he approached an outcrop.
He followed the slope of the outcrop around until he located a small tunnel, held up with wooden beams (though he had taken the liberty of reinforcing the beams with bits of rock and steel he had found). Slipping through the archway leading into the tunnel, he followed the path down until he located a hole in the rocky ground.
Jumping down easily, he felt the normal sensation of falling for a split second before landing softly on a mat. He pulled the same trick he had pulled the previous night, lighting the tip of his finger on fire with the only spell he knew and using that flame on a lantern. He shook out the flame on his finger and lifted the lantern up, surveying his work-in-progress abode.
There wasn’t much room, as this little cave had been an abandoned mineshaft that had suffered a cave in. All that was left was a minecart and its track, with very little room around them. The rocks had made only a fraction of the space usable. Robbie had been cautious in restoring what he could (since the last thing he wanted was another cave in) and dug out very little, reinforcing the wooden beams the same way he had with the last beams.
He had been using the minecart as a sort of storage chest, filled with what little items he had salvaged from his last home. A picture frame, a notebook, a few pens, a blanket. Other than that, he didn’t own much. He was able to nab a few bits of furniture that people had thrown out, like an old and rickety chair, but it was better than nothing. He always told himself that it was better than being put in the orphanage.
He hung the lantern up on a hook and grabbed the notebook and a pen from the minecart, settling down on a towel by the ladder leading back up to the cave. He smiled and opened a page, writing something for the first time since he had turned eight.
*~*~*~*
Andor immediately changed into something clean as soon as he closed the door to his room. He took a few deep breaths and sat down on his bed, tapping his foot. He’d need to sneak out again. If not tonight, sometime soon. He intended to keep his promise to Robbie. Besides, talking with him was the highlight of his year and Andor didn’t want his first real friendship to end just because he wasn’t allowed out into the village.
The door clicking open interrupted Andor’s thoughts and he looked up sharply. “Andor, thank the gods you’re alright,” His mother’s soft voice greeted.
Andor’s mother was a gentle woman, frail in appearance and soft-spoken. Her dark hair was neatly braided on the back of her head and the fine dress she wore covered her unnaturally pale skin. Her eyes were always what comforted Andor the most, however. Pale green and gentle. Never angry, yet always showing emotion.
Andor smiled and ran forward, enveloping her in a hug. “You gave me such a scare, running off in the middle of a big storm like that.”
“I’m sorry, but--”
“Are you hurt? Are you alright?” His mother stepped away quickly, looking him over. Andor shook his head, unable to meet her gaze. She pushed his chin up gently. “...That’s all that matters. That you’re alright.”
“You aren’t mad?”
“I’m not. No. I understand why you ran away and… I’m sorry. You shouldn’t have heard that.”
Andor sniffled, holding back tears again. He just nodded and hugged her again.
After a minute or two, he stepped away. “What about dad?”
“He’s just as worried as I was. He’s waiting down in the hall,” His mother cooed, pushing Andor’s messy hair back behind his ear. He nodded slowly. “Are you ready?”
“Yeah,” Andor nodded, clearing his throat. “Let’s go.”
His mother smiled and stood upright, taking Andor’s hand in hers. They stepped out of his bedroom and went down the long corridor, going down the steps into the throne room.
The King--Andor’s father--was a large and muscular man, having seen his fair share of fights in years long past. His brown hair climbed down and clung to his chin in the makings of a scruffy beard. As Andor and the Queen entered, he looked up from his throne.
“Andor,” He murmured, standing up. Andor looked up to meet his gaze and found this his father’s gaze was not hostile, nor angry, nor relieved. It was thoughtful.
“F-Father,” Andor stuttered, still shaken up by the discussion he overheard from the previous night.
His father looked over him and smiled. “You’re alright,” He extended his arms and Andor found the grip he had on his mother’s hand vanish. He darted forward and hugged him.
“I’m sorry, father, I--”
“It’s alright, Andor, it’s alright,” Andor’s father pat his back slowly. “I understand. But that doesn’t mean that you should have run off like that.”
Andor stepped away, meeting his father’s gaze evenly. He felt his mother’s hand on his shoulder. “I-I know.”
“We apologize for what you heard last night, but running off alone into the village during a storm like that was hardly the right thing to do. You could have gotten hurt or killed,” His father’s tone was firm. Andor just nodded. “The village is a dangerous place for a royal.”
“...I didn’t think so,” Andor piped up quietly. His father raised his eyebrows questioningly, seemingly urging Andor to go on. “The storm was scary, but… I didn’t see anyone with knives or anything like you said.”
“You told him that?” His mother’s hushed whisper made Andor glance up at her.
“To keep him away from the village,” His father replied calmly. “Because it is a dangerous place for a royal. Not all of the town likes us, Andor. Not everyone agrees with us. Going down there unsupervised was--and still is--unwise. You could have been kidnapped or killed.”
Andor flinched and looked down at his shoes. He nodded. “I understand.”
“You will become a part of the people’s lives someday, Andor,” His mother lifted her hand from his shoulder and stood by the King. “You will protect them and learn all of their names eventually. But that day is a long ways away. Your father is right. It is unsafe for you to go out into the village. Please don’t sneak out again, okay sweetie?”
Andor looked up and nodded. “I won’t. I promise.”
“Thank you,” His father smiled. “We love you Andor.”
“And we just want you safe,” His mother added, stooping down and kissing him on the head.
Andor smiled and stepped up to stand by them.
“Your royal highnesses,” A new voice greeted from the end of the room. Andor turned around to look. “A letter. A young commoner dropped it off at the gates this morning.”
“Bring it here,” His father commanded. The knight stepped forward and handed a small, folded up piece of lined paper to the King. He unfolded it and almost immediately crumpled it.
“Just another child of the kingdom asking to change something trivial,” He scoffed dismissively, discarding the paper. “Come, Andor, it is nearly time for your battle training.”
“I’ll be down soon,” Andor assured him, watching his parents step out of the throne room. As soon as he was alone, Andor kneeled by the trash can and located the crumpled up letter.
Andor,
I hope that you didn’t get yelled at too bad for everything that happened last night. I was thinking. Maybe next time we meet I could show you the place I’ve been trying to spruce up and make my house? It’s a little dusty and dirty, but maybe you could help me turn it around. Or you could… You know. Forget that you ever met me if you can’t get out again.
Sincerely,
Robbie
(P.S, I hope you can read this. I haven’t written anything in awhile.)
A few words were misspelled, but Andor hardly cared. He slipped the note into his pocket and jogged out of the throne room, deciding that he needed to sneak out again, promise or no promise.
The sun is what woke him up, shining through the plastic tarp onto his face. Andor grunted and moved his hand over his eyes in an attempt to block out the rays before realizing where he was. He sat bolt upright, head whipping around. He located Robbie not far away, conked out on the ground next to the lantern. Drool dripped from the side of his mouth.
Andor made a face and looked down to his clothes. Mud. His white shirt was now splattered with brown while his red leather jacket covered in hardened dirt. His pants and shoes took the worst of it, however, and Andor’s hair was still soaked. My dad is going to murder me.
He looked over to the street and saw a uniformed soldier jog past. His eyes widened and he slapped Robbie awake. “Ow, ow! Hey--”
“Shh,” Andor moved his hand over Robbie’s mouth. “They figured out I’m gone,” He whispered, pointing to the end of the alleyway. Robbie frowned for a split second before his eyes widened. He nodded and pushed Andor’s hand away from his mouth.
“Shouldn’t you go back?” He asked quietly. “So you don’t get in even more trouble?”
Andor nodded slowly. “I should. But that doesn’t mean I want to.”
“Well tough luck. I know for a fact that you’re going to regret it if you don’t,” Robbie replied harshly. Andor sighed.
“You’re right. You’re right,” He shook his head. “But thanks for everything, Robbie. See you again soon?”
“Can you?” Robbie blinked. Andor shrugged.
“I’ll figure it out.”
They smiled at each other. Andor waved and jogged to the end of the alleyway, glancing around quickly. He took off running towards the castle.
He looked around and whistled to a guard. “Right here.”
“Your majesty,” The guard approached him and bowed. Andor couldn’t help but roll his eyes. “Why did you leave the castle?”
“Fresh air,” Andor replied simply. “But I’m ready to go back.”
The guard nodded and started marching back towards the castle, with Andor following slowly. He glanced behind him to see Robbie’s face. He waved at Andor, who smiled and waved back shyly.
*~*~*~*
Robbie went back to his alleyway and slipped under the tarp, grabbing his lantern and running out into the open space on the other side of the alleyway. He was now out of the village, in one of the surrounding meadows. The early morning was cold and he tugged on his old parka, zipping it up as he approached an outcrop.
He followed the slope of the outcrop around until he located a small tunnel, held up with wooden beams (though he had taken the liberty of reinforcing the beams with bits of rock and steel he had found). Slipping through the archway leading into the tunnel, he followed the path down until he located a hole in the rocky ground.
Jumping down easily, he felt the normal sensation of falling for a split second before landing softly on a mat. He pulled the same trick he had pulled the previous night, lighting the tip of his finger on fire with the only spell he knew and using that flame on a lantern. He shook out the flame on his finger and lifted the lantern up, surveying his work-in-progress abode.
There wasn’t much room, as this little cave had been an abandoned mineshaft that had suffered a cave in. All that was left was a minecart and its track, with very little room around them. The rocks had made only a fraction of the space usable. Robbie had been cautious in restoring what he could (since the last thing he wanted was another cave in) and dug out very little, reinforcing the wooden beams the same way he had with the last beams.
He had been using the minecart as a sort of storage chest, filled with what little items he had salvaged from his last home. A picture frame, a notebook, a few pens, a blanket. Other than that, he didn’t own much. He was able to nab a few bits of furniture that people had thrown out, like an old and rickety chair, but it was better than nothing. He always told himself that it was better than being put in the orphanage.
He hung the lantern up on a hook and grabbed the notebook and a pen from the minecart, settling down on a towel by the ladder leading back up to the cave. He smiled and opened a page, writing something for the first time since he had turned eight.
*~*~*~*
Andor immediately changed into something clean as soon as he closed the door to his room. He took a few deep breaths and sat down on his bed, tapping his foot. He’d need to sneak out again. If not tonight, sometime soon. He intended to keep his promise to Robbie. Besides, talking with him was the highlight of his year and Andor didn’t want his first real friendship to end just because he wasn’t allowed out into the village.
The door clicking open interrupted Andor’s thoughts and he looked up sharply. “Andor, thank the gods you’re alright,” His mother’s soft voice greeted.
Andor’s mother was a gentle woman, frail in appearance and soft-spoken. Her dark hair was neatly braided on the back of her head and the fine dress she wore covered her unnaturally pale skin. Her eyes were always what comforted Andor the most, however. Pale green and gentle. Never angry, yet always showing emotion.
Andor smiled and ran forward, enveloping her in a hug. “You gave me such a scare, running off in the middle of a big storm like that.”
“I’m sorry, but--”
“Are you hurt? Are you alright?” His mother stepped away quickly, looking him over. Andor shook his head, unable to meet her gaze. She pushed his chin up gently. “...That’s all that matters. That you’re alright.”
“You aren’t mad?”
“I’m not. No. I understand why you ran away and… I’m sorry. You shouldn’t have heard that.”
Andor sniffled, holding back tears again. He just nodded and hugged her again.
After a minute or two, he stepped away. “What about dad?”
“He’s just as worried as I was. He’s waiting down in the hall,” His mother cooed, pushing Andor’s messy hair back behind his ear. He nodded slowly. “Are you ready?”
“Yeah,” Andor nodded, clearing his throat. “Let’s go.”
His mother smiled and stood upright, taking Andor’s hand in hers. They stepped out of his bedroom and went down the long corridor, going down the steps into the throne room.
The King--Andor’s father--was a large and muscular man, having seen his fair share of fights in years long past. His brown hair climbed down and clung to his chin in the makings of a scruffy beard. As Andor and the Queen entered, he looked up from his throne.
“Andor,” He murmured, standing up. Andor looked up to meet his gaze and found this his father’s gaze was not hostile, nor angry, nor relieved. It was thoughtful.
“F-Father,” Andor stuttered, still shaken up by the discussion he overheard from the previous night.
His father looked over him and smiled. “You’re alright,” He extended his arms and Andor found the grip he had on his mother’s hand vanish. He darted forward and hugged him.
“I’m sorry, father, I--”
“It’s alright, Andor, it’s alright,” Andor’s father pat his back slowly. “I understand. But that doesn’t mean that you should have run off like that.”
Andor stepped away, meeting his father’s gaze evenly. He felt his mother’s hand on his shoulder. “I-I know.”
“We apologize for what you heard last night, but running off alone into the village during a storm like that was hardly the right thing to do. You could have gotten hurt or killed,” His father’s tone was firm. Andor just nodded. “The village is a dangerous place for a royal.”
“...I didn’t think so,” Andor piped up quietly. His father raised his eyebrows questioningly, seemingly urging Andor to go on. “The storm was scary, but… I didn’t see anyone with knives or anything like you said.”
“You told him that?” His mother’s hushed whisper made Andor glance up at her.
“To keep him away from the village,” His father replied calmly. “Because it is a dangerous place for a royal. Not all of the town likes us, Andor. Not everyone agrees with us. Going down there unsupervised was--and still is--unwise. You could have been kidnapped or killed.”
Andor flinched and looked down at his shoes. He nodded. “I understand.”
“You will become a part of the people’s lives someday, Andor,” His mother lifted her hand from his shoulder and stood by the King. “You will protect them and learn all of their names eventually. But that day is a long ways away. Your father is right. It is unsafe for you to go out into the village. Please don’t sneak out again, okay sweetie?”
Andor looked up and nodded. “I won’t. I promise.”
“Thank you,” His father smiled. “We love you Andor.”
“And we just want you safe,” His mother added, stooping down and kissing him on the head.
Andor smiled and stepped up to stand by them.
“Your royal highnesses,” A new voice greeted from the end of the room. Andor turned around to look. “A letter. A young commoner dropped it off at the gates this morning.”
“Bring it here,” His father commanded. The knight stepped forward and handed a small, folded up piece of lined paper to the King. He unfolded it and almost immediately crumpled it.
“Just another child of the kingdom asking to change something trivial,” He scoffed dismissively, discarding the paper. “Come, Andor, it is nearly time for your battle training.”
“I’ll be down soon,” Andor assured him, watching his parents step out of the throne room. As soon as he was alone, Andor kneeled by the trash can and located the crumpled up letter.
Andor,
I hope that you didn’t get yelled at too bad for everything that happened last night. I was thinking. Maybe next time we meet I could show you the place I’ve been trying to spruce up and make my house? It’s a little dusty and dirty, but maybe you could help me turn it around. Or you could… You know. Forget that you ever met me if you can’t get out again.
Sincerely,
Robbie
(P.S, I hope you can read this. I haven’t written anything in awhile.)
A few words were misspelled, but Andor hardly cared. He slipped the note into his pocket and jogged out of the throne room, deciding that he needed to sneak out again, promise or no promise.
Feedback is always appreciated <3
Credit to Viper
Anyways, that's all I wanted to say. If it thread revives, I may want to join :)
lately ive been depressed (for some reasons), but now i have cope with it... anyways~ during those period wherein i was depressed, i have made a poem (which also one of the things that helped me cope with my depression)... its titled "the puppeteer" and i hope ull like it...
The puppeteer and his stage;
The puppets in his strings;
They sings and dances as what he has predicted
Yet he still feels lonely.
Is he a bad director?
A neophyte in story writing?
For even though the puppets played his scripts
He still feels lonely.
Is he a bad person?
For he changed the original script just because he just wanted to?
Is changing the script of the story
Just to make the puppets free a sin?
The puppeteer in the shadows;
The puppeteer above the stage;
The puppets sings and dances as what he had predicted
Yet he still feels lonely.
XxSenecaxX
Nickname?:
Salya, Sal, others
Favorite Genre Of Writing?:
Fluffy Fanfics.
Other:
I write fanfics and original stories. ^_^
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Custom sprites I asked for:
probably not worth it since it's been a month but accepted!!
@everyone
hello!! hola!! bonjour!! annyeonghaseyo!! I'm running out of languages!! how have ya'll been?? good hopefully. this place has been kinda dead for a while, so let's try and fix that!! what have you guys been writing recently?? gotten into any new styles?? any new characters?? unfortunately i can't post much of the stuff i've been writing recently but i've been really into half story format have text dialogue writing for the past couple weeks.
Anyway, I've been doing some experimental stuff recently! I did one of those writing challenges where you base characters off of songs and the result was this.
I'm really liking these two characters but if anyone has any notes or things I could improve on, just say! I'd love to keep using these two.
Credit to Viper
Nickname?: Kety
Favorite Genre Of Writing?: fantasy and horror
Other: I write just about anything and everything. From short stories to fanfics (normally when I'm bored lol). Love reading and coming out with plots for many stories that I'll probably never finish. I have too many ideas.