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Marksman
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Posted: Thu, 04/01/2018 02:23 (6 Years ago)
Username: Kuruma/Kurama
Nickname?: None...
Favorite Genre Of Writing?: I love them all but fantasy leads by a tiny sliver...
Other: Here's a bit of my work



Here is my poems:


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Oceans:

My life was a vast ocean...

In the night it is dark and scary...

In the day it is reckless and unforgiving...

My nightmares feed of me like a leech...

My dreams die as fast as lightning....

I do my best but I can't rest unless,

I invest in becoming successful,

But it is always super stressful,

I obediently feel like my life isn't real,

but is reality that important?

It's suppressing my hope and it's so depressing,

Caressing my freedom and ending it's life,

You hold my wrist and I'll hold the knife,

The only prosperity for me is to release myself from my own limits...



Sadness:

My life is depressing...

I'm always stressing to be the way others want me to be...

But I don't know...

if I should let the ink to flow from my pen...

I analyze myself, question myself...

Contemplate my actions and fears...

I am not very happy...

My experiences aren't clear...

My memories leave me...

No one believes me...

No one can save me...

The darkness held me...

I was forever devoured by this endless void...

The deception made me feel like my life was the only exception,

Exceptional moments made me feel dismay,

Maybe I need to let go of this....

I wake up everyday unable to move like...

sleep paralysis,

That's how I feel when I think about the world...

That's how I feel when I think about the talons,

Digging into my back,

From the predators who though I was weak...

And took that moment to attack me...

But as a matter of fact I don't care...

About life, about the world, about anything...

I'm done with all the hate and the lying...

I feel like letting out my anger...

But it seems like right now would be best for me...

If I was crying...

I will cry...

I will drown...

I don't know...

My heart is broken...

My trust is fading...

Like the light in my eyes...

As I breath one last time...

As I fade away...



I don't know's:

I don't know how you feel but to me life is nothing but a series of events intertwined between you and others,

You can seek sanctuary in others but is that what you really want?

What you really need

I could ask you all the questions in the world and maybe you could answer them...

Maybe you have that knowledge....

But with knowlegde comes fear

Fear that you don't know what you are doing, saying, living....

Fear that nothing matters,

But let me tell you this...

What you really fear isn't any of that...

As you became more knowledgeable, you become more fearful,

Fearful of what you don't know

Because with more knowledge comes less self-satisfaction

As you are left wanting more... but needing less...

I don't know how you feel but If I went to you and asked....

"Would you give up everything... for the 1 thing that means the most to you?"

Give up your life, your family, happiness.... friends.... money.... all that you have aquired over the short or long life you have lived....

Many would say yes... For all the love, money, happiness in the world....

They would give up the most important things in their lives....

But fear not... if you say no.... you have decided right....

Because all possessions may make you feel content for a short while...

but losing what you had will make your heart ache and pain more that before....

So when the day comes that you can receive anything for something as important as everything you have obtained over the course of your live....

I hope you take my advice... or just throw it away.... maybe even forget it....

I don't care.... I just hope your decision makes you feel content in the end...

I hope you don't spend your eternity contemplating the decisions made

Like my poem... Rate out of 5 RaPpLeS...









fluttershyfan2
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Posted: Mon, 15/01/2018 22:01 (6 Years ago)
So i haven't written in awhile (*Points at my school* Blame that thing), but I wrote a short natsukixyuri (doki doki literature club) fanfic last night out of boredom.

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“Ah-! Um.. Natsuki, what’s this?” Yuri asked, pointing at the box of cupcakes Natsuki was now shoving at her.
Natsuki looked down. “Uh… I made some extra cupcakes and thought you might like them. But I mean… It’s not like I made them f-for.. You know...YOU or anything…!! Stupid….”
Yuri smiled.
She had been around Natsuki enough to know that she meant that she DID make them for her.
“Oh! Well, thank you Natsuki.”
Natsuki blushed, then pushed them towards Yuri again. “J-Just take them already! My arms are getting tired!”
Yuri nodded, and took the box from her. “Mind if I try one?”
Natsuki shrugged. “I-If you want…” She answered, looking back at Yuri.
Yuri picked up a cupcake, and tried it, being careful not to get any icing on her face.
“..Oh! This is really good!” Yuri said, cheerfully. “You’re really good at making these, Natsuki!”
Natsuki felt her face turn red, as she quickly looked away from Yuri, again.
“W-Well…! I mean….. I bet if you tried, you could make something like this too!” She blurted out, then instantly regretting saying that.
Yuri paused, then laughed. “Oh, I don’t think I could. …..Maybe you could show me sometime?”
“Wh-What?!”
“Nevermind~”
TheRedMist
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Posted: Tue, 16/01/2018 07:20 (6 Years ago)
i actually like that even tho i've never watched/played anything about ddlc XD
it's just good to see this group isn't entirely dead, you know?
fluttershyfan2
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Posted: Wed, 24/01/2018 18:48 (6 Years ago)
@nightmare late reply is late Yeah. Part of me was actually worried it was dead. ^^'
TheRedMist
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Posted: Wed, 24/01/2018 18:52 (6 Years ago)
the only reason i don't really post much of what i write is cuz i write it and then just entirely scrap it or write something then just go into a "Yeaa... this is kinda cringey/terrible.. i just can't go through with posting this"
CatLady
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Posted: Wed, 24/01/2018 18:53 (6 Years ago)
I'm really bad at writing without a prompt and I don't feel comfortable posting W.I.P.s ^^'
Credits for avatar to ~Cookie~

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TheRedMist
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Posted: Wed, 24/01/2018 18:57 (6 Years ago)
i get that, actually xD
except with me writing without a prompt is easier but yea i don't like posting W.I.P.s mostly because they end up getting scrapped at some point, just like all of my art
eunoia
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Posted: Wed, 24/01/2018 21:34 (6 Years ago)
If you're bad at writing without a prompt and you enjoy a touch of humor, try The Fake Redhead's prompts. Just google them, they're dialogue and a some are a bit funny.
As for posting WIPs, I'm usually very uncomfortable posting them as well, but if I get the right bout of inspiration, as long as I deem it worth, I'm ok with posting it. You do have to remember that writing often seems bad, cliche, boring, or cringe worthy because you yourself wrote it, which is literally like reading it 500 times. So, sometimes, stepping out of your comfort zone and posting something you don't necessarily think is all that great can actually be amazing to others.
Marksman
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Posted: Thu, 25/01/2018 00:14 (6 Years ago)
Was I accepted?








eunoia
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Posted: Thu, 25/01/2018 02:47 (6 Years ago)
Ah, yes! Apologies, didn't see the form.
Marksman
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Posted: Thu, 25/01/2018 03:27 (6 Years ago)
Some poems I made from my form:
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My life was a vast ocean...

In the night it is dark and scary...

In the day it is reckless and unforgiving...

My nightmares feed of me like a leech...

My dreams die as fast as lightning....

I do my best but I can't rest unless,

I invest in becoming successful,

But it is always super stressful,

I obediently feel like my life isn't real,

but is reality that important?

It's suppressing my hope and it's so depressing,

Caressing my freedom and ending it's life,

You hold my wrist and I'll hold the knife,

The only prosperity for me is to release myself from my own limits...



Sadness:

My life is depressing...

I'm always stressing to be the way others want me to be...

But I don't know...

if I should let the ink to flow from my pen...

I analyze myself, question myself...

Contemplate my actions and fears...

I am not very happy...

My experiences aren't clear...

My memories leave me...

No one believes me...

No one can save me...

The darkness held me...

I was forever devoured by this endless void...

The deception made me feel like my life was the only exception,

Exceptional moments made me feel dismay,

Maybe I need to let go of this....

I wake up everyday unable to move like...

sleep paralysis,

That's how I feel when I think about the world...

That's how I feel when I think about the talons,

Digging into my back,

From the predators who though I was weak...

And took that moment to attack me...

But as a matter of fact I don't care...

About life, about the world, about anything...

I'm done with all the hate and the lying...

I feel like letting out my anger...

But it seems like right now would be best for me...

If I was crying...

I don't know...

My heart is broken...

My trust is fading...

Like the light in my eyes...

As I breath one last time...

As I fade away...



I don't know's:

I don't know how you feel but to me life is nothing but a series of events intertwined between you and others,

You can seek sanctuary in others but is that what you really want?

What you really need

I could ask you all the questions in the world and maybe you could answer them...

Maybe you have that knowledge....

But with knowlegde comes fear

Fear that you don't know what you are doing, saying, living....

Fear that nothing matters,

But let me tell you this...

What you really fear isn't any of that...

As you became more knowledgeable, you become more fearful,

Fearful of what you don't know

Because with more knowledge comes less self-satisfaction

As you are left wanting more... but needing less...

I don't know how you feel but If I went to you and asked....

"Would you give up everything... for the 1 thing that means the most to you?"

Give up your life, your family, happiness.... friends.... money.... all that you have aquired over the short or long life you have lived....

Many would say yes... For all the love, money, happiness in the world....

They would give up the most important things in their lives....

But fear not... if you say no.... you have decided right....

Because all possessions may make you feel content for a short while...

but losing what you had will make your heart ache and pain more that before....

So when the day comes that you can receive anything for something as important as everything you have obtained over the course of your live....

I hope you take my advice... or just throw it away.... maybe even forget it....

I don't care.... I just hope your decision makes you feel content in the end...

I hope you don't spend your eternity contemplating the decisions made









Nishinoya
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Posted: Thu, 25/01/2018 15:40 (6 Years ago)
Kinda trigger warning? Vent ahead.

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I'm falling
I struggle in the air to free myself
From the cobwebs of the past
But they keep dragging me deeper
Into the void

There's a light I can see
But as I reach out to it,
My nightmares block my view

The spirits move around me
Holding me tight
Close my eyes and whisper into my ears
«You're not worth it»

kinda unhappy with this.
ExpressoPuncake
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Posted: Thu, 25/01/2018 16:01 (6 Years ago)
Username: MoltresInANutShell
Nickname?: Mew, or you can just make one up
Favorite Genre Of Writing?: Stories
Other:
I can write good but I'm very lazy But I've written 5 essays, 2 stories (very childish ones tbh) and 10 paragraphs for an assignment in a short period of time

Credits to KaitoTemari

Avi made by MetalHeadKendra
TheRedMist
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Posted: Fri, 09/02/2018 20:18 (6 Years ago)
bump?

I forgot i kinda wrote some random things at school at some points when i was bored, they're not good, and if i can find them (or one of them? i can't remember whether i did just one or more) i'll post it here. It's just a descriptive piece though, no action, just a straight up description. I find those a bit easier than writing out an entire scene with actions + dialogue as well as character descriptions, too (cuz i doubt many people here know what my ocs look like XD)
eunoia
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Posted: Fri, 09/02/2018 20:59 (6 Years ago)
@ExpressoPuncake
Accepted! Welcome!

@Error
Honestly, I'm a huge descriptive writer too. Most of the time, I can't dialogue to save my life. But, yeah, if you find some be sure to throw them here. I'll certainly enjoy it.

@Everyone else
God, I've been so busy with high school applications that I've been unable to write as much as I usually do. I am, however, planning a fanfic (for a class at school, which is a long story), and since it has to be school-appropriate I can probably share it on here. So, expect that, I guess.
TheRedMist
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Posted: Fri, 09/02/2018 21:03 (6 Years ago)
I think i left it in my personal bottomless pit, known as my school bag! XD so that'll be fun to try and find..

And that's fine, like I'm busy sometimes too. I just decided to check in because I really don't want this place to die haha..
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 16:27 (6 Years ago)
Nnnn
Guess who’s back
Luckylikeit
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 16:30 (6 Years ago)
@Sylvie
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
OH MY GOD WELCOME BACK

@Error + Nostalgia
I'm just wordy. I'm fine with dialogue and descriptions, but I just add so many details that may or may not be unneeded.

@Everyone
Uh I don't really have anything new? I mean I do, but nothing that would interest you guys too much. I could post an excerpt of 2929?

Credit to Viper
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 16:33 (6 Years ago)
@Lucky
OMG MY FLOODY FRIEND IVE MISSED YOU SO MUCH JFC

@ALL MEMBERS NEW AND OLD

Hi! If you don’t know me, I’m Sylvie/Sylv/That one weird one who disappears
Recently I’ve been on a HHHUUUUGGGEEEE hiatus because of personal issues (and the fact that school is a piece of crap) but ya boi is back and with some more crazy arraignments of 26 letters!
Nishinoya
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 16:39 (6 Years ago)
uhm also can I uh
have some feedback on my "poetry" thing I posted a while ago
maybe


ayyyyy welcome back @Sylvie!

also wow, I'm more the type of person who can write dialogues, but I suk at describing movements and such, as I focus more on the emotions and the spoken words. oops.