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Forum-Index → Fan Clubs → Writers Club (Always Accepting Authors!)after that i pretty much immediately ran over to google docs with armfuls of journals of paper and typed it all up, desperate to never again know the pain of losing like a fifth of my work. rest in pieces.
and god bless auto-save, i don't know where i would be without it. :'D
You take me down, you build me up
Believer
Believer
P a i n
Let the bullets fly, oh let them rain,
you take me down, you build me up
-Believer by Imagine Dragons
Oh, and so far, my pokemon fanfic consists of:
-A black mareep named Tenebris
-A sylveon/kirla fusion named Rosea
-A zorua/shaymin fusion named Caelum
-A monochrome altaria named Nubes
I still have absolutely no idea what the plot will be :')
And sure! As long as it's related to writing!
Credit to Viper
So, the book/comic/whatever is going to be named Masked, because one of the two main characters wears a possessed mask. Anyway, onto the book details.
*cough* this story will have some touchy subjects n stuff, so I can't post it here *cough*
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Maki
Maki is a spirit of a sort, with magic beyond comprehension. He plays tricks and is the main antagonist of the story. He is a grey-black ghost with a fanged snout, claws, and a red-ribbon top hat and cane. He also has yellow eyes. He is also very devious and will do everything at will to get his desires, to the point of tricking people and forcing them to murder. Yeah, I probably wont be able to put the story on here...
Evelyn Santiago Marcion
Evelyn is a tall creature, with a cat-like face, bird-like wings, scaly fingers, and a thin, long tail with a furry tip. She wears a mask with little bumps for eyebrows, pink cheeks, and a self-moving mouth to copy her mouth movement. She is a tricky ambivert who just wants to see her cousin again. She is best friends with Jackson the cat, and may/may not be lesbian. Oh, and she has one red and one blue eye with plus marks in them.
Jackson Rose Tetris
Jackson is a cat a bit shorter than Evelyn, who is her best friend. She has brown fur, black ears/paws/tailtip, and a white-brown stomach. She also has a black collar and yellow eyes. She is very calm, and definitely much more calm than slightly-crazy-as-heck Evelyn. She loves books, and is a excellent cook. Evelyns cousin was also like a big sister to her.
Fun fact about Evelyn and Jackson: They have been friends since kindergarten.
Maki
Maki is a spirit of a sort, with magic beyond comprehension. He plays tricks and is the main antagonist of the story. He is a grey-black ghost with a fanged snout, claws, and a red-ribbon top hat and cane. He also has yellow eyes. He is also very devious and will do everything at will to get his desires, to the point of tricking people and forcing them to murder. Yeah, I probably wont be able to put the story on here...
Evelyn Santiago Marcion
Evelyn is a tall creature, with a cat-like face, bird-like wings, scaly fingers, and a thin, long tail with a furry tip. She wears a mask with little bumps for eyebrows, pink cheeks, and a self-moving mouth to copy her mouth movement. She is a tricky ambivert who just wants to see her cousin again. She is best friends with Jackson the cat, and may/may not be lesbian. Oh, and she has one red and one blue eye with plus marks in them.
Jackson Rose Tetris
Jackson is a cat a bit shorter than Evelyn, who is her best friend. She has brown fur, black ears/paws/tailtip, and a white-brown stomach. She also has a black collar and yellow eyes. She is very calm, and definitely much more calm than slightly-crazy-as-heck Evelyn. She loves books, and is a excellent cook. Evelyns cousin was also like a big sister to her.
Fun fact about Evelyn and Jackson: They have been friends since kindergarten.
Currently, I only have the characters, and a small plot. I'll just put it right here..
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Evelyn sellls magic masks, and one day has a dream about Maki and some other creatures. She later stumbles upon a bunny while selling, one from her dream. He quickly buys a special mask and runs off. Afterwards, mysterious reports of sightings of a ghost appear on TV. That night, Evelyn and Jackson have a connected dream, and Maki gives them a offer. He promises that they will have unlimited wealth, fame, and happiness, along with seeing Albino, Evelyns cousin, again. They accept, reluctantly.
You take me down, you build me up
Believer
Believer
P a i n
Let the bullets fly, oh let them rain,
you take me down, you build me up
-Believer by Imagine Dragons
Any way!
I'm working on this Pokemon fanfiction!
And I would like some criticism/feedback!
So, if you'd like to give criticism or feedback, please tell me??
I would post the link here but it might break a rule?
most comic artists i know always sketch out the story with text first; even if you're not gonna write a whole novel, you do really need to summarize the events in each issue. maybe try script format?
@ Waffle
that's exciting! i'd read it and give you some feedback, if you want to send it to me via palpad or PM! :0
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I swallow thickly as I watch her struggle to take in another breath. I silently laugh at myself as my mind goes back a week to when it wasn't because of pain that caused her to lose her breath. She looks up at me with large purple eyes that cause my own breath to catch in the back of my throat.
"Forgive me." I finally manage to whisper.
Even in pain, she gives me a knowing smile before replying back as well as she could. "I a..always do, my Alp..pha." I bow my head low over her chest and let a few silent tears run down my cheeks. Why did the world curse us so? What had we done wrong to land us in this position? Why must I cause my love, my life, my whole reason to live so much pain? My shoulders shook as silent sobs wrack my frame. She must have been able to tell because she takes a hold of my hand and squeezes it.
"Don't c..cry for me A..Alpha. Laugh instead...please?" She pleads with me.
"How can I not cry Nyx? You are the only reason I live and yet by some sick fate, I am the one responsible for robbing you of your life. How can I not cry at that?" I plead with her, my voice thick from my crying.
"By r..remembering the fun t..times we had. By re..remembering how our first k..kiss went. You d..do so by rem..remembering how happy y..you made me and vice versa." She coughs a bit and I flinch as blood runs down from the corner of her mouth.
"A..Alright. If that is what you want." I reply brokenly. We go silent for a few minutes before another cough interrupts the silence. I sigh wishing it didn't have to come to this.
"A..Alpha?"
"Yeah, Nyx?" I respond.
"C..can we kiss o..one more time?"I look up sharply at that. Her eyes were pleading for this one last thing causing me to cave immediately.
"Sure."I lean down toward her face and gently entangle my lips with hers. This was one thing that I would forever miss. We stay like that for a while, our tongues battling for dominance. I smile slightly as even though her mouth was filled with blood I could still make out the taste of strawberries. I moan at the taste before realizing her lips and tongue has stopped moving. I pull back and stare into lifeless eyes, ignoring how her blood stained my lips a dark red. "Nyx?" I ask hoping she, by some miracle, was still alive. The only sound that greeted me was silence. I swallow thickly and sit back to stare at her unmoving corpse. After a few minutes, I pull out my phone and call my boss to tell him the contract was done.
I swallow thickly as I watch her struggle to take in another breath. I silently laugh at myself as my mind goes back a week to when it wasn't because of pain that caused her to lose her breath. She looks up at me with large purple eyes that cause my own breath to catch in the back of my throat.
"Forgive me." I finally manage to whisper.
Even in pain, she gives me a knowing smile before replying back as well as she could. "I a..always do, my Alp..pha." I bow my head low over her chest and let a few silent tears run down my cheeks. Why did the world curse us so? What had we done wrong to land us in this position? Why must I cause my love, my life, my whole reason to live so much pain? My shoulders shook as silent sobs wrack my frame. She must have been able to tell because she takes a hold of my hand and squeezes it.
"Don't c..cry for me A..Alpha. Laugh instead...please?" She pleads with me.
"How can I not cry Nyx? You are the only reason I live and yet by some sick fate, I am the one responsible for robbing you of your life. How can I not cry at that?" I plead with her, my voice thick from my crying.
"By r..remembering the fun t..times we had. By re..remembering how our first k..kiss went. You d..do so by rem..remembering how happy y..you made me and vice versa." She coughs a bit and I flinch as blood runs down from the corner of her mouth.
"A..Alright. If that is what you want." I reply brokenly. We go silent for a few minutes before another cough interrupts the silence. I sigh wishing it didn't have to come to this.
"A..Alpha?"
"Yeah, Nyx?" I respond.
"C..can we kiss o..one more time?"I look up sharply at that. Her eyes were pleading for this one last thing causing me to cave immediately.
"Sure."I lean down toward her face and gently entangle my lips with hers. This was one thing that I would forever miss. We stay like that for a while, our tongues battling for dominance. I smile slightly as even though her mouth was filled with blood I could still make out the taste of strawberries. I moan at the taste before realizing her lips and tongue has stopped moving. I pull back and stare into lifeless eyes, ignoring how her blood stained my lips a dark red. "Nyx?" I ask hoping she, by some miracle, was still alive. The only sound that greeted me was silence. I swallow thickly and sit back to stare at her unmoving corpse. After a few minutes, I pull out my phone and call my boss to tell him the contract was done.
@ Galaxy
if it has themes / emotional weight like that then maybe you shouldn't post it here? :'D uhh you could link it to interested parties separately?