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Posted: Thu, 13/07/2017 18:13 (7 Years ago)
oh! speaking of published authors, another thing that's great about nanowrimo / camp nanowrimo is the advice they send you from published authors + past nano winners. popular authors, too, like James Dashner, Suzanne Collins, etc., which is pretty neat-o.
although, if you're not allowed to access other sites, that isn't very helpful, sorry. :')
Posted: Thu, 13/07/2017 18:17 (7 Years ago)
i mean it's heavily implied in mine that the Lost are LITERALLY THE SPIRITS OF EXPERIMENTS THAT WENT INSANE AND KILLED THEMSELVES AND ARE TRYING TO BRING THEIR FRIENDS WITH THEM
or thats what i tried to mean w/o directly saying it cuz... uh... children
>.>
uh yeah mine is actually pretty dark but...
anyway, i was thinking of making a better, less rushed, more of a prequel version as a fanfic on the PH forums, or at least on a google doc XD
Posted: Fri, 14/07/2017 22:21 (7 Years ago)
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They were sitting on a hill. A soft
breeze touched their skin gently and made the grass around them
move in the rhythm of the night. The stars and the moon were softly
glimmering on the night sky above their heads. They were holding
hands as she snuggled up closer. In this moment, a spark lit up the
night sky and a shooting star crossed. She looked up. "Did you wish
for something?", she asked, and she replied: "Yes, I did."
"What did you wish for?"
"If I tell you, it won't come true."
She raised her head and looked her in the eyes before placing a gentle kiss on her lips. When she pulled back, she blushed a little. "Will that make you tell me your wish?"
She smiled. "I don't need to."
"Why?"
"Because it just came true."
"What did you wish for?"
"If I tell you, it won't come true."
She raised her head and looked her in the eyes before placing a gentle kiss on her lips. When she pulled back, she blushed a little. "Will that make you tell me your wish?"
She smiled. "I don't need to."
"Why?"
"Because it just came true."
First time working without names. First time doing romance. First time actually writing about humans. Also yes, it's girl x girl.
Posted: Fri, 14/07/2017 23:10 (7 Years ago)
Aw! It's adorable! I only noticed a small grammar error.
"She looked up. "Did you wish for something?", she asked, and she replied: "Yes, I did."" All there is is that there should be no comma after "Did you wish for something?"
Really, it's super cute! Nice job, especially for your first time doing romance.
Posted: Fri, 14/07/2017 23:44 (7 Years ago)
no but really id like a bit of feedback and criticism :3
Posted: Fri, 14/07/2017 23:52 (7 Years ago)
but the detail is good
i should really put my story on PH and continue it xD so i can introduce Pyra and make it 10x DARKER >:3
i could also turn some characters into Lost lmao
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 01:23 (7 Years ago)
Nickname?: If you come up with one, don't be afraid to say it!
Favorite Genre Of Writing?: Fantasy, many more to come I feel :0
Other: I'm currently writing a Pokemon fanfic on Quotev, if you're interested, I guess just talk to me about it in here? Idk, but I hope I'll have fun here ^^
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 01:31 (7 Years ago)
It's good! I absolutely love it, it's so adorable :0
@Waffle
Accepted! Welcome to the club!
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 01:34 (7 Years ago)
So cute!
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 01:39 (7 Years ago)
Not very happen how it ended but eeeh
I plan on making a new chapter every weekend
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 01:43 (7 Years ago)
Guess who doesn't know what to write next in AWNROP? Me.
But the guest author at writing camp made a good point, I should try and work on something else and revisit it with fresh eyes. So I'm thinking of making another story to put in the fanfic section just for an experiment.
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 01:46 (7 Years ago)
anD IM STUCK I DONT KNOW ONE OF THE CHARACTERS WELL
(its a fanfic so)
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 13:56 (7 Years ago)
Nickname?:I like sam, but anything goes
Favorite Genre Of Writing?:fantasy, sci-fi, etc.when i feel to i write fake news articles posing as animals, alians, etc.
Other: i also write fanfics.
P.H. Times
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 13:58 (7 Years ago)
I wanna write a pokemon fanfic to do when I'm stuck with AWNROP, so throw some pokemon and names and such here, if you want to help out :3
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 14:02 (7 Years ago)
P.H. Times
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 14:06 (7 Years ago)
I love dark, dragon, and ghost types though, and a normal and a flying would be nice too?? I don't have a set plot for the fanfic right now, so it'll probably be another most-made-as-I-go.
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 14:12 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 14:23 (7 Years ago)
I've got a set of characters you could use!
The Meme Team(tm)
Lauren Amiya - Electric/Poison Salazzle
Leliana "Leli" Demione - Steel/Fairy Umbreon
Oscar Melinko - Dark Liepard
Pierre Koroko - Normal Shiny Furfrou Dandy
The Evil Squad
Pierre (see above)
Mystique Demione - Dark/Psychic Espeon
Yeah everyone but Leli/Lauren are male [biologically]. Also, I can throw the appearances if needed.
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Also, I'm writing a story with said characters. If anyone wants the plot. [It's a work in progress]
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 14:23 (7 Years ago)
That's so perfect for Glitch. All mean and tough but actually a big floofball.
Posted: Sat, 15/07/2017 14:24 (7 Years ago)
Laura enters the room
Glitch's Calm mode activates!