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The_Weaz
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Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 00:01 (7 Years ago)
I just started a new chapter of the Flayer series, this is an excerpt from the newest filler chapter! Do leave some feedback and extra thoughts?

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Kyoto stepped into the prep room, he let out a sigh of relief, while taking off his shirt, a sharp pain flew up his spine. He winced a little, but shook it off. “Good job on the first round guys, let’s keep it up!”
Tanith sighed, she looked at the bruise on his back, it was completely black, “You guys might want to take a look at this. This bruise looks pretty bad.” She took a piece of cold cloth and pressed against it, Kyoto jolted forward but tried his best to stay still. “Are you feeling alright Kyo?”
“Yeah, he just kinda hit a funny spot, I can still move though.” He stretched, and winced again. “I’ll just have to take it easy. That’s all.”
Maine stepped in front of Kyoto, “Keep your guard up, our next opponents will have more skill and speed than what you might expect, watch this match on the TV, and observe.” On the screen, he could see two people, and it looked like they were multiplying. “You see that? Those guys are so fast there’s an after image. They move faster than we can see.”
Kyoto snickered, “Nah, the real ones are…” He stood up slowly, and indicated the two real fighters, “Here and there. Your vision is just a bit slow, I’m bumping up my energy to keep up with them. 53%. That’s all I’m using to watch them right now, it feels like it anyway.”
Luke studied a bit closer, “Yeah he’s not wrong, they’re not Nightwalkers, I think they might be Night Demons. They’re a different class of Nightwalker that’s a tad bit faster, but they don’t pack as much of a punch. That’s the only real downside. If these guys know how to harness their power, they could become hitmen that work for the government.”
Tanith sighed, “If they worked for the Feds they’d be in a world of trouble, the government is becoming more corrupt, power hungry to wipe out any rogue Flayers, criminal organizations like the Lyumas and Hoderns. They’d be better off on the rebel side, fighting the government and organizations. I know rebel doesn’t sound like a good thing, but there’s no real ‘good side’ anymore.”
Maine sighed, “She’s not wrong, Feds aren’t the best ones to be working for, even the Royal Family turned away from politics, they caught a lot of heat from it. And that heat powered the Lyumas, allowing them to hire a group of Mindscapers to attack them last year.”
“We were there for that! Kyoto, you remember right? This really tough guy came up outta nowhere and laid you out, but you took him down using that special form of yours, unstable as it was.” Luke smiled, with a look of triumph on his face. “I remember all that like it was yesterday.”
“So don’t I, only like it was last year, that outburst knocked me out for a few weeks. Trust me, it wasn’t a fun ride.” Kyoto groaned, looking at his hands. “Anyway, how’s that bruise looking? I started to put a little energy behind the healing process, not a whole lot of it however. I don’t want to burn everything up just for a bruise.”
“It’s looking better, but you should still guard that area, watch your backside. Y’know?”
“I’ll try, but I’m more worried about not getting clipped in the skull by one of these guys. Trust me, I value what brain cells I still have. Who knows how many I’ve lost due to this kid sparking me all the time.”

Sub Yes?
Love this smol bean

eunoia
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Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 02:21 (7 Years ago)
@Nishu
M a n c e. You know you want to.

@Honoka
Any ship will be acceptable, so that does include ocs! Write to your heart's delight.

@Catlady
//nervous laughter
Accepted! Glad to have you with us!
Nishinoya
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Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 22:19 (7 Years ago)
//nervous chuckle

I somehow finished my contest entry. I took the "short" in short story too literally, I think. But hey. Who cares. I'm actually kind of happy with how it turned out.

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Dance With Me
Inspiration: [x] | Theme: Comedic Chaos Headcanon x RoMance (pun intended) x Fluff
Characters: Maeline ["Mals", 18, "he/him"] | Lance [17, "he/him"] | Apple [15, "he/him", only mentioned]


Fireworks sparked up lights in the night sky. They were cloaking the air in the most beautiful colors he has ever seen and the distant sound of festival music was making its way from the town up to the hill where they were standing.
Mals couldn't help but look at Lance every now and then. Whenever a firework popped up, Lances blue eyes would sparkle in fascination. While he watched all of the lights with amazement, the blue shining fireworks made him smile in joy. For some reason, Mals' heart skipped a beat every time he saw the pure, joyful smile of the younger boy.
He remembered how Apple kept teasing him about his so-called "crush" on Lance, but Mals was sure he didn't have a crush on him. How could he even have a crush on someone like Lance? That idea was so silly. Or was it?

«Oh, I love that song!», Lance suddenly started up. Mals didn't even pay attention to the music, to him it was just a sound in the background, just like the rustle of leafs in the breeze. But now that Lance had mentioned it, he took notice of the fainted melody that was ringing from the town's festival.
A slight smile sneaked onto Mals' face. «It sounds nice», he said.

Silence. For several seconds, there was no sound but the soft melody. Suddenly, a hand reached out to him, gently took his and turned him around to face Lance. The brown haired boy smiled happily. «Dance with me», he demanded.
Mals felt how his face heated up. Did he just blush? He hoped not. With a deep breath, he tried to calm down a little and tried his best to not let his voice give up on him. «I can't dance», he mumbled.
Lance laughed nervously. «Me neither.»


Anyways, feel free to give any feedback and suggestions on what to do better next time ;v; ?
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Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 23:01 (7 Years ago)
I BARELY FINISHED MY ENTRY!! I MIGHT ADD MORE >w<

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Bucky Barnes x Piper Stark (both Marvel characters) Piper: Female
Bucky: Male
Piper - 98ish (looks mid-twenties due to the soldier serum)
Bucky: 99ish (looks mid-twenties due to-- idek how they kept him so young ewe)

It was an extremely chilly evening, snow falling ever so delicately outside of Piper and Bucky’s house. Christmas was right around the corner, tomorrow morning to be exact, and Bucky couldn’t be any more enthralled than he already was. This was his first Christmas since he was the Winter Soldier, and he was delighted to be spending the holidays with the ones he loved; including his wife, Piper. He was intrigued with all these new Christmas festivities, like Elf on a Shelf. That definitely wasn’t around back in the olden days. There were a plethora of activities that Bucky could partake in, such as Tony’s annual Christmas party, Thor’s Christmas feast up in Asgard, the gift exchanges T’Challa was running back in his home country, Wakanda, and there were many other things Bucky could do; all he wanted to do, however, was spend time with his wife. Bucky was laying on his side on the couch, listening to his wife hum to herself in the kitchen. It was the typical winter and Christmas Eve night, cold and snowy. It wasn’t much of a let down for Piper and Bucky though, because they had spent all day playing in the snow. The cold wasn’t an inconvenience for them at all, they enjoyed the snow and the freezing temperatures; as bizarre as that sounds. Once they returned back in their humble abode, Piper started making hot chocolate, which required a secret recipe that her mom used back when she was little. What…? You want to know the recipe? Well, it wouldn’t be much of a secret if she told you the recipe, now would it? Carrying on… Bucky sat upright on the couch, glancing over his shoulder to examine what Piper was doing in the kitchen. She was stirring the pot of hot chocolate that was boiling over the stove on low heat, making sure all of the cocoa powder dissolved into the milk. Bucky got up, sauntering into the kitchen to bother his wife. He snaked his arms around her waist, resting his chin in the crook of her neck, humming a catchy Christmas tune.
“Whatcha up to, babe?” he smirked as Piper giggled lightly. She swirled the wooden spoon in a circular motion in the pot, reassuring herself that all the chocolate powder was completely dissolved. Bucky released his grip on his wife, and turned around, facing the boombox that stood on top of the microwave. Tony gave that to Piper for her 98th birthday, hoping that she would find a better use of it. She quickly learned how to operate a boombox, after spending countless nights attempting to figure out how it worked. Piper wasn’t all that tech-savvy, like her nephew; but since she was around him quite often she acknowledged the power of technology pretty fast. Bucky scoured through the stacks of CD’s that stood next to the microwave, most of the CD’s were Frank Sinatra albums. Bucky smiled when he found a Frank Sinatra Christmas album, picking it up and blowing off the tiny amount of dust that began collecting on the plastic CD case. Bucky pried the CD case open, slipping the CD into the boombox. He pressed the play button and turned the volume up by turning the dial. Sooner or later, Christmas music was blaring throughout their home. Piper, much to her surprise, jumped and squealed.
“Bucky! You idiot!” she clutched her chest, breathing heavily. Bucky cackled, turning the volume down slightly before his arms were wrapped around his lover’s waist once again. It wasn’t very long before Bucky erupted into song, serenading his wife every single Christmas song that played.
“Did I scare ya? Don’t you love Franky though?” Bucky chuckled, and Piper rolled her eyes,
“Yes, I love him! But I wasn’t expecting you to scare me like that! The hot chocolate is almost ready, could you let go of me so I can pour it into a thermos, please?” Bucky whined, letting go of his wife for the second time tonight, and standing away from her so she could do her thing. Piper turned the heat off on the stove, and reached for a big thermos up in the cupboard. She grabbed one and set it down on the counter, twisting the lid off and setting it to the side. Bucky watched attentively, making sure Piper didn’t burn herself in the process. She cautiously poured the hot chocolate into the thermos, a humongous puff of steam exploding from the pot as she poured the liquid into the container. Once all of the hot chocolate was settled in the thermos, Piper lightly placed the pot in the sink, turning on the cold water to rinse out the pot. Bucky continued to scrutinize his wife’s actions, waiting patiently to envelope his arms around her waist and sing to her. Piper opened the cupboard once again to retrieve the marshmallows from the very top shelf, as she did so, one of her favorite Christmas songs came on, The Christmas Waltz. She dropped the bag of marshmallows on the floor as she heard her song come on. She stopped everything she was doing, and set everything to the side. She wrapped her arms around Bucky’s neck, and he smirked to himself. Finally a moment where she wasn’t busy. His arms snaked around her waist, as he began to sing along to the song,
“Frosted windowpanes, candles gleaming inside… Painted candy canes ooon the tree~ Santa’s on his waaay, he’s filled his sleeeigh… with thiiiings~ Things for you and for me!” Bucky chuckled, and Piper pursed her lips together, hesitating to sing along, but she eventually caved in.
“It’s that time of year, when the wooorld falls in love, every song you hear seems to say ‘Merry Christmas, may your New Year dreams come true…” and they began to sing in unison,
“And this song of mine, in three-quarter time~ wishes you and yours the same thing, too…” they hummed along to the instrumental bit before they started singing again. It all happened so fast, Piper didn’t want this moment to end, not one single bit. She hugged her husband tightly, the smile never leaving her face, and his smirk never faded away. What a wonderful way to spend Christmas Eve together, singing and dancing to Frank Sinatra Christmas songs… Not to mention, drinking delicious homemade hot chocolate by the fireplace. The two would also be sleeping near the tree tonight, to capture the true glee of Christmas Eve. They’d fall asleep watching Christmas movie marathons, cuddled up next to each other, the both of them slowly dozing off into a deep sleep. That’s how they wanted to spend the night together. It would be a critically heartfelt moment for them to share, just appreciating each other’s company.
“It’s that time of year… when the world falls in love, every song you hear, seems to say ‘Merry Christmas, may your New Year dreams come true. And this song of mine in three-quarter time, wishes you and yours the same thing, too~” Bucky lifted his wife up into his arms, Piper’s legs locking around his waist as he spun her around in circles. The two laughed simultaneously, Piper’s grip on him tightening as his grasp slightly loosened. Bucky smiled genuinely, looking up into his wife’s brown pools of color,
“You’re the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met in my entire life.” his voice was nothing but a hushed whisper. The room grew silent, so silent, that you could hear a pin drop. The two stood there, staring deeply into each other’s eyes.
“Merry Christmas, Bucky. I love you so much…” she murmured, before her lips gently pressed against her husband’s, and there were only more of those moments to come as the night progressed.
“I love you too, Piper… Please never leave me.” he mumbled under his breath, hugging her tightly to his chest.

The two spent their night drinking hot chocolate and watching Christmas movies, and ended up falling asleep on the couch. The Christmas tree shone brightly over them, like it was shielding the married couple from harm. Piper stirred in her sleep as she could vaguely hear bells ringing and a man chuckling heartily. She shook it off, thinking it was just a dream, and slipped back into a deep sleep, with her husband by her side.


Could I get some feedback? ovo

Luckylikeit
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Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 23:14 (7 Years ago)
I just realized how few ships I have >.<

Uh my entry might take awhile, if I do it at all. I love writing fluff, but by god I have no ships xD

Credit to Viper
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Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 23:33 (7 Years ago)
@Luckylikespie

You should definitely write about Piper and Bucky x’DD I’m kidding~

Did you guys read my entry?? :3 Do you like it? ono Is there anything I should change??
Nishinoya
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Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 23:37 (7 Years ago)
A petition for someone to make a Cuteboneshipping story for that contest because there's so little good Cuteboneshipping stories out there sobs

Also same question as Honhon. I'd really like some feedback on my entry. ;v;

Aaaalso @Honhon
I'll read that tomorrow, that's a lotta damage text so ;v;
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 00:04 (7 Years ago)
@Nishu
//screams
//scREAMS LOUDER
I don't think you fully understand how beautiful that was. Bravo.

@Honoka
Positively. Adorable. Ahhh, it was so sweet and cute, it perfectly captured the feeling of Christmas, and the Frank Sinatra was a delightful added bonus. All in all, 10/10, I loved it!

Also, I totally wanna write to the prompt, but I have too many ships. I know which one would make Atavan a very happy person plus I need to write more Asriel x Beyond anyways but there's also Destiel, Sabriel, and Mance. Oh, decisions, decisions.
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 02:07 (7 Years ago)
Okay, so, I just want to ask: What's the prompt and where would I find it? ...I apparently can't find a dang thing I'm looking for today.

(Also, sorry for being so inactive!! School just takes up so much time and drains ALL the inspiration and creativity out of me!)
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 13:37 (7 Years ago)
The prompt is up on the original post, under the "contest' tab. There is also the due date and the prizes.

//quietly sets this down
I'm a nerd in the mood for Christmas and cuteness.
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If there was one thing the Alien and the Alein could agree on, it was their love of Christmas.
Asriel didn't celebrate many things on his home planet, as his race was usually much too involved in doing their job as the protectors of the universe to spend time on such a trivial thing. When he was allowed to celebrate something, it was always with his family, and it always resulted in a fight of some sort. Finally, he gave up trying to get his family into a festive spirit when his father shattered the glass music box he'd been making for Amali. However, when he came to - or rather, crashed into - Earth, it opened a whole new realm of possibility for him. But, over time, he grew to enjoy Christmas the most, especially when he ended up living in a house with four others. And it only made it better when his favorite housemate also enjoyed it.
Beyond had also grown up with a lack of festivity in his house. Between keeping his sister safe and keeping his father content, he had no time for the holidays. Even when he was little, they were never important. Instead, he grew up in a household that told him power was everything, and all the other stuff was useless. He did keep track of the days, though. He could remember picking glass shards out of his arm as the grandfather clock announced midnight, officially making it Christmas day. The only present he got was another scar on his chest. So, when he finally escaped his father and ended up in his current home, he started to fully appreciate all of the celebrations, and would take any chance he could get to participate in them.
Despite all their differences, Beyond and Asriel always became closer during holidays, and even their housemates noticed. On Christmas Eve night, they found themselves alone, free to do whatever they wanted in the almost-empty dwelling.
"It's so quiet when the others aren't here." Beyond said, staring up at the skylight in the living room that pretty much took up the whole ceiling. He loved the night sky. It had always been an escape to him, a means of forgetting his current environment, but now it reminded him of Asriel. He'd memorized all the constellations, all the important stars, even the myths behind the names. It was a comfort to him, being able to look up and know a little about what was out there.
"Much quieter." Asriel agreed softly, running his fingers through his boyfriend's pale blond hair. "But don't fall asleep on me." They were laying on the carpet by the brightly-lit Christmas tree, Beyond's head resting on Asriel's chest. Pentatonix's holiday music was playing quietly in the background, and the smell of fresh cookies came from the kitchen. It was perfect.
Beyond playfully shoved him away. "Hey, I don't fall asleep that easily." He said, but Asriel gave a small laugh and replied with, "Yes, you do."
"You ruined the moment, I was going to make some profound statement about the value of life and you were going to be so impressed for once." Beyond huffed, raising himself up on his elbow. "I guess now I'll have to eat all the cookies instead. What a shame."
"And who was the one that helped make those cookies?" Asriel asked, thoroughly amused at this point with his boyfriend's teasing.
"If I recall, you just made the ingredients appear and ate cookie dough." Beyond replied, already knowing where this was going to lead. He was ready.
"Hey, you told me to, and I quote, "stop using your reality shifting for stupid stuff, sit down before you pass out." Although, it wasn't a particularly stupid reason. If I got to eat homemade treats before, I'd totally go unconscious for a few hours." Asriel remarked, and immediately had to roll out of the way of an incoming pillow.
"Race you, then!" Beyond smiled, and was on his feet and in the kitchen before his boyfriend could even process the words fully. By the time Asriel did reach the kitchen, a cookie was already missing.
"That was cheating." He said, reaching for one of the warm, chocolatey clumps. Beyond whacked his hand away.
"It was a fair game. But, I suppose if you make it up to me I'll share." The silver-eyed blond replied, and Asriel snapped his fingers. Two mugs of steaming liquid appeared on the counter.
"Truce?" He asked, but Beyond didn't answer, already taking a sip of his hot chocolate. It was just the way Asriel knew he liked it. Real whipped cream, three marshmallows, and a cinnamon stick. Taking the silence for a yes, he picked up one of the cookies and bit into it. It tasted like heaven, all gooey chocolate and warm insides. He decided he wanted Beyond baking more.
Just as he was about to say so, a clock chimed, signaling midnight.
Taking the mug out of Beyond's hand and setting it down, along with his delicious cookie, he pulled the smaller boy into the living room, stopping when they were centered under the skylight. "Look up." Asriel said, and Beyond looked at him, puzzled. "Just do it."
Complying, he glanced up into the starry sky and his eyes widened in surprise. Little creatures of all shapes and sizes were zipping around in the darkness above, each decorated with orbs of light in a color unique to them. Beyond recognized some from Asriel's notebooks, but they were more breathtaking in person. Feathers, scales, skin, fur, and somewhere in between, it was all there, twirling and dancing in the sky.
"At midnight, as the world turns over to Christmas day, at least one of every sio - special flying animals unknown to humans - takes to the sky to celebrate the ending of Kaeli, a holiday to honor the stars and other planets. Each sio chooses a different hue to symbolize a different galaxy or constellation. Then, they dance together, among the stars, to thank them for their light and their beauty as a whole. I thought you might like to see it since-" Asriel was cut off as Beyond hugged him. For a moment, he stood still, startled. Then, he hugged back.
Before Beyond pulled away, he gave Asriel a kiss on the cheek, and said, "Thank you, Asriel. This is the best Christmas I could have asked for. I love you."
Asriel smiled. "I love you too."


I'd love to hear what you think, since I'm still a bit sketchy on writing romance.
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 14:07 (7 Years ago)
Also just a little suggestion to put the winning story of all contest (previous uncluded) into the first post. :'0 I'm sure people would enjoy reading previous contest winning stories~

@Honhon
I'm not sure if I like that fourth wall break or not ;v; I'm generally not a fan of fourth wall breaks outside of games or TV shows, to be honest;;
I also noticed how often "waist" repeated, but I don't think I am allowed to complain about that as I am often repeating words. :'v
But aside from that I liked it. uvu!

@Inno
aa thanks :0
I tried to write out of Mals' point of view for once because I really wanted Lance to ask Mals to dance with him, but I don't know how to describe Lance's emotions while doing so, rip me
I hope I captured Mals' characteristics at least a little, hhh. why can I actually imagine Mals denying his crush on Lance

Okay so, regarding your story--
//takes the story and runs away with it
Doubled points because hell yes, Pentatonix. just kidding
Okay but that. That story is just straight up cute okay.
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 21:53 (7 Years ago)
@Nishu
Not gonna lie, Mals would totally deny a crush on Lance. He would be too proud to admit something like that. You actually captured his personality perfectly.
Also, thank you! I really tried, and it was a bit difficult trying to find Asriel's love-y side, but I realized I just needed to let him be the sweet nerd he is, hence the 'sio' part. Anyways, I'm glad you liked it.
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 22:09 (7 Years ago)
@Inno
You probably have no idea how glad I am that I got Mals' personality down smh

Okay but I just noticed something I missed out on in my story.
Where the heck is Lance's dragon baby--
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 22:18 (7 Years ago)
@Nishu
Mals' pocket, sleeping, probably. Maybe terrorizing others nearby. Who knows.
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 22:21 (7 Years ago)
@Inno
Imagine the dragon bab just casually sitting in the background and fangirling over Mals' and Lance's attempts to dance

also imagine the two of them to trip and fall onto each other
I have sunken into the ship pit because I ship it
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 22:26 (7 Years ago)
@Nishu
Serious otp question: Who is the one who ends up shirtless and who is the one that whispers "I'm so gay" to themself.
One day, I will actually write Mance. When I think of a good plot. That might take a while.
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 22:29 (7 Years ago)
@Inno
Good job, that question just made me laugh a little too loud.
Also I think Lance would be the one to whisper "I'm so gay" to himself after seeing Mals shirtless. Forgive me.
Okay but yes. Just yes. //waves a Mance flag
Mance or Greenoya. We need more Greenoya in our lives pls&thnk
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 22:31 (7 Years ago)
@Nishu
I'm bad at romance but o n e d a y
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Posted: Sat, 18/11/2017 23:11 (7 Years ago)
@Inno
I'm looking forward to that day tbh
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Posted: Thu, 23/11/2017 15:10 (7 Years ago)
A little bump. I just had a creative streak I guess? Anyways, I ended up writing a total of 3 poems. They're all related to flowers in some way. I don't even know.
I'd like some feedback on them btw.

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Petals
She was a flower
The most beautiful one known to man
But when people grew tired of her beauty
They started tearing off her petals
Not noticing that it was killing her.


The seed
She planted a seed in my heart.
It grew and grew into a beautiful flower called love
But it got out of control
And took over my body.
now the thorns dig into my lungs
Killing me slowly
Letting me die the sweetest death.


Autumn Rain
Love is the summer
Making flowers bloom in the most beautiful colors.
But soon it gets colder,
And the flower withers
And slowly it dies.
"See you next summer" it says
As red raindrops bleed from the sky.