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Forum-Index → Fan Clubs → Writers Club (Always Accepting Authors!)I actually really liked those, tbh. Symbolism with flowers can be incredibly cliche in some cases, but you did well in about that. Overall, 10/10. Enjoyable.
@Everyone
Gentle reminder about the contest-
Does anyone else have a hard time picking POV sometimes? Like, usually I write in present tense with first person, but I've found I write in third and past tense when I'm trying to make an impact or a serious point in my writing. Sometimes, I want to write in first just because I prefer it, but I find parts where I know it could be better in third. Another problem is when I pick first person - or even if I pick third limited - I can't decide which character to do it with.
I'm especially having trouble with what I'm writing currently (if you look back a few pages you might be able to find the thing I put here about Death and Ten - its in the same world as that, with the same characters) just because I love all my characters so much, and each has their own story to tell. I just want to know if anyone else has this problem, or if I'm alone.
Thank you ☆
Also I feel your pain, oof. Though I prefer to write in 3rd person with focus on the feelings and thoughts of one character so that the reader only knows what the character knows, but with additional information or hints and a more detailed description of the surroundings.
Is pre-relationship fluff-stuff fine? Or does it have to be romantic fluff?
If I join, it'll probably be with my 2 OC Larvesta [or Volcarona], because I'm too shy/awkward to write pairings with fandom pairings ^^'
As for POV... No matter what I try and plan in advance, the moment I start writing, it's 2nd POV :x
It's not a matter of having a hard time picking my POV, I seem to have a hard time actually sticking to the POV I chose.
I do better when it's on request, though. I joined a writing contest a while ago and writing that in 3rd person [personal, not omniscient] wasn't as hard a struggle as writing my personal stuff in 3rd person [or simply in not-2nd POV].
@-Hau - I've always been weak for poetry. Nicely written and displayed. The emotions simply jumped from the screen :'(
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I wouldn't mind some pre-relationship fluff :3
Tiny little thing I had an idea for last night. Feedback would be lovely.
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"We meet again, Ten." Cold blue eyes
land on me, their frosty depths like ice ready to break at the
slightest touch. A single, graceful finger points in my direction,
and I fear I've done something wrong for a few terrifying moments.
Then, she speaks again.
"I advise you drop the knife, Death. You know the rules. Draw blood and we're allowed to take a loved one. It would be a real shame to break Ten's skinny little neck before we discover what he is."
I glance behind me just as one of Death's favorite daggers clatters to the ground, the sound of metal on stone almost too loud in the silent plaza. It's as if everyone is holding their breathe, waiting to hear what the Twins are here for. It can't be good.
Rune smiles, using the raised hand to tuck a strand of pure white hair behind her slightly pointed ears. The stone set in her forehead glitters a beautiful crystal blue, a reminder of her fearsome power. "What a sweetheart you are, Death. Willing to sacrifice a kill you've wanted for the past... what, nine years? All for Ten."
"Get to the point, Rune." Death growls, the laughter in his voice from mere minutes ago gone without a trace. She gives a small frown.
"No need for rudeness, now. We simply wanted to stop buy for something we need. A althalki by the name of Ave. You wouldn't happen to-"
"None of your business!" A girl steps forward. Brown hair in a ponytail, streaked with green, blows in the breeze. Chestnut eyes narrowed in anger. Willow.
"And who might you be?" Rune asks, her own eyes narrowing, a spark of quiet anger already smoldering inside them.
"Willow. Willow Talam." Her voice doesn't shake, but there is fear there. I can see it.
"Oh. Well, Willow. Let me introduced you to my sister. Ruin, say hi." Rune grins, a glimpse of insanity passing over her features as she glances at her identical sister, who has remained silent through it all.
Within a second, Ruin is in front of Willow. In another, she is back at Rune's side, holding a green orb in her fist. Before anyone can comprehend the actions, she tightens her grip, and Willow's soul splinters into millions of tiny pieces that dissolve in the weak gray sunlight, leaving behind nothing but a thick goo - like blood - that coats Ruin's fingers. Willow collapses, but no one dares move forward to see if she's still alive.
As Ruin licks the goo off her fingers, Rune's smile turns sweet again. "Now that I have your attention, I'd like to request an althalki named Ave brought to me within the next five minutes, or I start killing people. Hurry up, time is ticking away."
"I advise you drop the knife, Death. You know the rules. Draw blood and we're allowed to take a loved one. It would be a real shame to break Ten's skinny little neck before we discover what he is."
I glance behind me just as one of Death's favorite daggers clatters to the ground, the sound of metal on stone almost too loud in the silent plaza. It's as if everyone is holding their breathe, waiting to hear what the Twins are here for. It can't be good.
Rune smiles, using the raised hand to tuck a strand of pure white hair behind her slightly pointed ears. The stone set in her forehead glitters a beautiful crystal blue, a reminder of her fearsome power. "What a sweetheart you are, Death. Willing to sacrifice a kill you've wanted for the past... what, nine years? All for Ten."
"Get to the point, Rune." Death growls, the laughter in his voice from mere minutes ago gone without a trace. She gives a small frown.
"No need for rudeness, now. We simply wanted to stop buy for something we need. A althalki by the name of Ave. You wouldn't happen to-"
"None of your business!" A girl steps forward. Brown hair in a ponytail, streaked with green, blows in the breeze. Chestnut eyes narrowed in anger. Willow.
"And who might you be?" Rune asks, her own eyes narrowing, a spark of quiet anger already smoldering inside them.
"Willow. Willow Talam." Her voice doesn't shake, but there is fear there. I can see it.
"Oh. Well, Willow. Let me introduced you to my sister. Ruin, say hi." Rune grins, a glimpse of insanity passing over her features as she glances at her identical sister, who has remained silent through it all.
Within a second, Ruin is in front of Willow. In another, she is back at Rune's side, holding a green orb in her fist. Before anyone can comprehend the actions, she tightens her grip, and Willow's soul splinters into millions of tiny pieces that dissolve in the weak gray sunlight, leaving behind nothing but a thick goo - like blood - that coats Ruin's fingers. Willow collapses, but no one dares move forward to see if she's still alive.
As Ruin licks the goo off her fingers, Rune's smile turns sweet again. "Now that I have your attention, I'd like to request an althalki named Ave brought to me within the next five minutes, or I start killing people. Hurry up, time is ticking away."
Thanks ☆ I'm not often writing poetry, but sometimes it helps me express my feelings and thoughts.
Also I would love some ppre-relationship fluff ♡
@Inno
Boi that was great. I only noticed a few errors in spelling, but aside from that, I loved it and I'd want to read more of it, oof;
@everyone
Just out of curiosity, the theme/"aesthetic" of the poetry I sent earlier is the Hanahaki disease ☆ Was it obvious?
Nickname:Flaming Meteorite
Favorite Genre Of Writing: Friction and a bit of random poetry :P
Other: I might have some minor spelling mistakes and my writing may not be much appealing but i am here to have fun and enjoy so hopefully u will all support me :)
Nickname?:Betty, Demon Child, Stabby Child, Bendy
Favorite Genre Of Writing?: Ummm, I like fantasy
Other:
”Mysterious… surprising… and law-defying… Isn’t that right?”
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(something you should know before
reading: these two live in a soulmate AU. Half of the population
has heretochromania soulmates, meaning they have two different
colored eyes: one is their own color, one is their soulmate's eye
color. They other half of the population have doodle soulmates,
where whatever they write or draw on their skin appears on their
soulmate's skin in the same spot. But there is an extremely rare
kind of soulmate, where they cannot see colors. When they touch
their soulmate, they can see color. Alex and Marius are those kinds
of soulmates)
Alex hummed, smiling up at Marius. They had never been too close with the two's different personalities, but he was realizing how funny Marius was. 'You're acting like a love sick girl!' His mind screamed at him, but he pushed it away. It was funny, the way Marius and Alex both had red, white, and blue stripes on their cheeks but neither could really see the colors. Neither knew what the colors looked like. They'd never seen them before.
Their heads whipped to the side as Gwen called to Alex from the stage. She was initiating the firework show to the campers, and she obviously needed help. Alex gave Marius an apologetic glance, scampering away. Daniel sauntered up to Marius, making him flinch. Daniel was creepy to almost everyone. Except for David. Speaking of David, he never usually stays away from his soulmate. Marius glanced up to see David sitting on the side of the stage, fiddling with a lighter.
Alex hopped up onto the stage... Well, more like crawled up onto it by placing his chest on the wooden stage and jumped up to have the momentum to swivel the rest of his body onto the stage. "Why doesn't this have stairs..." He grumbled, face flushing as he heard the teenage camper's laughs. "Shut up, Ariel." He yelled, pointing out the giggling camper. Her face turned as red as her hair, not that Alex could see anything but a grey hue, creating a new ripple of laughter.
"ALRIGHT CAMPERS." Everyone closed their mouths at that. "Okay, everyone go to the soccer field. We are going to set off fireworks up here. The last one will be a large rainbow like thing. I dunno. Anyway, go! With some pep and speed, my little pains!" Alex yelled, watching as campers scampers away. Haha, you can't spell scamper without camper. He watched Logan pick up his little soulmate, putting him on his shoulders. Alex laughed. "Alright, Gwen. Marius is scared of fire, so he's not lighting any and I'm gonna sit with him so it's all you and David."
Gwen opened her mouth to protest, but Alex has already hopped off the stage. Gwen grumbled behind him, and David yelled, "Get him, kiddo!" Alex blushed, growling a bit. He sat next to Marius, who had managed to get Daniel away from him without having to sip his grape kool-aid.
"Yo." Alex said as he sat down on the grass next to the tall boy, running a hand through his hair. Marius gave him a smile, and Alex let out a tiny scream as the first firework went off with a loud boom, not knowing they had started. Marius laughed, shaking his head. Alex glared at him, turning to face the stage again. Marius glanced at him, staring for a minute. He couldn't get over this counselor beside him.
Alex had pretty black hair that he pulled into a black ponytail with a little falling into his face. His eyes were grey to Marius, but he assumed his eyes were that "blue" color. He was almost paper white, with sick grey eye bags from too many sleepless nights. He had a septum piercing, silver and shining in the moonlight. He was gross to most people, too goth and weird, but Marius thought he was gorgeous.
Marius looked away quickly, his face warming. They watched throughout the firework show, waiting for the finale. Alex glanced at Marius, then at his hand. A little touch couldn't hurt. He should have been trying to find his soulmate. He scooted his thin hand across the grass a few inches and placed his little hand on top of Marius's. As the final firework rocketed into the sky, their worlds burst into colors. Greens, blues, reds, purples, and yellows.
Marius gasped as he saw the rainbow firework shoot into the sky. He felt the small hand on his, and he looked over to see Alex. He was still beautiful, especially as his face was lit up in awe and his eyes reflected the fireworks. He turned to Marius, eyes filling with tears. "It's you." Was all he could manage before bursting into tears. Marius tackled him, watching his expression as he fell from his seated position onto his back. His blue eyes - blue - were wide and filled with tears.
Marius wiped a few away before kissing all over his face. "It's you." He kissed his nose. "It's you." He kissed one cheek. "It's you." He kissed the other cheek. "It's you." He kissed his forehead. "It's you!" He kissed him on the lips, cupping the pale boy's cheeks with his hands. Alex sobbed into the kiss, kissing back with a passion. They had found each other. The rested their foreheads together, eyes closed for a moment before both of them began to laugh.
They had found each other in someone they never expected.
Alex hummed, smiling up at Marius. They had never been too close with the two's different personalities, but he was realizing how funny Marius was. 'You're acting like a love sick girl!' His mind screamed at him, but he pushed it away. It was funny, the way Marius and Alex both had red, white, and blue stripes on their cheeks but neither could really see the colors. Neither knew what the colors looked like. They'd never seen them before.
Their heads whipped to the side as Gwen called to Alex from the stage. She was initiating the firework show to the campers, and she obviously needed help. Alex gave Marius an apologetic glance, scampering away. Daniel sauntered up to Marius, making him flinch. Daniel was creepy to almost everyone. Except for David. Speaking of David, he never usually stays away from his soulmate. Marius glanced up to see David sitting on the side of the stage, fiddling with a lighter.
Alex hopped up onto the stage... Well, more like crawled up onto it by placing his chest on the wooden stage and jumped up to have the momentum to swivel the rest of his body onto the stage. "Why doesn't this have stairs..." He grumbled, face flushing as he heard the teenage camper's laughs. "Shut up, Ariel." He yelled, pointing out the giggling camper. Her face turned as red as her hair, not that Alex could see anything but a grey hue, creating a new ripple of laughter.
"ALRIGHT CAMPERS." Everyone closed their mouths at that. "Okay, everyone go to the soccer field. We are going to set off fireworks up here. The last one will be a large rainbow like thing. I dunno. Anyway, go! With some pep and speed, my little pains!" Alex yelled, watching as campers scampers away. Haha, you can't spell scamper without camper. He watched Logan pick up his little soulmate, putting him on his shoulders. Alex laughed. "Alright, Gwen. Marius is scared of fire, so he's not lighting any and I'm gonna sit with him so it's all you and David."
Gwen opened her mouth to protest, but Alex has already hopped off the stage. Gwen grumbled behind him, and David yelled, "Get him, kiddo!" Alex blushed, growling a bit. He sat next to Marius, who had managed to get Daniel away from him without having to sip his grape kool-aid.
"Yo." Alex said as he sat down on the grass next to the tall boy, running a hand through his hair. Marius gave him a smile, and Alex let out a tiny scream as the first firework went off with a loud boom, not knowing they had started. Marius laughed, shaking his head. Alex glared at him, turning to face the stage again. Marius glanced at him, staring for a minute. He couldn't get over this counselor beside him.
Alex had pretty black hair that he pulled into a black ponytail with a little falling into his face. His eyes were grey to Marius, but he assumed his eyes were that "blue" color. He was almost paper white, with sick grey eye bags from too many sleepless nights. He had a septum piercing, silver and shining in the moonlight. He was gross to most people, too goth and weird, but Marius thought he was gorgeous.
Marius looked away quickly, his face warming. They watched throughout the firework show, waiting for the finale. Alex glanced at Marius, then at his hand. A little touch couldn't hurt. He should have been trying to find his soulmate. He scooted his thin hand across the grass a few inches and placed his little hand on top of Marius's. As the final firework rocketed into the sky, their worlds burst into colors. Greens, blues, reds, purples, and yellows.
Marius gasped as he saw the rainbow firework shoot into the sky. He felt the small hand on his, and he looked over to see Alex. He was still beautiful, especially as his face was lit up in awe and his eyes reflected the fireworks. He turned to Marius, eyes filling with tears. "It's you." Was all he could manage before bursting into tears. Marius tackled him, watching his expression as he fell from his seated position onto his back. His blue eyes - blue - were wide and filled with tears.
Marius wiped a few away before kissing all over his face. "It's you." He kissed his nose. "It's you." He kissed one cheek. "It's you." He kissed the other cheek. "It's you." He kissed his forehead. "It's you!" He kissed him on the lips, cupping the pale boy's cheeks with his hands. Alex sobbed into the kiss, kissing back with a passion. They had found each other. The rested their foreheads together, eyes closed for a moment before both of them began to laugh.
They had found each other in someone they never expected.
Also, @Hau I got the theme pretty quickly, so I think it's clear but not something that's shoved in your face. It's nice!!
Nicknames: Wolf, but feel free to call me whatever
Favorite genre of writing: Fantasy and romance
Other: currently I type on an android 'smarttab' tablet, which like a cell phone has autocorrect that goes a bit crazy also my grammer may not always be the best.
Nickname?:I go by Aura
Favorite Genre Of Writing?:Fantasy
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Also, many many many apologies, I've had quite the busy and stressful week and somehow got unsubscribed to this thread. The date for the end of the contest has been moved to December 24th to allow more entries, so I suggest you check it out!
Um... When I DO finish it, would it be okay if I shared it here?
I'm just gonna assume that it would be okay uvu)b Since I pretty much also wrote a short story about a ship in an old-ish and kinda dead RP [while the ship was planned, but we never got far enough into the RP to actually make it a thing]. So yeah, I'd say it's fine.
@everyone
Decided not to post it publicly. If you'd like to read it, you can contact me, anyways, I'll only show you if I really trust you.