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The Creative Corner (Art Club)! [Open!]
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Currently working on an inked [no coloring ;w; "] Happy Mask Salesman~
aaa that looks so nice!! but i think the fingers on the hand should be fixed, as they are uneven and don't follow basic anatomy ;v;/
@jamison
hmm tbh, that anatomy is on point. the only thing i see wrong in the pic is the hair that goes onto the other side. it seems a bit thick and seems uneven from the rest of the hair.
@all
i drew two small pokemon fusions today : DD
the second one is actually one i'm giving away to artists that are willing to take good care of it (as in taking good care i mean: drawing it occasionally, giving it basic info, lovin' it, etc.).
if you're interested, please palpad me!! i want to give it a good home.
EDIT: The oc has been adopted by ThtGayGuy! it is now taken~ c :
Aaw thats so cute! I dont have any critique since i dont deal with humans
@Jamison
Same with lance,i cant critique you
@Snow
Those are cute! ^^
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Comm for someone
I'll try to read everything today when I get time.
I really wanna be more active on here again, So I'll try to post comments and critiques whenever I can ^^
@lance
aaaaaa that is so cute !! <3
Your style is really adorable and ohmylorD that hair style/shading is gorgeous
@Jamison
Ooooh I love it!! I haven't seen BOTW yet, but I know about it a little and I think you drew link very well! One thing that does bug me a tinyyyyy bit is the intensity of the blush? But you are a much better artist than me so I can't say much (':
@-Snow
OoOOOoh they are adorable!! I actually love the designs sm !! I personally prefer simpler designs and I think you really pulled that off well. Only thing I'd change, design wise for the future, is maybe make the second one's base color I tiny bit darker or change some of the outline colors so it's easier to see the details.
@Foxly
IM A SUCKER FOR TINY CUTE PIXELS JEEZ THAT IS PERFect omg
I'd also like to put out something I did yesterday of one of my characters and I would 100% love criticism on it. Please note that I realize the hands don't look right uwu
It's actually part of this specific character's design to have scarf-like (long and flowy?) hands,
but I also know I have no idea how to really draw hands sO
Thanks!
Also as for critique,i suggest put the hands closer to the arm,unless theyre really long/big
Also we should do a collab sometimee
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Also quik pixel of Lockette
Ooooooh yeah, didn't think about that!! That character does have fairly long arms, but I do realize I tend to exaggerate it. I tend to always mess up my arms anatomy wise, so thanks for pointing it out! I'd also love to collab if you wanna pal-pad me or something? 0:
Also that pixel is stunnning!!!!! Your pixels are so cute oml 0:
everything looks fine except the eyes are too close to the front, and the ears are too far back.
Try using reference pictures for anatomy ^^
Also, I'm not ignoring everyone - I'm just really bad at giving advise/critic, so I just .. don't. :'D I've seen a lot of awesome art in this thread though, you guys are all so talented, ahh. ; w;
.gif above ©Haikyuu!! official anime
aaaAAHHH THATS SO PRECIOUS ;w;
I honestly can't think of anything really wrong with it ;w;
Omgg that's so cute and yet so beautiful *v*
I love how the hair and the face looks!
It's perfect <3
@Foxly
That's also very cute too :0
Is the character yours?
It looks a bit too overloaded ;w;
@ender
Nice! I like the expression and the withe dots
I rquest practicing hands
You all are amazing artists ;w;!
she left
i'm broken
4/5/17
i miss her
Yep,its mine
It probs looks overloaded since its an alolan raichu,bewear and sylveon fusion
I like it! But yeah, I think the mouth is a little low.
@Jamison
Some of the lines you added look great, love that, but the coloring isn't very well shaded and the blush kinda just looks like a sunburn--but I blame that on markers (I have markers when coloring they are soooo uneven)
@Snow
Love the adoptables, hope @ThtGayGuy takes good care of it ^^
@Foxly
THAT IS SO ADORABLE I CAN'T-
@ender
Don't worry, I can't draw fingers either, I stick to paws lol everything else looks good though
@Liirah
Ohhhh that is adorable, love the shading you did on it <3
I am still very new to shading tbh, and usually most of what I do is left in a rough sketch, so god do I envy you guys, it all looks amazing :D
Credit to Viper
I know I didn't shade with the markers, its my style ;w;
A quick little PSA about my style:
If I add the shading tick lines in pen I don't shade with coloring ;w;