@TGG
same as what furret said, as well as the tail, it seems to swell at
the end before thinning out again? it's a bit off, but otherwise
it's pretty good!
still looking for criticism on my
indominus piece, I'm trying really hard to make it as close to
perfect as possible
I never change this
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@Tech, I don't have much for that piece, as I think it looks pretty
dandy, but if anything - the back leg's foot.. the one of the far
side - it seems a bit flat to me? Like, a bit too flat.
That & I think the front hands are a bit messy & could use a bit of
cleaning up. ^^
i don't have enough time to go through all the stuff i missed rn,
so is it okay if i just comment on the most recent art? ;; pls
forgive
@technology
holy hecc, that looks super nice so far!
i don't have any critique since i'm not an expert when it comes to
anatomy so rip
@kit
smol and pink, i lov
@thtgayguy
aaa that's super cute! the most noticeable thing is what furret
said: where the head-wing-things are, the other one should be kinda
visible too
also, the tail thickness seems kinda odd, but i can't figure out
exactly why
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@Tech
The Indominus looks pretty good, except the left foot seems off,
but it may be just the angle of the picture. I don't know if you
decided to call it finished, but more shading could be nice and
maybe it can help define the Rex's skin...?Im terrible at
critiquing...
@Everyone
I drew this today...It's creeped some people out, so I'm just going
to put it in spoilers. There's no blood! but I don't want to upset
anyone. It's symbolic piece, but I'll just let you guys decide what
it symbolizes for you. Critiques are welcome.
(I just took yours & edited it a bit to show what I mean - sorry if
that's a problem, if it is, let me know and I can remove this!
^^)
But I added in the other wing & made the other one longer, & what
Tech said about the tail is right, too, you have it really thinning
out in the middle, then getting larger again - so I think you
should make the middle more thick & farther down the tail more
slim, as shown ^^ I also added in the shading I mentioned. ~