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Posted: Thu, 03/05/2018 04:42 (6 Years ago)
I made a snake from a story I'm writing
It needed more animals
anyway...
Posted: Thu, 07/06/2018 23:27 (6 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 09/06/2018 12:53 (6 Years ago)
@Fawnstar: Oh, nice! I really like that design >.>
@owob: Aww!! These are so adorable ;-; No critiques ^^ I really love your art style ;-;
Umm so I'll just throw some art in here but I can't really put them all in because I've done a lot of art since my last post pfff, sorry if the images are massive, resizing really doesn't seem to work on PH :p
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Gave lineless a go,
thoughts?
Tried a bit of a different shading style, I'm not actually a massive fan of the art as a whole though
I just really like this one :p
Tried a chibi style, I'm pretty pleased with this one ^^
Aaaahhh hecc I just really love this one ;-;
Tried a bit of a different shading style, I'm not actually a massive fan of the art as a whole though
I just really like this one :p
Tried a chibi style, I'm pretty pleased with this one ^^
Aaaahhh hecc I just really love this one ;-;
Posted: Tue, 12/06/2018 08:36 (6 Years ago)
@owob aaA YOUR ART IMPROVED SO MUCH WHAT THE HECK!!!!!!!
ng everything's so soft and cute ;w;
@eifie aaa your drawings are so cute! but there's still room for improvement ;'0
recent!!
i did this for the free myo event of the group lavalores!
go get yours before it closes! :'0
Posted: Tue, 12/06/2018 13:04 (6 Years ago)
@owob - Can I just say this is like the CUTEST this ever? Some of the shading could still use some work, but otherwise your stuff is super amazing!!
@-Eifie - The lineless one isn't half bad, though it is very.. misshapen? Like the eyes aren't very round and the head is quite wobbly, if you got to fix that I think it would look pretty cool. The rest of your stuff is really nice, though I'm not a big fan of the super textured brush you use for the lines, I think if you toned it down slightly it would look overall better. Or maybe add some texture to the fill ins/colour as well so the lines are more in tune with the rest of the drawing. But that's only a suggestion!
@straight - Ah, yes, so very pretty! I really like the clothes and the shoes and the colours! Though, shouldn't the eyes be white? That's just a tiny nitpick tho. Oh, and I think the lava might be a bit overcrowded? Though I imagine it is quite hard to do it when working in pixels, so kudos to you for pulling off such a great job~
And now for my own thing, since I do have something to show as well!
Recently, I finished a commission for Koushi of their character Hawk:
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This one was sure challenging, all the greenery was a nightmare to make and I really failed at the water, but at least I tried my best! Crits would be super helpful~
And even more recently, I did my part of the art trade I have with Liffy! It features her beautiful boy Thornuz:
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Liffy is a really amazing person, so I wanted to make something amazing for her. How do you guys think I did? It was my first time drawing lightning and stuff, so crits once again would be really nice.
Posted: Tue, 12/06/2018 17:22 (6 Years ago)
@Giltine: Oof, yeah, I was struggling a bit with drawing the shape of it ;-; Oh, ok, I'll give that a go o.o And aahhhh they all look gorgeous ;-; Not really anything to say, but if I really had to nitpick then I would say that the way the river bank is shaped is a little oddly to me? As in a little angular? Idk though, probably me being weird :p And no critiques on the other one, it's perfect <3
Posted: Tue, 12/06/2018 17:30 (6 Years ago)
Username:Noivernhunter34
Thank you!
Just looked at everyone else's art, and compared to mine mine's poop.
Posted: Tue, 12/06/2018 18:06 (6 Years ago)
and the 'lava' was a bit hard orz i literally had no idea of what i was doing
@eifie oof i didn't wanna be mean so i just became indirect :"3
so woops a big critique thing now
this is basically me nitpicking so pls disregard if you dont wanna see me being harsh aCK
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well for the first piece i would say
that i like the lineless style!!
it's just that it looks shaky ;w; maybe try using a stabilizer / zooming in to see the shaky lines? :0
the shading is at the right places but since you're shading you also gotta define where the nose and the cheeks are, otherwise if its in 3d it'd just be flat :") (the 3d thing is just a perspective i try to see to help me be better at anatomy :0)
for the second one i really like the face! the colors are nice too but the thing that's bothering me are the arms(?) and the tail :'0 i like the concept of making the chingling's 'bow' the limbs though! the part that isn't looking too good is how you folded them, and it makes it look stiff :'/ maybe try going to a more flowy curve for the right (its right) one and give a little bit more space to the left one and maybe make creases by the fold? for the tail its alright but it looks like its coming from behind its foot rather than its butt ; w ;
for the third one im loving the colors!!!! the only thing i see there are the arms :0
the pose is great but the left (its left) arm looks too close to the chest! i suggest moving it a little bit to the right
aAA I love this girl,,,, im only going to say that you should fix the bangs @_@
maybe make them in a clutter than just random lines that don't fit too well with the picture :")
AND FOR THE LAST ONE I STILL LOVE YOUR DRAWING CHEEKS AAAAA
I love how you blurred out the thinking bubble too :"))
it's just that it looks shaky ;w; maybe try using a stabilizer / zooming in to see the shaky lines? :0
the shading is at the right places but since you're shading you also gotta define where the nose and the cheeks are, otherwise if its in 3d it'd just be flat :") (the 3d thing is just a perspective i try to see to help me be better at anatomy :0)
for the second one i really like the face! the colors are nice too but the thing that's bothering me are the arms(?) and the tail :'0 i like the concept of making the chingling's 'bow' the limbs though! the part that isn't looking too good is how you folded them, and it makes it look stiff :'/ maybe try going to a more flowy curve for the right (its right) one and give a little bit more space to the left one and maybe make creases by the fold? for the tail its alright but it looks like its coming from behind its foot rather than its butt ; w ;
for the third one im loving the colors!!!! the only thing i see there are the arms :0
the pose is great but the left (its left) arm looks too close to the chest! i suggest moving it a little bit to the right
aAA I love this girl,,,, im only going to say that you should fix the bangs @_@
maybe make them in a clutter than just random lines that don't fit too well with the picture :")
AND FOR THE LAST ONE I STILL LOVE YOUR DRAWING CHEEKS AAAAA
I love how you blurred out the thinking bubble too :"))
gosh this is so long but i HOPE YOU FIND THIS HELPFUL IN A WAY?????
AND ALSO IF ITS YOUR STYLE CHOICE THEN DONT WORRY!!!!! you can disregard all of this >:"D
also i have no place to judge you in any way, these are just my opinions ;w;
this is probably too boring to read so summarize:
just try to work on your anatomy and your flow of lines! the shading could use a little work too :>
and remember that referencing is also helpful! it can help you a lot with anatomy ;0
Posted: Tue, 12/06/2018 19:32 (6 Years ago)
Just going to reply to a few of those >.< You don't have to read this because it's also long and boring, you can just completely ignore it lmao xD Also, don't worry about being harsh! I ask for critiques so I can improve, not for sweet talk ^^ Improvement is a lot more important than compliments to me, even though that's not the case for everyone ^^
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1) Oof yeah that was bothering me as
well >.< For some reason I can't draw with thicc lines on my
computer :S So I'll probably try that on my phone later on and see
if it's better there. And the shading tips are super helpful, thank
you!
2) 100% agree with you on that one, anatomy is something I really struggle with and it was particularly bad on that one I think ;-;
3) Hmm, ok! I did think there was something odd on that one >.>
4) Oof yeah hair is a paaiinn xD Thanks for that, that helps ^^
5) Aaahhh thank you so much ;-; It was so much fun as well aaahh ;-;
Summary) Anatomy I was aware of, and I think I'm very slowly making progress on that pfff xD Lines, thank you! I'll definitely keep that in mind ^^ I do use references, but they don't seem to help with anatomy or poses much for some reason ;-; Maybe I'm looking for the wrong things or something? Idk :p
2) 100% agree with you on that one, anatomy is something I really struggle with and it was particularly bad on that one I think ;-;
3) Hmm, ok! I did think there was something odd on that one >.>
4) Oof yeah hair is a paaiinn xD Thanks for that, that helps ^^
5) Aaahhh thank you so much ;-; It was so much fun as well aaahh ;-;
Summary) Anatomy I was aware of, and I think I'm very slowly making progress on that pfff xD Lines, thank you! I'll definitely keep that in mind ^^ I do use references, but they don't seem to help with anatomy or poses much for some reason ;-; Maybe I'm looking for the wrong things or something? Idk :p
Posted: Thu, 14/06/2018 14:45 (6 Years ago)
@owob your art is always so so cute!! i really love the roundness and soft colours of your drawings!!
@-Eifie so cuuute!! straight kind of covered everything, but yes!! very very cute!!
@straight aaa I love her!! I love her eyes!! And the shading on the fabric is really nice!!
@Giltine I've already sobbed my love at you hehe <3 Aaa you did an amazing job of the lightning!! I looove the impact of the cracks and aaa!! Your attention to detail is amazing ;0;
Haven't been able to draw so much since I haven't been too well, then I had exams (cries)
But I've been really struggling with my art being 'enough' and I've felt really bad about posting things so I'm trying to get over that!! So please critique me!!
Posted: Thu, 14/06/2018 15:32 (6 Years ago)
Sorry this has been inactive ya'll but life has gotten me pretty busy between my new part time job, graduating high school and my boyfriend etc. I'm not super active on the site in general but I know this needs an update and I'll try to get some free time to work on it. :3
Posted: Sat, 16/06/2018 15:19 (6 Years ago)
@Nico: Don't worry about it! Real life should always have the priority, don't worry yourself about it too much <3
Got some more bits of art to throw in here, welp :p Critiques please?
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I kind of hate this one, not sure why :p
Experimented with shading a little here
Hecc I'm so proud of these ;-;
Experimented with shading a little here
Hecc I'm so proud of these ;-;
Posted: Sat, 16/06/2018 16:48 (6 Years ago)
Username: Animela
Thank you!
Art Examples
↬ Digital
↬ Pixel / Animation
↬ Chibis
Posted: Sun, 15/07/2018 21:22 (6 Years ago)
ee teach me ur ways,,
@eifie
ur line art gives me life hHH
but yes ur art style is v cute i lov,
@all h
rip my furry instincts
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a design i made for rhoobab!!
my boi,,
a souda sketch i made bc i love this man,
thanks thats all i have now i go back to death
Posted: Tue, 17/07/2018 14:50 (6 Years ago)
@Koushi - *sheds a tear* it's all beautiful
@Elfie - For the Chandelure / Zoroark fusion, the (character's) right arm is a lot bulkier than the other, it could be a bit more even, especially because the (character's) left arm is the one that should be mostly in view!
For Yao_Wang
Posted: Tue, 17/07/2018 15:49 (6 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 17/07/2018 16:13 (6 Years ago)
@-Nico: Ah, thank you! That helps ^^ And that's such a cute design aaaa ;-;
@Noivernhunter34: Oooohh what a cool design! Nicely written Pokedex entry too! Well thought through and put together, well done!
I'll post some art later, I'm lazy rn though lmao
Posted: Tue, 17/07/2018 21:08 (6 Years ago)
i love,, ur art style it's so clean
@nico:
that's super cute owo
@noivern:
that's a nice redesign :0
okAY ive. died on this thread but like. here's some stuff im proud of:
Posted: Wed, 18/07/2018 06:32 (6 Years ago)
I totally forgot about this thing, oh my.
@Animela
Welcome to the club! =D
@Xylophone
Ohh, I love the colors of the first one - so soft and pastel-y!! ♥
@Noivernhunter34
Not a huge fan of Bruxish in general, but I love how well thought out the whole concept is - including its typing and dex entry! =D
@Lancer
Ahh, I love your art! >o<
I especially love the last piece, so soft and cute. ; w;
But I think the background of the first piece is a little too dark/dominant? Like, it kind of distracts the attention from the character in the foreground imho. Still, a super nice piece!
I didn't do much over the last few months, nothing worth talking about anyway, but it's Art Fight time, so I've been somewhat active over there the last few weeks.
I still have 6 attacks to revenge (rip me), so I'll have more to post soon!
.gif above ©Haikyuu!! official anime
Posted: Wed, 18/07/2018 07:03 (6 Years ago)
@Lancer Wow!Your art is amazing!
Made a black and white Charmander and forgot to color the eyes...