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The Everything Arts Club (Accepting!)

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Emil_
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 19:09 (8 Years ago)
@Fox
I can, I need some art to do-
EDIT: digitally, bc I got my art tablet taken lol

@Panta
you could try making the body a bit bigger? the head is fairly large-

@Lunala
maybe try changing the shading a bit? It just looks odd to me,
I don't know how I'm such a hypocrite omg
I never change this

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gelatin
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 19:13 (8 Years ago)
@aki bab

it looks amazing :'0
i love the way you do poses, how do you come up with them ?
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wipuu

how does one human anatomy
[critiques appreciated, but not needed <3]
shuleis
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 19:14 (8 Years ago)
@liz

those hands tho
like h o w
!! i use she/ne !!

mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]

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gelatin
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 19:15 (8 Years ago)
@ panta

use references !! ' v ')/
when in doubt, use your own hands/body parts :>
shuleis
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 19:17 (8 Years ago)
@liz

got it ! i should really start using references more h eck
!! i use she/ne !!

mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]

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Jesen
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 19:18 (8 Years ago)
Tbh I just throw some lines and it looks like it has a pose xD
I should use references too but nah


Also Lizzu bab w h oa h look at those hands
So good
Good stuff //okay hand emoji
*constellation*
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 19:20 (8 Years ago)
@Lizz

//praises

h o w d o y o u d o t ha t
Kou-
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 20:15 (8 Years ago)
@Aki
Everything's fine, but the.. spine?? Maybe it's supposed to be so distorted, I don't know :^)

@Lizz
Teach me how to hand and hair lmao, I cannot

And yep, I agree there. It was kind of easier to do the lineart with pixel-y brush, since I do everything on a laptop, ripp. I'll try to do better lines over it next time, probably with a pen or some rough, coal-like brush. Doing realistic shadows is so hard with a mouse, haha. Everything is hard with a mouse :'D
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gelatin
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 20:19 (8 Years ago)
@ aki

thank you !! >w<
i dunno,, it still looks off to me :'D

@SylveonGirl23

thank you !! <3

@ lunala

what kind of computer do you have ?
if you have some sort of windows computer i can get you sai for free !!
Kou-
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 20:21 (8 Years ago)
@Lizz
Some windows, yes. If you're asking about it's correct model name, dunno about that, sadly.
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Jesen
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 20:24 (8 Years ago)
Yep that is right :^) body horror is my thing so yes
The spine is disorded because skinny demon thing \o/
gelatin
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 20:26 (8 Years ago)
@ lunala

here !!

sai has a really helpful linework tool :>
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and a mini update \o/
Kou-
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 20:33 (8 Years ago)
@Lizz
Thankie, it looks pretty decent so far~
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moriya
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 23:45 (8 Years ago)


Quick doodle
Need critique plzz



shuleis
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Posted: Mon, 17/04/2017 23:56 (8 Years ago)
@foxly

the lines could be sharper or be sharpened at the ends, but thats all I have to say about this piece. looks good otherwise !
!! i use she/ne !!

mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]

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Snow-chan
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 01:34 (8 Years ago)
@lizzu
ahhh that's so kyoot ;v; the hands are so perfect! even tho that's still a wip, good job c :

@foxly
hmm i think you need to work a bit on coloring :o the coloring is a bit more hard than the lineart, which is more soft.

@all
i drew my first pixel today : D

here's the pixel i drew. she's an oc of mine.
TheShiny_Ninetales
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 01:38 (8 Years ago)
Hey Guys I need a recap..... So, What'd I Miss? //shot


hamilton trash
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yeah Daveed Diggs is my soul don't judge-


My trash 4 me


Trash for others~



I also made some animatics woo
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 02:14 (8 Years ago)
@foxly
looks good!
i don't have any critique, i think everybody else said everything i thought of

@snow
mmMMM that's a noice pixel

@kitsu
can't give you a recap bc i was gone for a week
those are some A+ arts

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Emil_
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 02:35 (8 Years ago)
@Snow
mm that's a great pixel better than I can ever do

@Kitsu
you missed a lot.
Drama,
a disappearance of the art from me
and...
art. lot's of art.
and constructive criticism.
that's some nice art, and I want to see the animatics- although the legs seem like they're sticks?

@Foxly
I believe there should be varied line lengths, it's good otherwise

@Lizzu
that's a great wip-
and I really agree on what you said earlier about the criticism.
I never change this

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gelatin
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 14:14 (8 Years ago)
@ foxly

i think the back of the dog could be curved outwards a little more near the neck.
[i'm not really sure how to explain it, just think about what the dog would look like if it were to stand up, the back would curve in a little too much.]
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and a process gif ovo

1// sketching
2// lineart
3// base colors
4// shading + light
5// extra effects
6// touch ups in photoshop [color balance, hue + blur effect]