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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 15:19 (8 Years ago)
The drawing could use some varying in line thickness. Apart from that, I'd make everything either blurry or sharp, while your lineart is blurry and coloring sharp. Apart from that, here goes anatomy. The lower lineout of it's left arm is missing (the thin black line on the pic below was added by me). About the angle of view, either it's right leg should be put a little backwards, or the other eye should be visible. You maybe could have rotated the already drawn eye towards the viewer's left, too? It'd look a little more realistic. Since you added shading to one leg and ear, I'd give it to everything else as well, including lightning (if you go for fixing, do not forget to add lighting to it's eyes!). I also hope you're not considering I'm overreacting - I just love the proportions and anatomy to be as good and clean as possible!
@Kitsu
That's a lot of art! Do you want critiques? I noticed a few things that need changing!
@Snow
Again, dunno if you want to hear (since I consider that critique, too?), but I find the pixel really impressive! I wouldn't change anything, as it's fine as it is!! Some nice shading and you can consider it a perfect start!
@Lizz
Very nice, the colours match perfectly and it's overly pleasant to the eye. Awesome job! Oh, right, I wanted to ask - do you use the blur brush to smoothen shading & lighting, or is there an option to automatically blend and smoothen the colours? :o
//little right arm deserves a rest now uwu, it's hard to write with one only
Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 15:37 (8 Years ago)
@foxly
yee what everyone else is saying, your lines kinda seem,, out of balance?
@lizzu omg thats amazing,,
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when kit tries new things she fails.tm
bonus bs i was in a pretty bad mood
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 15:48 (8 Years ago)
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1st piece- The (to viewer) right eye's
position is a little awkward, while the face is too stretched
overall. I'd add a little skin colour beneath the mouth, as well.
His/their's (to viewer) left wrist and fingers could use a
different look. On the other hand, the thumb is strange. His..
well, dunno how to call that on a children site?? Between the legs
is too big, compared to 2nd piece. Nooow, onward to next,
phew--
2nd piece- Eyes, nose and ears are clearly too big. Left wrist's finger that's vertical to thumb is almost as broken, and both thumbs are too short and flat. Legs are also too short and fat (I suppose he's/they're slim?).
3rd- I'd only fix lightning and shading here
next 2- saaaame as 3rd
6th- The face is too blocky, and neck is too fat. Thingie between the legs is also too expressed, considering females' don't have it that big.
7th- again, blocky face and too big eyes this time. The hair is too much of a traight line, the accessory's lines shouldn't vary as it doesn't seem to be a stretchy material. Also, the line here looks like it's seperated. The blue shows how the tie goes underneath the purple part.
8th- proportions should be same; ears are diff, eyes go a little out of the way etc.
9th- the liquid looks strange, as it's solid cotton or something
10th &11th- proportions and shading/lighting again
2nd piece- Eyes, nose and ears are clearly too big. Left wrist's finger that's vertical to thumb is almost as broken, and both thumbs are too short and flat. Legs are also too short and fat (I suppose he's/they're slim?).
3rd- I'd only fix lightning and shading here
next 2- saaaame as 3rd
6th- The face is too blocky, and neck is too fat. Thingie between the legs is also too expressed, considering females' don't have it that big.
7th- again, blocky face and too big eyes this time. The hair is too much of a traight line, the accessory's lines shouldn't vary as it doesn't seem to be a stretchy material. Also, the line here looks like it's seperated. The blue shows how the tie goes underneath the purple part.
8th- proportions should be same; ears are diff, eyes go a little out of the way etc.
9th- the liquid looks strange, as it's solid cotton or something
10th &11th- proportions and shading/lighting again
The mistakes are mostly the same, sooo
@Nerdy
Not bad for an 'experiment', but the body needs some more lighting in my opinion, not only hair, black fur, eye and flower. I'd personally draw the other eye.
Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 15:51 (8 Years ago)
I use the "brush" and "water 9" brushed to blend :>
[assuming of course, you're using sai]
@ kut
I love how you used the colors :3c
Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 19:07 (8 Years ago)
//cries//
This is awesome, oml. teach me please ;w; I love the eye. It looks just so... hhh awesome.
While the tail is a bit poorly colored/shaded/w-ever... You get the point, right? ;w;
@everybody
I made two avi-icons that I might animate or use as matching avi with someone. While I'm definitely going to choose the darker one.
Also this was made without any helping lines and just the basic tools of MS paint. Meaning I only used the shape tools etc.
Any critique?
Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 19:20 (8 Years ago)
I really love how you've done the fur! The ear closer to the viewer seems a little thin, although it could be just me?
Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 19:30 (8 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 21:12 (8 Years ago)
makin something with my Fursona and my Pokesona-
opinions ?
mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 21:21 (8 Years ago)
Impressive! How do you anthro, oh my lord ouo I just.. can't, oops
Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 21:23 (8 Years ago)
thanks! and its literally just a human body with a animal head(with some adjustments, of course) and a tail if needed XD
mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]
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Posted: Tue, 18/04/2017 21:55 (8 Years ago)
Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 20:59 (8 Years ago)
[sorry if i don't respond]
here's an old sketch of mine
Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 21:04 (8 Years ago)
You always draw dragons cool ;u ;
and woo
now I won't double post
here is a sketch of my character...been like 7-8 months since I drew him
Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 21:05 (8 Years ago)
that looks amazing !! :0 theres so much detail that even I couldn't do- good job !!
@Aki
is he like, a fusion or something ? :0
mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]
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Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 21:07 (8 Years ago)
Dragonair x Vaporeon
Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 21:31 (8 Years ago)
that looks extremely detailed :o
@akiruru
holy god, the anatomy is amazing!! i really like the sketch, nice job! ;v;/
@all
i drew a lil icon of my oc but im not sure if i should use it aha
Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 21:57 (8 Years ago)
I say you should use it
@Derg
aaa I wish I had your skills-
the anatomy is amazing (even if it is just a headshot) as well as the detail
@Aki
more great anatomy
I like the pose and the character in general.
@All
oh boi, one of the first drawings I post on here in a while and it's eddsworld. I am trash.
it's a wip, oh wow so unexpected
I'd like some criticism on it so far, thank you :'>
and just so you know, YES, I did use circle tool for the basic sketch of the head, but it was just so I could do the proportions as well as I could-
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Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 22:46 (8 Years ago)
thats pretty good :0
@all
finished the sketch i did !(made it into a full drawing h eck)
Objection !
mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]
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Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 22:48 (8 Years ago)
Holy.mother.of.mew.dasdfsfasfadsfads. THAT IS AMAZING!
Love the design and way the body is curved! .o. So much detail too holy crap. ;o;
@Snow
I'd use it, it's super adorable! Love it! <3
@Techn
Eddsworld. Yes. HNNNNNNN- *rolls away to draw yaoi pairings* lol jk but super cool so far! ^^
@Panta
Ooo- really cool designs! Love the anthro and the cute lil Espeon!. .o.
@Everyone
Anyone here with dA points want some pixel drawings? I want/need this one adopt I found so badly but it's 300 points and I'm broke asf.
Posted: Wed, 19/04/2017 22:49 (8 Years ago)
anyway
i made a pixel of my child for a forum thread i'm gonna work on
does it look okay?
i don't make pixel art / sprites very often so eh
i like it though
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