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YuLeTiDe
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 00:47 (6 Years ago)
I'lll most likely post my pic + poem today or tommorow

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Lancer
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 01:07 (6 Years ago)
mine is a few pages back
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 03:22 (6 Years ago)
poem contest entry!

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They all do it better than me.
Its as if I was inside a dome.
But, Im actually sitting besides a tree.
Waiting for it to come.
It will be here anytime soon.
Until then, I will look at the moon.


I kinda channeled my desire to be as good as other artists into this poem, hah

the thing that im waiting for in it is, well, skill. I potrayed it as a physical thing that is taking way too long to arrive for me, when its thankfully(?) not like that.
Marksman
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 06:33 (6 Years ago)
My poem entry:


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My life is depressing...

I'm always stressing to be the way others want me to be...

But I don't know...

if I should let the ink to flow from my pen...

I analyze myself, question myself...

Contemplate my actions and fears...

I am not very happy...

My experiences aren't clear...

My memories leave me...

No one believes me...

No one can save me...

The darkness held me...

I was forever devoured by this endless void...

The deception made me feel like my life was the only exception,

Exceptional moments made me feel dismay,

Maybe I need to let go of this....

I wake up everyday unable to move like...

sleep paralysis,

That's how I feel when I think about the world...

That's how I feel when I think about the talons,

Digging into my back,

From the predators who though I was weak...

And took that moment to attack me...

But as a matter of fact I don't care...

About life, about the world, about anything...

I'm done with all the hate and the lying...

I feel like letting out my anger...

But it seems like right now would be best for me...

If I was crying...

My trust is fading...

Like the light in my eyes...

As I breath one last time...

As I fade away...









Lancer
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 06:36 (6 Years ago)
@kuruma i think the poem was supposed to be 6 lines or shorter idk
YuLeTiDe
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 06:39 (6 Years ago)
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Poem:
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Mind and Heart

Heart or Mind, which control your body
The Mind allows the most reasonable ideas to be
The Heart allows the most emotion-connected ideas
The Mind allows you to use logic and skill to your advantage
The Heart allows you to use sympathy and empathy to your advantage
One is more ecstatic, unreadable, random
One is more obvious
Though both are important, one rules the body at a time
Mind vs Heart, Heart vs Mind




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jelly_
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 07:06 (6 Years ago)
this is like, the second poem i've written haha, any criticism is welcome!! :0
also.. hate to say it but, i'll get started on the picture soon

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Our feet depart the dreamland floor
Sunshine on our skin
Imagination, our only escape
Soon, reality will regain it's grip
Our feet are succumbing to gravity
Does everything that go up
Has to come down?



[note: made the color a bit darker so it's legible!! this is the color unedited]



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Marksman
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 07:11 (6 Years ago)
Oh.. I don't really write short ones...








YuLeTiDe
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 07:13 (6 Years ago)
Mine is 9 lines long *dabs*

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jelly_
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 07:14 (6 Years ago)
I didn't want to risk having a big poem because of woopers post :p

You all did good poems! I did a tiny little one and that took me a good 10 minutes to write!


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Lancer
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 07:25 (6 Years ago)
here~

so yeah it's 6 lines max
i wouldve written a longer one if i could but i worked within the limits
jelly_
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 07:27 (6 Years ago)
crapppp haha

ok, lemme edit my poem!~


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YuLeTiDe
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 07:31 (6 Years ago)
I asked supermega, so, since mine is only over 3 lines, most likely mine will be verified

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KimiDaYoKimiNandaUo
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Posted: Sun, 11/02/2018 16:51 (6 Years ago)
Nah screw it I'm prolly gonna forget when V-Day rolls around:

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Just Me, Monika

The way you hounded after Sayori
Made me want to tell a different story.
Then Yuri was next, and she was fine.
Until I made her lose her mind.
Now no one's left, I'm really happy!
What's the matter? It's Just Me.


Yay we get some more obsessive Monika content
She'd never write a poem as trash as that though
jelly_
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Posted: Mon, 12/02/2018 09:44 (6 Years ago)
alright, i spent the time i should probably be doing homework on doing this haha, this was a fun project nevertheless!! ^^ [Click for higher quality]




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YuLeTiDe
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Posted: Mon, 12/02/2018 15:18 (6 Years ago)
@jelly puff

Your poem is amazing

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KimiDaYoKimiNandaUo
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Posted: Mon, 12/02/2018 15:22 (6 Years ago)
Best girl drawing sighted.
Fanbotting mode engaged.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa it's so cute ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
YuLeTiDe
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Posted: Mon, 12/02/2018 18:10 (6 Years ago)
Um, my Yuri was top -10

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KimiDaYoKimiNandaUo
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Posted: Mon, 12/02/2018 18:15 (6 Years ago)
what is even that picture tho
it looks nsfw but maybe that's just me
YuLeTiDe
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Posted: Mon, 12/02/2018 18:21 (6 Years ago)
First of all, what does nsfw mean

Second, I was feeling emo so I draw Yuri consuming her own blood

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