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The Creative Corner (Art Club)! [Open!]
Forum-Index → Fan Clubs → The Creative Corner (Art Club)! [Open!]So anyways, I made a pixel of my sparrow child Tobio

I love him so much-
I dunno, I placed him in a fictional universe I made,
where birds can be fancy.
I'd like some critique on this piece, if you can, though (I realize the front foot looks odd already-)
@TCDL
aa, that's such a nice bird-dragon-thing
@Bakume
yet again with the nice art, although it seems like you either blur or shade with the air brush? I mean, that's fine, but sometimes it looks choppy-
He's precious ;w; I really don't know what to say about it honestly haha..
@All
Finished the thing I needed to know about beaks for

Critiques [on the beakage] please??
Umm... the eyes are a little bit souless and.... Im really sorry for being overdetalystyc (is that a word?) but the padern in the second feather of the tail is not the same as the feather of the second one. Other than that Its a really good drawing! What program did you use? Photoshop? Piskel? Oh and about no one asking for critics, I whould like to know what you think about this fire type dratiny that I am using as avatar. It took a lil bit of time to make but I think it looks good.
@Jamison
It looks really good! Are you thinking on coloring it or do you preffer to just leave it the way it is?



I used PaintToolSAI.
As for the fire dratini, I think the flames on the... ears...? are a bit oddly shaped, and that all the flame could have a bit more to it, like bits flying out, instead of one big "blob" of fire.
@Jam
I can't really find anything to say about the beak, since I suck at front-facing beaks. I like how you added dimension, though
I get what you mean with the fire blob thingy. As for the ears at the time I though ot was a cool concept but now that you said it its really kinda of weird..... BUT I can try to re-draw It tomorrow (Its too late now...)! Thanks for the tips!
@Jamison I will be looking foward for that ´´might`` then! (Y)



I like how you did the feathers!
@James
I think it looks good! Is that your first time drawing beaks?

Credit to Viper
Its my first successful attempt at smol beaks ;w;
...and it isn't even on a birb eue""
Yeah, skull kid (obsessed with Zelda xD) I personally love it, especially the eyes

Credit to Viper
Yeah, I actually drew the depiction Ember Labs did for their Majoras Mask short~

He's just so precious ;w;
GAAAH I LUV IT
You are too talented I stg
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Credit to Viper

Credit to Viper
@goomy, I think that with the dratini, the line coloring on the underbelly is a bit too light & you can't really see it ^^
@Bakume - not trying to sound rude, or skeptical, but that picture you drew the other day? The one you titled "The Frozen Tree" - see I really liked that one, & now I see your most recent 2 works of art - what is with the 'style' change? I know you said you were too lazy to clean up the lines but it's a bit odd to me, how there's such a difference between them.
@Jamison - aw so small n' cute! I think the glasses are kinda slanted a bit too much, though!