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Spelling Mistakes
Forum-Index → Bugs/Complaints → Spelling MistakesYou know the storage box system which every trainer uses? Pretty cool, hu? Well, this was my work! I developed it a few years ago to create a comfortable place for Pokémon to be stored. You don't have to worry about your stored Pokémon, they are in good hands! A so called "caring and education"-system ensures that your Pokémon are in best condition. And it makes also possible, that other trainers can feed or train your Pokémon with a special visitor access. It is also safe against theft.
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You know the storage box system which every trainer uses? Pretty cool, huh? Well, that was my work! I developed it a few years ago to create a comfortable place for Pokémon to be stored. You don't have to worry about your stored Pokémon, they are in good hands! There is so-called "caring and education" system that ensures your Pokémon are kept in the best condition. It's also possible for other trainers to feed and train your Pokémon with special visitor access. It is also safe against theft.
Also in Bill's House
Your need more boxes to store Pokémon? Well *cough* every box needs much data capacity, special hardware, blah blah, and so on.
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You need more boxes to store Pokémon? Well *cough* every box needs more data capacity, special hardware, blah blah, and so on.
Professor Rowan's Lab
It was always my dream to have seen every Pokémon-species and to know just everything about it.
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It was always my dream to see every Pokémon species and to know just everything about them.
Interacting with other users' Pokémon has many advantages:
You will sometimes receive a small amount of Pokédollar, which you can spend in the Shop.
And if you're really lucky, you may find some Golden Game Chips. Those Chips are very rare and can be used at the Golden Slot.
Also, if a user sees, that you have interacted with any of his Pokémon, he may return this favour to your Pokémon/Eggs, so they get stronger! (Or if they're eggs: It helps them to hatch)
As you see, interacting has many great advantages. Remember to return the clicks on your own Pokémon!"
It should be their and they. There are many girls here too XD
"Global Trade Station
Operate successful export and import"
It should be exports and imports
Like at the training-method, the Pokémon also gains some Experience Points.
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Like with the training method, the Pokémon also gains some Experience Points.
"Tips for interacting"
But it's on you how you interact - everyone has his own individual trick.
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But it's on you how you interact - everyone has their own individual trick.
"Until now people still suppose many Emeralds [b]to be[/] buried very deep underground - but no one could ever find any further treasure."
?I think it should be are buried
Admittedly, you need much luck for finding one.
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Admittedly, you need a lot of luck to find one.
Item Shop
You have 825 Pokédollar at the moment. [This is of course just my money; the number varies]
Might want to include a (s) at the end of Pokédollar since there's more than one. (:
Gem Collector
According to a long-continued saga, collecting much - I mean - very much gems of a specific type gives you enough strength to invoke a never-seen legendary Pokémon!
Fix: According to a long-continued saga, collecting many - I mean - many gems of a specific type gives you enough strength to invoke a never-seen legendary Pokémon!
Upgrade the Egg Scanner to Version 2.0 in ordner to find out three times as fast.
Shouldn't it be order? I know it is a small typo, but it should be reported anyways.
By the way, I think that shayminluvr is right.
The underlined ones are where I fixed the mistakes, and the ones with just lines are where I removed words. I'm not sure about the last sentence, it just sounds wierd to me.
"Credit
You can't deposit a negativ amount!"
Should be negative
i have fists for hands and fire for fists