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The School of Warriors [Sign Ups][Accepting]

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Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 15:17 (6 Years ago)
Yep!! All fine.
Immortes
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 15:51 (6 Years ago)
Name: Artemis Archeron "Demona"
Gender: Female
Class: Assasin
Power: Shadow-manipulation: she can make herself invisible until she wishes to attack. Unfortunately, if the area is really bright, her shadows can disappear, and she will be too weak to do that again for 2 hours. She also suffers from a constant tiredness due to using her powers all the time.
Appearance:
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girl on the right and no horns or wings


Shadow form:
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History: TBRP'D
Other: No one lining

Name: Soralina Archeron "Angelia"
Gender: Female
Class: Cleric
Power: Light magic, the opposite of her sisters. She however has a bad offensive stat, so she is bad at attacking. this can make her vulnerable. She is terrible in battle and in life—she's terribly shy.
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on the left and no halo or wings


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History: TBRP'D
Other: No one lining


Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:02 (6 Years ago)
(Not accepted. That power is far too overpowered and this is a school for people who want to help others? Plus you've basically said your character kills people and made a race of unkind people who do the same. Also you only have one appearance and forgot the password.)
Immortes
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:08 (6 Years ago)
tried to fix
Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:36 (6 Years ago)
But... You've listed them both as on the left. Also please DESCRIBE the powers. I assume you mean cleric for the girl as the "healer" class and all Clerics can heal anyway. Your forgot the password again. Sidenote , this is just a pet peeve for me, since you have images cold you out spoilers around each form? It looks a bit difficult to see what's what because you've used the same image twice.
Immortes
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:41 (6 Years ago)
Done and done

password?
Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:47 (6 Years ago)
In the rules, read it.

Also they're both still listed as being the girl on the right.
Immortes
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:48 (6 Years ago)
no they are not ones left ones right

and ill check the password
Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:51 (6 Years ago)
My mistake. Also you still need to change one of them's powers. All clerics have healing magic.
Immortes
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:52 (6 Years ago)
one is a cleric

the other is an assasin
Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:55 (6 Years ago)
Power not Class, you've already got all that covered.
Immortes
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 16:59 (6 Years ago)
(ohky

will do)
Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 17:04 (6 Years ago)
All Clerics have healing magic! I've said this before.
Immortes
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 17:05 (6 Years ago)
...

Artemis is not a cleric

edit: OH OHkay nm

i got it XD
Corviknight
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Posted: Mon, 05/11/2018 20:54 (6 Years ago)
1) Please describe the powers and give them weaknesses. Clerics are not great in battle and focus on healing and Assassins use weapons most of the time and powers to assist that.

2) You have your Angel and Devil left and rights wrong, look at the forms, pictures and left and rights.
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Posted: Tue, 06/11/2018 02:33 (6 Years ago)
Name: Clarissa
Gender: Female
Class: Knight
Power: Any weapon she holds is imbued with a power that allows it to absorb most of the force from any physical attack it parries. Even the strongest strike stops quickly if parried, and Clarissa feels little recoil. Clarissa can then release the force that she has absorbed in a single swing, doing massive damage. The power is limited to one weapon at a time, and power that is absorbed in a weapon fades over about 5 minutes. Using this power for a long time tires Clarissa out. She also needs a few (very telegraphed) seconds to prepare her weapon before performing the attack, where she can be damaged normally. She is also vulnerable for a few seconds after attacking.
Casual Appearance: Clarissa has long brown hair and brown eyes. She usually wears a blouse with a long skirt. Usually, she has some light makeup on.
Warrior Appearance: Clarissa puts her hair into a ponytail, and wears basic leather armor. She carries a wooden training sword.
History: Clarissa was born to a middle-upper class family. She has two younger brothers. Clarissa was always aware of her power but assumed that it was something that everybody could do. Over time, she realized that her ability was unique and that she could possibly be a powerful warrior with it. Clarissa only just started sword fighting lessons, leaving her power somewhat ineffective for now. She aspires to become a strong warrior.
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Corviknight
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Posted: Tue, 06/11/2018 06:30 (6 Years ago)
I think that power is a little bit overpowered, could you add a weakness to it? Maybe she gets a headache if she uses it too often or something? Other than that your accepted.
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Posted: Tue, 06/11/2018 07:09 (6 Years ago)
Changed! Now, in other circumstances, Clarissa would make an ideal bossfight: tanky and repetitive, telegraphed powerful attacks.

May I post now?
Corviknight
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Posted: Tue, 06/11/2018 07:15 (6 Years ago)
Yep!! All good.
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Posted: Tue, 06/11/2018 13:10 (6 Years ago)
(Added a new character to my forms ^^)
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