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3BeesInATrenchcoat
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 02:14 (6 Years ago)
So I’m reading a book from the library called City of Fire by Lawrence Yep and I deside to make an rp that revolves around magic. So here we go!

The goddesses of the realm

Senełanì

Senełanì: Sen-e-la-e
The goddess of lava

Źenilala

Źenilala: Zen-i-lay-lay
The goddess of water

Frunzanuna

Frunzanuna: Fru-z-a-nuna
The goddess of nature

The islands

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sentaranima
Sentaranima: senta-rain-ama
This island belonga to Senełanì, it has no grass, high heat, and a huge volcano at the center where Senełanì lives.

Zentiranic
Zentiranic : zen-i-rain-ick
This island belongs to Źenilala, 98% of the island it’s self is covered in water while the other 2% is above. It is very damp and there’s not getting your feet wet. Źenilala lives around the island in the water.

Furnatima
Furnatima: fur-not-i-ma
This island belongs to Frunzanuna, it’s tree’s are the talllest ever befor, the grass is up to your knees every thing is healthy. Frunzanuna lives in a mountain in the middle.


Rules

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-all ph rules
-proper grammar
-no more characters then you can handle
-no controlling npc (non-player chaters) unless I say up you can
-if you have more then 1 character let us know who’s talking
-have your characters powers relate to the island they come from
-characters 14 and younger can know what their power is but cannot controll it
-no modern day things MP3 players, headphones, etc.


Form

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username:
Rp name:
Rp nickname: (optional)
Home island:
Power:
Age:
Appearance:
Gender:
Pet griffon?:
Any goddess they look up to?:
Other:


My form

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username: *FlowerDragonStary*
Rp name: Kassti
Rp nickname: Kassy
Home island: Zentiranic
Power: can shape water into attacking animals
Age: 13
Appearance: hair is teal to white ombré, skin is pale, eyes are pear green. Wears a flowy t-shirt with an ombré to teal at the bottom, wears black ripped pants and white sneakers.
Gender: female
Pet griffin?: heck yes!
Any goddesses they look up to?:
Other: this took so fricking long to make!


why am I so nervous to post this?


Have a wonderful day y’all, you deserve it :)
Steel5299
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 02:26 (6 Years ago)
Wanted to point out a few errors:

No plot

If the water goddes already lives in water. How can it live in another in the middle?

By pet griffin do you mean pet griffon? If so, is it the 4 legged eagle creature or the dog?

Various spelling errors

And what do you mean by trees taller than ever before? (Btw you put befor)

Sorry if this sounds rude, just wanting to help...
egg16
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 02:33 (6 Years ago)

Title: dude, your not always supposed to point out all the details.

username: bakugan4llife
rp name ???
rp nickname: joshua
home island: sentaranima!
power: can mold fire into any magical trap!
age: 13
appearance: hair is magma red, and he has very tan skin(geez, i wonder why.) his cloths are seared and singed. he is bare footed.
gender: male
pet griffen?: yes!!
any goddesses they look up to?: yes!
other:
3BeesInATrenchcoat
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 02:39 (6 Years ago)
@steel this took over 7 min. to make and I had to take a Break for dinner and I was also having a million thoughts for this I’ll fix it once I scribble all this down .~.

@kugan accepted

And I meant 4 leg eagle

Have a wonderful day y’all, you deserve it :)
egg16
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 03:00 (6 Years ago)
i really like this rp.
3BeesInATrenchcoat
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 03:08 (6 Years ago)
Thanks I worked hard on it, to be honest this is the most i’ve ever put into something online!

Have a wonderful day y’all, you deserve it :)
Steel5299
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 03:09 (6 Years ago)
Okay sorry and thanks. My next post here will be my form.
3BeesInATrenchcoat
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 03:16 (6 Years ago)
It’s fine! To be honest I like constructive criticism every once in a while and now is 1 of those times.

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Steel5299
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 03:28 (6 Years ago)

Title: Oof criticism...

Username: Steel5299
Rp name: agu
Home island: zentiranic
Power: can make almost anything out of water. Her favorite is to make two extra arms and fight with four swords.
Age: 15
Appearence: blue hair combed to one side. Weird blue pants most people think are made of water. A dark blue long shirt.
Gender: female.
Pet griffon: nah
Any goddess they look up to: zenilala
Other: usually quite, but when she talks she has smart plans but can be totally harsh and and unforgiving.


Hipsterpotamus
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 03:31 (6 Years ago)
username: Hipster!!
Rp name: Coraline
Rp nickname: (optional)
Home island: Furnatima
Power: She can connect to every plant in a limited area. She control them and exhange information with them
Age: 15
Appearance: Tall slim girl with green hair
Gender: Female
Pet griffon?: Nope
Any goddess they look up to?: Frunzanuna
Other:
3BeesInATrenchcoat
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Posted: Thu, 19/07/2018 03:31 (6 Years ago)
Accepted anybody wanna start?

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Steel5299
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Posted: Sat, 21/07/2018 22:48 (6 Years ago)
Sure
egg16
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Posted: Sat, 21/07/2018 22:52 (6 Years ago)
i wannnnnnnnna starttttttttttttttttttttta
3BeesInATrenchcoat
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Posted: Mon, 23/07/2018 05:03 (6 Years ago)
Sorry but I gtg to bed we will hopefully start tomorrow

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