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Posted: Thu, 20/04/2017 23:38 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Thu, 20/04/2017 23:41 (7 Years ago)
I guess I'll offer to do that again- palpad me?
@Snow
thank you :'0 I'll try to fix the feet and the legs when I get back on my grandmothers computer
click the image above to go to my toyhou.se
Posted: Fri, 21/04/2017 01:56 (7 Years ago)
I also took a photo of my Wings Of Fire Oc on my phone, since my scanner still isn't working. Feedback is welcome ^^
Posted: Fri, 21/04/2017 01:57 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Fri, 21/04/2017 03:38 (7 Years ago)
I will probably sounds really harsh when I give this critique, and I apologize.
there might be some points that are incorrect and I apologize, but I also observed the rainwing reference in the book before posting this.
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There is a lot to work on.
The head looks really big compared to the body. If it really was that big, it's head would constantly be falling over, or it could just break it's neck.
Speaking of the neck, it seems a little short compared to the normal rainwing's neck. They are a bit longer and curvier.
As for the rest of their body
it's small compared to the head, as stated. if the head really were that big, the body would be bigger. The wings seem to be large enough to lift it on the ground, although you could make them slightly bigger, and thicker. With such small "fingers" on the wings, the wings will be weaker.
The tail also seems to have skin that is right up against the bone at some points, while at other points it's well done.
Plus, the horns seem to merge with the neck. In the reference for the book, the horns are higher, and go above the neck.
Plus, again with the neck, if it went out that far, it makes it seem like it is bending the neck (helping with the neck) but the chest would stick out a bit further.
even though I say this, the front legs should be a little closer to the chest, as it looks a little odd.
sorry for it being so long, or if I sound rude!
The head looks really big compared to the body. If it really was that big, it's head would constantly be falling over, or it could just break it's neck.
Speaking of the neck, it seems a little short compared to the normal rainwing's neck. They are a bit longer and curvier.
As for the rest of their body
it's small compared to the head, as stated. if the head really were that big, the body would be bigger. The wings seem to be large enough to lift it on the ground, although you could make them slightly bigger, and thicker. With such small "fingers" on the wings, the wings will be weaker.
The tail also seems to have skin that is right up against the bone at some points, while at other points it's well done.
Plus, the horns seem to merge with the neck. In the reference for the book, the horns are higher, and go above the neck.
Plus, again with the neck, if it went out that far, it makes it seem like it is bending the neck (helping with the neck) but the chest would stick out a bit further.
even though I say this, the front legs should be a little closer to the chest, as it looks a little odd.
sorry for it being so long, or if I sound rude!
click the image above to go to my toyhou.se
Posted: Fri, 21/04/2017 04:44 (7 Years ago)
the garchomp(?gabite? X'D)'s knees kind of look off :"D
idk how to help, just anatomy study gabites a bit more? :0
anyways- I wa sbusy today
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achoo animation test
and then i tried doing more dynamic posing owo
bonus (blood warning ono)
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r.i.p
Posted: Fri, 21/04/2017 04:49 (7 Years ago)
That is the most cutest thing I've ever seen. ;O;
@Snow
OML- That is amazing! Love the pose and his facial expressions!
@Pippy
Also cool dragon! You could se some work with making the tail thou. ^^
The neck is a little puffy around back too. vwv
@Angel
It's been forever since I last saw you! Welcome back friendo!
Cute art too! Love the suit! <3 Eye could be better positioned thou. ;w;
@Kit
Hnnnn- Such cute babies! Love the animations too! .o. ///w///
@Everyone
I made a new thingy for a rp I am in on DeviantArt!
It's my babe Ghel(Alolan Umbreon) and his new friend Bow(Sylveon)!
Posted: Fri, 21/04/2017 04:51 (7 Years ago)
The animation is nice, and the poxels are well done (the colors go so well together)
I also really like the dynamic pose practice-
@Everyone
just a note, it's a gabite :>
I thought it'd be easy to tell (due to the difference in pallete's and anatomy between evos)
@Iris
Ghel's ears look a bit big, but otherwise it seems pretty good! (although I'd like to see some shading- owo)
click the image above to go to my toyhou.se
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 00:30 (7 Years ago)
thank :">
haha i was confused just bc garchomp/gabite arent really pokemon I see alot-
@iris
love the grass omg
and then have my friday goat
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r.i.p
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 03:06 (7 Years ago)
that is a good goat
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 12:18 (7 Years ago)
You can do anything. They can just sit on a meadow and have a nice picnick and eat, they can also do a "food war" (throwing food at each other for fun, idk what you say in english), they can randomly feed each other, one of them can give the other a kiss on the cheek or something, ... You get the point.
I'd love to see the results if one of you decided to do that ;u;
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 12:30 (7 Years ago)
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Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 15:09 (7 Years ago)
THESE BUNNIES WONT SEE THE LIGHT OF DAY ANYMORE
(Only some people will know why im hugging dem carrots)
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 15:13 (7 Years ago)
Title: :v
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 15:19 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 15:24 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 17:21 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 22/04/2017 20:25 (7 Years ago)
the animation is smooth, which is good !!
the front paws seem to be higher up then the other two, and the back leg bends a little to far up, if that makes any sense ? :'>
and i have a art contest up, check ehre !!