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Posted: Sat, 23/09/2017 17:59 (7 Years ago)
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@shadow the zoroark:
that looks super nice! im no expert with drawing dragons so i cant give critique, but i do like how it looks
@fuchsmarinchen:
ooh, your sprites look super nice :0
they're slightly blurry though, that might be your issue
your second drawing is super adorable as well
Posted: Sat, 23/09/2017 18:22 (7 Years ago)
can't critique this time because its late at night and i gotta sleep :''u
Posted: Sun, 24/09/2017 20:12 (7 Years ago)
@wooper
That anatomy is amazing !
Although Id notice some white spots left on it
@FuchsMarinchen
Those are adorable,and I honestly love the expression on the female one
@ThtGayGuy
I like the coloured rim lighting-like lines you gave it on the edges of it's face, it just adds a nice burst of colour there !
@Shadow
Looks really cool! Although I'm wondering why you erased one of the front legs? I'd thought it'd be better if the leg was like that honestly : 000
@kookie
The use of the crayon brush is done very well !
and those rim lightings are amazing !
@Nevvo
It's beautiful !
@Sentret
It's cute, although it looks a tad bit lopsided
Posted: Sun, 24/09/2017 20:18 (7 Years ago)
(Its a scketch and I still plan on finishing it) (I will also draw a background)
Even though its not finished, criticism is more than accepted!(Man I used to post things here waaay faster when all that I used to do was sprites and simple gifs)
Posted: Sun, 24/09/2017 22:56 (7 Years ago)
@nev
the coloring and detail is amazing :0
@kookie
i s2g you've mastered the crayon brush
@lizz
did you get an A
@woopers
heck that anatomy
@aki
ok i saw it on discord and woah,,, that detail
@shadow
that's very creative :0 the lines are so clean, especially for traditional
@gayguy
cute, i love the color scheme
@tey
the contrast between light & dark is really good :0
@goomy
hmm,, it looks really small for such a big canvas size :0 maybe you should use more canvas or use a smaller size
wheee e i'm working on a wip,, if i finish is soon i'll edit it in or post again
Posted: Sun, 24/09/2017 22:59 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Mon, 25/09/2017 03:08 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Mon, 25/09/2017 03:12 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Mon, 25/09/2017 17:33 (7 Years ago)
How long did you take to draw these?(Theyre incredible btw)
@toma Like I said, I am going to add a background when I decide to finish it and even though the croagunk is the center of attencion, I dont want it to be the full image, but I definelly get what you mean.c:
@Woopers
The drawing is a masterpiece! But I have one big question... Since the tail is bitten, Im pretty sure it is made of sometype of candy/waffle/food like thing but I can clearly see normal fur...
Is it just a food creature or did something just freaking bite the tail of this Honey-like-thing producing mammal?
Posted: Mon, 25/09/2017 19:48 (7 Years ago)
(owo)
Posted: Tue, 26/09/2017 00:24 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 26/09/2017 01:41 (7 Years ago)
Username: dr3am3at3r
Thank you!
((also deviled thats really cute!!!! i really love the space tail!
Posted: Tue, 26/09/2017 02:41 (7 Years ago)
But, um.. I drew some of the characters from Ponyo! (It's my goal to draw all of the main characters! >:3)
Posted: Tue, 26/09/2017 02:43 (7 Years ago)
@deviled
aaa it's a really cute design!!
@kit and lizzu
omg the leggo art is coming along quite nicely!!
and me art
for Nevvo
Posted: Tue, 26/09/2017 03:17 (7 Years ago)
aaaaa the leggos :0 i need to draw them again smh-
@woopers
the colours are so nice omg;;
@sentret
i recommend using different brush sizes, but not too much to the point they kind of look awkward with the other lines. also you could look up references of cats, since the anatomy is a bit off :0!
@deviled
om g thats so aesthetic- and so cute- this style is really good!
@fluttershy
looks good :0! tho the hand looks a lil bit weird-
@twin
ugh im jealous of how you're so good at animal anatomy ;;;
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tried doing this new lineart style i saw from utube, where u basically put the lineart into a folder and put it on multiply, but you cant cheat so you have to fill in the colours manually :'vv took so long ;;;
Posted: Wed, 27/09/2017 00:19 (7 Years ago)
@Twin HOLY HECK THAT LOOKS SO PRETTY!!!! I really like the colors! the shading makes it look kind of cloud-like! ^^
@deviled that. is. adorable!!! I really really love the space theme!!!
@toma That looks good, but the eyes look kind of weird. One looks too close to the nose, and the other looks a bit to far away.. It still looks good though!!
@woopers That's really good! I like how all the orange looks all goop-like!! (That probably made no sense-)
Posted: Wed, 27/09/2017 23:08 (7 Years ago)
Done! I tried a new artstyle! What so you guyz think?(I wanted to add the scketch just for comparason)
Posted: Thu, 28/09/2017 11:54 (7 Years ago)
i really like the brush you used for the lines! gives it a bit more struckture besides the shadows.
Maybe the 'weird' comes from the color going over the lines at some parts? But for me it looks just fine this way :3
@Twin
Thats' adorable! love the color sheme ant the way you do your shadows <3
it's really cute
@goomybr
Croagunk looks just like he's enjoying the time of his life C:
the shadows look a little hard though. But i can understand why you tried this style, i find it easier myself to work without line
my art for this week
Posted: Thu, 28/09/2017 12:36 (7 Years ago)
Username: potata
Thank you!
I'd like to join but I dunno when will I be able to draw since I'm usually busy studyin ;w; I hope it's alright <3