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Posted: Mon, 17/02/2014 11:59 (10 Years ago)
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Posted: Sun, 16/02/2014 15:26 (10 Years ago)
When I was a kid, I was a geek. For my tenth birthday, I got a beta version of a game called Pokèmon Misery Grey. Yes, Misery. But then again, it was a beta, and it was probably mis-translated, so the title didn't worry me much. Anyway, I put the cartridge in the slot, scanned the manual for the forty-fifth time, and hit the 'on' button at long last.

My Game Boy booted up, and there was a little animation of a boy and a cool dragon thing. From what I had read in the manual, the creatures in the game were Pokèmon. The menu popped up, and I looked at my choices;
> New Game
> Continue Game
Time: 23:39

The 'Continue Game' option confused me. This was a beta game. I was a beta tester. I was supposed to be the first person to play this, right? I selected 'Continue Game', figuring the creators must have played it to check for major glitches or something.

I wish I hadn't.

The game didn't have any glitches right away. At least, none I noticed. But then again, I had only been playing for a few minutes. So far so good. I recorded that in my journal, which I would re-write and send to GameFreak when they wanted reports on how it was going.

Anyway, I got a feel for the game pretty soon, thanks to the manual. I logged onto the PC to access my Pokèmon, because there was only one Pokèmon, a Slowpoke named Loveless, that was level five. The other Pokémon in the boxes were all level infinity. Yeah, you heard me. Level. Infinity. One thing's for sure, whoever played this beta before me was good at the game. Or, this could be a glitch. I decided to record it, just in case it was a glitch, and not some unlocked feature, and continued on my way.

I had battled with Loveless, and she was a poor fighter. I ran away from a level one Rattata with five hp left. Loveless was useless, and she couldn't learn any of the moves I had on the TMs in my bag. I decided to give up on Loveless, because she wouldn't level up, either. I saved the game, and then released her. But then a box popped up.

Loveless doesn't want to go!

I had two choices;
> Try Again
> Leave Alone

I selected 'Try Again', but another box popped up, and there was the soung of a crying Pokèmon.

TRANSLATION: Master! Please, I don't want to go. I love you, Master.

There were two choices;
> Force Her Out
> Leave Alone

Of course, I selected the first option. I figured this was nothing special, and that it popped up for all the Pokèmon that were in the process of getting deleted. There was a loud screech that nearly made my ears bleed, and the screen blacked out. Then, I saw...nothing much, really. The screen showed fog rolling around, and it took a few minutes for a flashlight to click on. The fog cleared, and showed my character holding a little flashlight in a creepy, grey room. It climbed up the stairs, and sinister music began to play. There was a giggle, like a little girl, and my character stopped. The battle sequence began, but the creepy music continued. My opponent?

A slowpoke named Loveless.

A box popped up. "Hello, trainer, miss me?" There was another giggle, but now it was terrifying. Quickly, I wrote all this down in my journal. I had two choices that popped up in the box;

> "Loveless? Is that you?"
> "Go away."

I selected 'Go away.'

There was more laugher, and another box, contaning Loveless's reply. "I see you still don't care about poor Loveless. Do you know what I've been through, Master? We both knew I had no chance by myself, Master. I died in the wild. But I still loved you. So I searched for you. And now I've found you. So we can be together," she stopped to giggle, "...forever."

My responses popped up;
> "I'm sorry, Loveless."
> "Leave me alone."

I chose the first option, and Loveless giggled again. "It's okay, Master. I am forgiving. Now, I want you to tell me something. If you tell me it, we can be together. And I'll even make your death painless, if you wish."

My responses popped up;
>"I love you, Loveless."
> Try to run

Death? Okay, this started to scare me. I selected run, stopping only to scribble down some notes.

"Silly master, you cannot run."

My options;
>"I love you, Loveless. "
> "Why are you doing this?"

I selected the second option.

"Master, I am unloved. Everyone hates Slowpokes. Even my pokèdex entry says I'm a dopey pokèmon. You were all I had to live for. And when you turned away, it broke my heart. But I love you so much that I'll put that aside, if you agree to stay with me."

> "Yes, I'll stay with you."
> Exit to main menu

I selected the second choice, and gasped as I saw what it said under 'Time';
17:00 Time's running out, Master. *giggle*

Quickly, I turned my GameBoy off and hid it away. It was three days before I played on it again. It immediately showed Loveless.

"Master, your faithful servant has waited. Waited for three days. Please, stay with me."

> Yes
> No

I picked 'No'. Why on earth would I say yes? I was a ten year old, after all. This clearly angered Loveless, though.
"Master, I am patient, but my patience is waining. Please say yes, or else I might have to force you."

> Yes
> No

I chose the second, and my GameBoy blacked out. Then, my trainer's sprite was tied to a chair. Loveless was holding a knife. "Master?"

The game chose my answer for me. "Yes?"

"Why won't you love me?" The screen blacked out, and there was a scream coming from my GameBoy. I tore the game out of my Game Boy, and stamped on it. And then it was over. My nightmare was just a dream. Or so I thought...

A month or so after the incident, GameFreak sent a survey. I filled out the survey honestly. The last question was probably the hardest to answer, 'Did you enjoy playing Pokèmon Misery Grey?' I glanced at my Gameboy. It was sitting on my desk, where I was taking the survey. I looked at the trash can that held the remains of my cartridge. My answer?

'No.'

Then, my Game Boy turned on, and there was a giggle coming out of the speakers.. "Master, didn't you enjoy our game?"

-FIN-

Author's Notes;

"This is my first attempt at a Creepypasta. Yes, this is my work."

Options;
> "It was good."
> Give critique

A thought pops into your head. You think this story is like another you've seen...

Options;
> PM me about it, with a link to the other story.

You have questions about the story.

Options;
> PM them to me.
> Post them here.

Yeah.. my first Creepypasta! I would love critique, especially from anyone else who has posted a CP on here. Like I said before, PM me with questions, comments or concerns.

Thanks!
~tjb

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Posted: Sun, 16/02/2014 14:49 (10 Years ago)
That's a good point. We certainly don't want to have children get the idea that they can rely on credit cards. But also, if the debt isn't payed back, there is a punishment, like irl. Either way, I respect your opinion, and everyone else's. Is there a way that I make it so that it doesn't glorify debt?

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Posted: Sun, 16/02/2014 14:44 (10 Years ago)
Mine was Ruby. I pride myself in teaching myself how to play the game, because I didn't have a manual. My friend just gave me the cartridge. I have Pokèmon Conquest and White, too. And when I'm rich, I'm going to get Heart Gold and the old DS that can transfer the Pokèmon from the old games and put them all on X and Y. Because now, my parents say that having four gaming consoles is too many, so I'll have to make do with my Gameboy and DSI.

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Posted: Sun, 16/02/2014 14:27 (10 Years ago)
@Diana; Good question...They would have 24 hours after their membership expires to either get a new membership, repay the debt, or their credit card will be locked, and they have to pay off all the debt and wait for three days after they pay it off before they can use their credit again, maybe?

@DragonSumedh, thank you!

@Toothless, understood. Thank you for your opinion. : )

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Posted: Sun, 16/02/2014 00:27 (10 Years ago)
After reading this, I can say that writing most certainly is one of your strong points. Fabulous work. I applaud you.

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 23:47 (10 Years ago)
Yes, that's a great idea! I was also thinking that the amount of debt you can have rises when one gets a premium account... Thank you for the support. <3

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 22:46 (10 Years ago)
Understood. But I was thinking that once some reaches a debt of a certain number, they can not use their credit anymore, until the debt is payed off. Anyway, thanks for the input.

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 15:38 (10 Years ago)
Favorite pokèmon: Zorua, the Eeveelutions, and Absol. I love the mega evolved charizards, too.
Favorite legendary: Shaymin. So much squee.
Favorire shiny: Gyrados, Miltank, Luxray, Spiritomb, Giratina, Victini, Scolipede, Chandelure.
I would love to capture any of those pokémon. I don't have any of the ones listed above.
I'm really bad at picking favorites. XD

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 15:20 (10 Years ago)
That's a good point. Thanks for the input.

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 15:10 (10 Years ago)
Thank you. c:

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 15:07 (10 Years ago)
I support this. Choosing a gender might be difficult to those who are gender fluid, and might make them feel as if this site is insensitive to gender fluid people.

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 14:58 (10 Years ago)
I was thinking that we could have a debit card type of concept on Pokèheroes....

Ex. Bill is a newbie here, and he wants to catch pokèmon on Route 53. He doesn't have any items, and only has 2, 100 pokèdollars. Bill needs the explorer bag (2, 500 pd) to get the gems, which he will exchange for honey, and he needs three pokèballs (200 pd each, 600 in total). I'm thinking that with the credit, or whatever you want to call it, Bill can buy the explorer bag and the pokèballs, and when he gains pd via interaction, he pays off his debt. Once all the debt is payed off, the pd Bill earns afterwards goes to his account, like it does now.

Please tell me if you support this or not. If you don't support, I would like for you to give me a reason. (Too complicated, I don't understand why we need this, etc.)

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Posted: Sat, 15/02/2014 14:06 (10 Years ago)
Now I want to hunt that pony down and steal it and... I mean cute story hahaha yeah...XD

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Posted: Fri, 14/02/2014 22:06 (10 Years ago)
Yeah, I'll try. XD
Wow. An ice cream party in the TARDIS. I can imagine that.

Does anyone watch My Little Pony; Friendship is Magic? There's a background character based on the 10th Doctor. The pony is officially named Doctor Hooves, and... there was really no point in bringing this up. : /

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Posted: Fri, 14/02/2014 15:47 (10 Years ago)
Guys, guys, guys!!!!!!! I had a beautiful dream last night!!!! I was in a library, and David Tennant was there, and we talked a lot. And then I woke up.

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Posted: Thu, 13/02/2014 13:44 (10 Years ago)
Are you still accepting?
Username: the_Jewish_Blobfish
Nickname(s): blob. But you guys can call me anything you want.
Favorite Doctor: hnnnnnng. Favorite? I like Tennant and Smith, but I have to say Eccleston, because he loved Rose so much that he 'died' for her. (And then regenerated)
Favorite Companion: Rose, and Amelia Pond as a close second.
Favorite Enemy: Weeping Angels, by far.
Favorite Episode: Father's Day (Season 1, when the Doctor and Rose met her father.)
Favorite Series: 1st
Are bowties cool?: yeah. But not as cool as leather jackets.
Anything else to add?: Bad Wolf.

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Posted: Tue, 11/02/2014 23:22 (10 Years ago)
Pretty good. I like the idea of a "Pokèmon gone wrong" story.

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Posted: Tue, 11/02/2014 23:16 (10 Years ago)
Woah. Creepy, but really creative.

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