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Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 21:44 (5 Years ago)

Grandar watches impatiently wondering what extent she has on these radiation powers. If she could control the stray particle that causes radiation, or the molecule itself? He ponders all her possible combination powers. Changing her own DNA into a Mutant? Gamma Blasts? Nuclear detonation? Super heated atomic fires? The powers on an atom where definitely one to wonder while Grandar tried sharing his ideas with the others.

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Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 20:49 (5 Years ago)
	'Finish them Conrade' he thought to nobody in particular [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 20:19 (5 Years ago)
	Grandar studies them intently. He understands that he'll eventually have to go against one of them and he wanted to make sure he knew what he was getting into. As he studies he actually gets impressed that Nato is actually able to move that heavy. Being able to throw yourself as if you were metal has some really hard drawbacks if you can't carry your own body. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 19:29 (5 Years ago)
	Grandar came back to watch the fight soon enough. The smolrade made it a lot easier on him, giving him something else to think about while he sat, giving everybody drinks and popcorn and supported the fighters. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 16:17 (5 Years ago)
	Username: Potted_Nugget Gems: 39 No. of tickets: 24 flying. 10 ice. [Read more]

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Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 08:50 (5 Years ago)

Ideas. Don't open unless you want chapter 2 spoiled.

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Mr. Plenary is Ardent's father and is one of the few that still don't confine to the social norm of nullness.
Mr. Plenary works for the Police force as Chief that has seen struggles ever since the new world was established. As people lost drive for emotion, they also lost the drive for crime, making the police force obsolete.
Ever since the Rainbow Factory has opened, reports of mass suicides have been sent in. The news reporting new deaths of 6 or 7 new people would be considered a good day.
Mr. Plenary knows the Rainbow Factory was somehow responsible, yet doesn't know how to prove it
Eventually, his anger and frustration cause his entire force to find new positions and leave him to run the entire town's department on his own.
In his frustration, he flips his papers and leaves to go home where once he's home, his wife is suddenly filled with emotions of love and happiness.
Mrs. Plenary is visibly different as she now acts differently around him and with Ardent rather than when she was alone with Ardent.
Ardent does not have these sudden changes.
Mr. Plenary complains about his last co-worker leaving and him needing to manage everything himself when Mrs. plenary recommends also bringing Ardent, which he does end up doing.

Rainbow factory Ideas do not open unless you want the ENTIRE story plot spoiled

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I'm not putting it down yet but you really want it spoiled that fast? Chill, let me get a grip on this stuff first.

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Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 08:24 (5 Years ago)

Chapter 1: "good"

Ardent lives out his normal daily routine in his twisted world. He wakes up in his room that looks bare and deprived as if he just moved in despite being in the same room for his entire life. Afterward, he dresses in his plain gray school uniform and he picks up his phone, goes to his message, and finds nothing. "Good", he whispers. Then after dressing, he makes his way to his kitchen, where his mother had made food. It tasted like paste, yet the flavor was so familiar it brought a small grin to Ardent's face. His mother, as content as he was, gently asked him in a whisper tone, " how is it?". Moments past before Ardent finished his slow chewing, staring off into nothing. "It was good" he comments without making eye contact. Time seems to go faster, and that's how he preferred it. Every day was a mirror of the last. He was dropped off at school, took a test, fell asleep in one of his classes and went waited to be picked up. The school kids could barely mutter anything because there was next to nothing to talk about. Nobody cared to talk anyway. Hours passed yet Ardent still stood in the same spot before he realized his mother was not coming. The first thought in a while hit him. 'Maybe I should just walk'. And that he did. He lived an hour away by car, but he memorized the round fairly enough to walk. He was already an 11th grader yet this walking was a first. It felt...good. The details that where once a blur in a window shield where now like a perfect picture. Maybe it had been an hour or so, but Ardent realized something, ...the sidewalk was getting darker. The light ran away and he was quickly engulfed by an enormous shadow. He turned towards the source to find the one and only, Rainbow factory. He found himself fixated on the building for moments, appreciating the towering structure that seemingly grew to the heavens before continuing home. Returning home his mother was in the kitchen, cooking when she overheard the door and called out "I'm sorry I couldn't pick you up" where Ardent simply replied. "It's all good" and his mother following with "how was school?" Only to be answered with a simple "It was good". He ate yet another flavorless meal and went to bed.

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Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 08:00 (5 Years ago)

Title: The Rainbow Factory

Backstory/world building

The first chapter or part of the story would focus on this teenage male, Ardent. He's the son of an average suburban mother and a hard beat father. He and the entire world have seen the issues of emotion and through the means of governmental inclusion, the world has adopted the existence of content and bliss. In a world deprived of most of what people may feel, nobody has a reason to feel sad, but at the cost that nobody could feel truly happy, however, this model still brought the content it was promised, and people lived their normal, average lives. Of course, there are the ones that chose to not confined their emotions, to let their emotions blaze like a wild fire, but at the cost of everybody constantly judging them. Emotions haven't been illegal for decades, there was no need. Most people that showed emotion would be crushed back into blissful nullness by sheer social pressure. With nothing much to look after or for people to feel, if you walked up to anybody and asked how their day was the most you would get out is "good".

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Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 07:41 (5 Years ago)

Late night Ideas, thoughts or opinions. Might use them in creative writing or something but this is just a place to leave my ideas. This is Public and free to read, criticize, and/or leave feedback or comments. Feel free to leave comments of my ideas or just tell me how you think of them in my palpad. For organizational purposes, I ask that other people Do Not Post here, rather, I prefer palpad. I do not plan to make these into full-fledged stories (maybe just a few chapters and some ideas) unless I happen to have time in the future and if enough people have an interest in it.

Thank you, and enjoy my ideas.

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Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 05:08 (5 Years ago)
	(Nah, Grandar doesn't hate people that haven't done anything to him. It's just a bit of a bad reminder.) Grandar pushes forward, forced to be trapped into his mind while also waiting in line for the popcorn and drinks. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 04:18 (5 Years ago)
	Grandar, as much as he hated to do so, ignored his goddess. He just kept walking to grab the promised foods. What else could he do? Feelings made you weak, pity made you weak, sadness made you weak. He could not let these forces overtake him, he was strong, the strongest. He had to be strong, to do what his mother could not. Win. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 02:12 (5 Years ago)
	"I do not seek your pity. This burden is one that I must live against. I only need to grow stronger, I must grow stronger. Worry not, I will endure this, this pain is only temporary, strength will let me prosper." He keeps going on mumbling other quotes similar to those and the worry in his face getting unsettlingly more stern. [Read more]

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Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 01:50 (5 Years ago)

Grandar shakes her off, "goddess, I do not wish to deceive my savior. It's just..." He doesn't make eye contact but doesn't show any emotion. "My mother was taken too early by a heathen that used radiation tactics. My father, could break mountains with a wave of his hand, my mother could never feel pain. Together, they were invincible but...my mother's pain blindness, blinded her to a slow death...I just...need air."

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Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 01:34 (5 Years ago)
	"Oh rest assured goddess, I was just simply...hungry! Yes, I was hungry and that is where I am going so please excuse my intrusion." He scoots past Maya and starts to slowly walk away, head down and gently rubbing the back of his head. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 01:19 (5 Years ago)
	"Oh, hello goddess. Is there...something wrong? I was just...ehem...walking." Grandar is fiddling a bit while awkwardly standing there. Despite his large stature, it's obvious that he's not comfortable being confronted. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 01:00 (5 Years ago)
	Grandar smiles and turns over his shoulder. "It's alright Comrades, I just want some space. I'll go grab some food, I'll be back in a few minutes so just keep my seat warm." He has obvious nervousness in his face and his voice isn't it's usual prideful self [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sun, 14/07/2019 00:38 (5 Years ago)
	Grandar had seen enough and already knew who was going to win. "I just realized that I...ugh...left my wood fire oven on....I need to...leave..." He hesitantly gets up, leaves his stuff and walks out of the stands. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sat, 13/07/2019 20:55 (5 Years ago)
	"Fear not Comrade, my mother had the same problem with me. This has been blessed with 'child love'. As long as your descendent stays a child, this slingshot will always return to its owner. Destroyed or not, so have no worries." He chuckles while he members his childhood of accidentally breaking the slingshot multiple time and it always returning to him in condition. [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sat, 13/07/2019 20:40 (5 Years ago)
	"Hello smolrade, how are you enjoying your gift? It's great for defense, building strength, and for having a bit of fun. It is never too early to start building your strength like me, smolrade. " he pats the kid gently. "Just stay out of trouble" [Read more]

Nuggetz OFFLINE Forum Posts: 95	Posted: Sat, 13/07/2019 20:32 (5 Years ago)
	"Listen, comrade, I may not be the sharpest blade in the grandfather's back but I do know something and it's that strength will attract strength. Get stronger my young one, and someday somebody will come to appreciate it." [Read more]

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