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Late night Ideas, thoughts or opinions. Might use them in creative writing or something but this is just a place to leave my ideas. This is Public and free to read, criticize, and/or leave feedback or comments. Feel free to leave comments of my ideas or just tell me how you think of them in my palpad. For organizational purposes, I ask that other people Do Not Post here, rather, I prefer palpad. I do not plan to make these into full-fledged stories (maybe just a few chapters and some ideas) unless I happen to have time in the future and if enough people have an interest in it.

Thank you, and enjoy my ideas.

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Title: The Rainbow Factory

Backstory/world building

The first chapter or part of the story would focus on this teenage male, Ardent. He's the son of an average suburban mother and a hard beat father. He and the entire world have seen the issues of emotion and through the means of governmental inclusion, the world has adopted the existence of content and bliss. In a world deprived of most of what people may feel, nobody has a reason to feel sad, but at the cost that nobody could feel truly happy, however, this model still brought the content it was promised, and people lived their normal, average lives. Of course, there are the ones that chose to not confined their emotions, to let their emotions blaze like a wild fire, but at the cost of everybody constantly judging them. Emotions haven't been illegal for decades, there was no need. Most people that showed emotion would be crushed back into blissful nullness by sheer social pressure. With nothing much to look after or for people to feel, if you walked up to anybody and asked how their day was the most you would get out is "good".

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Chapter 1: "good"

Ardent lives out his normal daily routine in his twisted world. He wakes up in his room that looks bare and deprived as if he just moved in despite being in the same room for his entire life. Afterward, he dresses in his plain gray school uniform and he picks up his phone, goes to his message, and finds nothing. "Good", he whispers. Then after dressing, he makes his way to his kitchen, where his mother had made food. It tasted like paste, yet the flavor was so familiar it brought a small grin to Ardent's face. His mother, as content as he was, gently asked him in a whisper tone, " how is it?". Moments past before Ardent finished his slow chewing, staring off into nothing. "It was good" he comments without making eye contact. Time seems to go faster, and that's how he preferred it. Every day was a mirror of the last. He was dropped off at school, took a test, fell asleep in one of his classes and went waited to be picked up. The school kids could barely mutter anything because there was next to nothing to talk about. Nobody cared to talk anyway. Hours passed yet Ardent still stood in the same spot before he realized his mother was not coming. The first thought in a while hit him. 'Maybe I should just walk'. And that he did. He lived an hour away by car, but he memorized the round fairly enough to walk. He was already an 11th grader yet this walking was a first. It felt...good. The details that where once a blur in a window shield where now like a perfect picture. Maybe it had been an hour or so, but Ardent realized something, ...the sidewalk was getting darker. The light ran away and he was quickly engulfed by an enormous shadow. He turned towards the source to find the one and only, Rainbow factory. He found himself fixated on the building for moments, appreciating the towering structure that seemingly grew to the heavens before continuing home. Returning home his mother was in the kitchen, cooking when she overheard the door and called out "I'm sorry I couldn't pick you up" where Ardent simply replied. "It's all good" and his mother following with "how was school?" Only to be answered with a simple "It was good". He ate yet another flavorless meal and went to bed.

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Ideas. Don't open unless you want chapter 2 spoiled.

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Rainbow factory Ideas do not open unless you want the ENTIRE story plot spoiled

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Nice story

Title: Weird dream

Basically, I was dancing with a girl that I assumed I liked and we kept moving from building to building, dancing different dances in an area that felt like the backstage of universal studios. What was weird is that she could teleport or at least appear from around corners without me knowing. Moreover, whenever she didn't think I was dancing good enough, she transformed into my dude friend until I danced good enough to bring her back. It basically stopped when Cotton Eyed Joe came on and I started dancing like a fool. Then two guys in a Mercedes showed up and they were like, "hey that's like from those old western movies with ugg....clint...." And I answered "Clint Eastwood"

I woke up after.
TLDR: danced with a teleporting lady until Cotton eyed Joe and Clint Eastwood got in the way.

Also: she changed clothing every time
Opponent only wore black
There was clog dancing?

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Kids were making fun of some other kid on a motorcycle throwing rocks and stuff until I told them to break it up saying "Why can you just let good things be" and it disbanding. Apparently, the teleporting girl noticed me and started walking with me, saying how it's cool how I only let a few people into my friend life.

I miss her

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Once upon a time, there was a beautiful man named Bruno Mars. Bruno was known across the land as a beautiful king of 'Uptown funk'-land. There he ruled over his kingdom and everybody loved him but he was told by all his loving fans to never go into the lake, for an evil witch lived there. However, Bruno said, "Julio get the stretch" and they cruised down to the shore. With his fresh shades on, he didn't see nothing wrong and thought that water was aight. So yeah know what a player do? This man slipped on his Gucci sandals and went to step into the pool but just before he could, a being burst out of the water. Bruno recognized this evil. It was Michelle Obama! She said, "I'm going to make all your school lunches taste like sand" and she passed the terrible school lunch act of 2008. Defeated, Bruno took the stretch to an old friend that he knew who could help. It took a bit of convincing and some Mexican food but his friend agreed to help. Armed with their new weapon, they headed back to the lake where out stepped the most powerful man in existence. MICHAEL JACKSON! With a mighty 'hee hee' Michelle fell to the power and turned to a ham sandwich. Finally, Bruno was sable to dip his feet into the make, the lake instantly turning to gold!...

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Title: I want love. Is that too much?

I hate my life guys
I just want somebody, anybody to tell me they love me
I just want to feel acceptable **** it
I want to know that all this hard work, all this dedication into making myself better is worth it
I want to know this LIFE is worth it
**** it, **** it all
I want...love guys...

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