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                                                Posted: Mon, 07/11/2016 07:26                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Marblepaw padded next to Flamepaw, as Brownfur and Bluekit continued quietly. "Something wrong?" she asked. "WindClan?" she sighed. "My brother gets all dopey like that over weird stuff... oh, no offense!" she quickly added.

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                                                Posted: Mon, 07/11/2016 07:28                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Flamepaw looked over and sighed softly "nah it's fine I don't take offense, I just have trouble focusing at times that's all" he meowed softly. "I'm sure I'll outgrow it" he purred, and heard Tigerpelt a bit further up. "Alright we're almost to the rocks"

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                                                Posted: Mon, 07/11/2016 07:34                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Brownfur padded over the hill to see the Sunningrocks. "Uh, so this place is called Sunningrocks. It's called that because it's the only area in BushClan, other than our camp, sorta, that isn't surrounded by trees. Naturally because of that, the rocks and slate around here is pretty warm."
Bluepaw put his forepaws on the rocks, to find that his mentor was telling the truth. "Interesting."
Marblepaw sat down away from the rocks, shrugging. She turned to her mentor, disregarding her brother's interest. "DarkClan, then?" she spoke.
To his own dismay, Bluepaw stood of Sunningrocks and padded to Brownfur.

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                                                Posted: Mon, 07/11/2016 07:37                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Flamepaw nodded, but didn't reply. He then looked at the rocks I'm sure I'll be able to help our Clan. I just need to control my attention span he thought to himself in annoyance.

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                                                Posted: Mon, 07/11/2016 07:54                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Sorry if I reply late, I'm not exactly supposed to be on this at the moment.

Brownfur looked at Tigerpelt to see if she was to do anything about her apprentice.
Meanwhile, Bluepaw padded over. "You seem snappy."
"I just want to see our territory so I can hunt or fight! I'm really anxious, to be honest." Marblepaw explained.
"How about you two? Is this your [i]first time[/] out of BushClan's camp?

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                                                Posted: Mon, 07/11/2016 08:06                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Moving to 'Private RP' ^^

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                                                Posted: Mon, 07/11/2016 16:23                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

(Thanks Silverstar)

Tigerpelt looked over to her apprentice. "Flamepaw would you like to see if StreamClan has been near Sunningrocks? Their border is just on the river stream over there" she meowed, and pointed where the border was. Flamepaw nodded and went to the stream.

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 03:32                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Thanks, Silverstar! By the way this is Snow don't worry.
Damn... I haven't been focusing properly I think... so Thistlestar is Marblepaw's mentor, and Brownfur has Bluekit, and Tigerpelt is training Flamepaw. Gotcha... so it's action time soon... but I'm about to watch Deadpool a wee bit later so will either NOT respond or respond very slowly.

Marblepaw looked at Thistlestar, shrugged and decided to follow. "You'll be okay." she meowed, as Bluepaw trudged along beside them.

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 03:39                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Alright, and yeah

Flamepaw looked over, and stopped at the stream. He parted his jaws, and smelled the air. "I know. I just need more training" he meowed with a purr.

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 04:18                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

"Any luck?" Brownfur decided to the cats, although they hadn't been to any parts outside of the camp except possibly Flamepaw they may smell something weird.
"It smells... weird." Marblepaw announced, as she turned to Flamepaw. Had he been there before?

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 04:41                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Flamepaw nodded as he went forward "yeah it smells like StreamClan might have crossed here" he said lowly. Tigerpelt sniffed for a moment before responding "there was a fight here a few nights ago. So the scent is stale, but good find"

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 04:59                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

"StreamClan smells BAD. Fishy. But not the evil fishy, I mean literally fish-smelling." Bluepaw murmured.
"Yeah." Brownfur sniggered, "I prefer our rabbits and voles, myself."

Vole.

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 05:12                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

XD

Flamepaw nodded in agreement, and looked at Tigerpelt. "Should we refresh the scent line?" He asked softly.

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 05:15                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

"Dibs not." both Brownfur and the leader's apprentice meowed in unison.
Bluepaw rolled his eyes.
"Flamepaw can, I guess." Brownfur declared. "So the others, uh, know where to put it, I guess...?" he shrugged. I'm a mentor. I can handle this... ordering around.

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 05:40                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Flamepaw sighed, and went to the scent boundary. He then renewed the scent lines, and walked back over "where to next"'he asked. Thistlestar then thought "we could go to the border near the gathering place" he suggested.

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 09:41                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

"No DarkClan then-" Marblepaw started.
"That is a good thing though." Bluepaw confirmed, while Brownfur nodded.
"Later, maybe. Plus the Gathering area is a good place to show more landmarks and stuff. This may be boring but it could save lives, you know."
After a rolling of eyes from Marblepaw, Brownfur continued, "If we were in a battle and Thistlestar ordered us to retreat to Sunningrocks, or the Gathering Place, you'd be stumped unless you knew where and what those landmarks are."
"Yep right okay." Marblepaw meowed loudly, then in a hushed tone continued to Flamepaw, "My brother has a like-minded talkative rubbish-in-a-fight mentor. Great."

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                                                Posted: Tue, 08/11/2016 17:07                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Flamepaw nodded and held a purr in amusement back "so where is the gathering place" he asked Thistlestar. The leader then looked over his shoulder "it's just over the hill. Not far now"

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/11/2016 03:17                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Should we have a surprise attack by the border or at the Gathering Place?

Brownfur stopped for a second. "I'll be back, I can smell a vole." he then added to his apprentice, "Tigerpelt can help you, for now."

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/11/2016 05:12                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

Sure sounds good

Tigerpelt nodded, and continued forward. She looked over her shoulder at the apprentices. "We're almost there" she mewled "can you smell anything"

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/11/2016 06:27                                                (8 Years ago)
                                            

With a hint of worry, Bluekit meowed, "Something bad."
"Yeah, but it seems old, I think." Marblepaw murmured - hoped.

I'll make an antagonist. Is it sorta bad to make a character hurt or injured to a somewhat significant extent? Or do you think it's all good? It's been a while... :3