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Chapter One

[Note - I'm not sure where this belongs, but this isn't fanfiction, it's just... Fiction. I put it here because I may make it semi-fanfic]

I woke up and all around me was darkness. I wasn't even dreaming. Just... Darkness. I wasn't cold, it was just dark.
I should introduce myself. My name is Elline. I'm a sophomore girl at a high school across from my house. I'm a straight A student. The nerd everyone picks on. I had black hair and blue eyes, and red glasses. I wore blue jeans and a blue tee. Black boots.

Then I saw stars, and I could move. It was like learning how to walk again. The place was beautiful. But every time I got close to a star, it would move. I blinked, and the stars all disappeared.

It was lonely without company.
I had a hairpin, so i took it off. Trying to draw blood to awaken myself or something. But when I tried, no blood came. No pain. No nothing.
I was... Dead?
[So sorry about shortness. I'm working on the second chapter right now]

Chapter Two
[Yawn. The stress of staying up all night.]

Wha huh?! Was my initial thought.
I couldn't be dead. Could I? Fear ran through my body like a snake's venom in my veins.
Snake venom... Why was that my thought? I saw light. And I was back on school grounds.

"Oh great! You're awake!" The nurse said, cheerfully.
"What happened?"
"A snake bit you, and you lost conscious. We thought you were dead! But that's silly!" SHe laughed nervously.
"Well, I'm fine, now if you excuse me, I'm going home."
No friends, no family, and now I came back from the dead. Hooray! I am a freak.

PLS CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!

this story seems cool, i want to read more... but i read the title as "shirt" the first time I looked at it XDD

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BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ITS BEEN 29 DAYS AND U HAVENT MADE CHAPER 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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