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The Everything Arts Club (Accepting!)
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(owo)
so,, many,,,, COLORs and aLL ARE BRiGHT
mmm.. amongus macaroni... hey guys? what's that? uh. guys? guys? you're gonna wanna see this....... [i proceed to get blown up]
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*cough*
I actually really like this.
Though, I'm gonna give you a bit of criticism - so you can improve. Don't take it as some kind of offence, okay? ;w;
The ears are really good, I like them. Mine usually get way to big. xD
The eyes are absolutely awesome, but for the blind (?) eye I'd leave the light spots. I guess the eye was scratched out - if that's the thing, then it'd be just a black hole instead if an blind eye. If the eye was just scratched so it got blind - like I said, I would have left out the light spots as they make the eye seem to be "alive" - as if it's just a special colored eye.
The scars on the blind eye though - are they fresh? If yes, they'd probably need to bleed (though you might just have left the blood away due to the PH rules). If not, they'd need to be in a skin color as they are old and not bloody anymore.
The muzzle is cool, though I think the chin is a little bit too "long"? idk how I could explain it, but I hope you get the point. It looks a little like a dog/wolf snout.
The neck is a bit thin.
The body in general - more like "the torso" I believe - is really good, though the belly is a bit thin. Is the cat supposed to be thin?
Also, the hips seem a bit odd and the tail looks a bit weird to me, as it starts very thin and then goes wider and wider. It's even wider than the legs - which shouldn't be unless it's a very, veeeeeery fluffy cat with lots of fur on her tail.
The legs are great though. Teach me how to draw the backer legs, please. ;u;
The paws also look good, but - cat's usually have 4 toes and the paws seem a bit clumsy. They are really big. I'd draw them smaller to make it look more elegant.
For the background I must say that you should try to draw the grass like grass blades. I know it is very much work, but I think it will be worth it.
And the moon is a bit big, and maybe you could have put a little more detail into it.
But who am I to complain? I honestly suk @ backgrounds, so yeah. xD
That's it for now. .o.
Thanks for the tips, and don't worry about the thing about me taking offence. Some people
I agree with Prim
Although I'm not sure what they meant by "draw them as blades"
But I'll be hopefully specifying what hey say by what I say next.
I suggest or the grass, to draw them as large chunks, instead of blade by blade. Or better, with a textured grass brush.