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The Everything Arts Club (Accepting!)
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Snappdragoons!
I'll be making guides soon. =w=
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well, I'm gonna be a bit harsh here, but... it's how I am when I critique nowadays.
You could really work on anatomy and proportions. On the Liepard/litwick (is It litwick) drawing, the legs are really small considered to the rest of the creature. They're also really short compared to it's body.
The ear on the back is oddly placed compared to the other, it'd be closer to the ear up front.
The whiskers? they look a bit odd? the way they seemed to be placed really close to the neck is weird looking, you should make it closer to the face.
I'd also fix the head size? it has a nice length, but it's too small, from bottom to top. With a small head like that, it's almost impossible to properly place everything.
The body is quite long.
that's enough butchering that poor thing.
For the Asriel drawing... Circle head? His head would be differently shaped, and there would probably be small tufts on his cheeks, not a perfect circle head. the arms are too small, the tail is odd, and the legs are too small as well.
The ears also look odd on both.
The Aurorous x Axew is actually pretty nice, anatomy-wise, but the head is oddly shaped.
the legs are a little short? otherwise okay.
The absol x Honedge? the head is oddly shaped, and the eyes are misplaced. The back arches way too far down, and the tail seems to be attached to a butt that sticks out a bit too far and is quite small.
sorry if I sound harsh!
I understand these are old, but I really want to help, tbh