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Lost & Found [Open & Accepting] (Semi-Lit)

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SandeviRae
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Posted: Fri, 12/02/2016 13:24 (8 Years ago)
(I'm sorry, but your form remains rejected)
(You don't really need more detail in whatever strange dreams he has, you need more detail on how your character looks and acts, as well as having a character not almost completely based off of someone from a video game.)
(This is rp is also set in modern times, so airships aren't really a thing?)
(But yeah, those dreams of your character's aren't really enough to facilitate the accepting of your form, sorry)
AntonZeck
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Posted: Fri, 12/02/2016 14:06 (8 Years ago)
(I deleted all about Cid from the form. I made him the... exact opposite of Cid in appearance.)
Quote from Kefka PalazzoLife. Dreams. Hope. Where do they come from? And where do they go? I'll destroy them all!
SandeviRae
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Posted: Fri, 12/02/2016 15:39 (8 Years ago)
(Your form still remains rejected. Though you're changing things about your form, you're still missing or lacking in the parts of the form, and have non-relevant/unfitting information in others.)
(I'm not sure that this rp is quite right for you, and I guess I'd suggest maybe trying a different roleplay instead. If you wish to create a new form, or fix your previous one, please palpad me instead to prevent unnecessary clutter in this thread, thanks)
AntonZeck
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Posted: Fri, 12/02/2016 15:55 (8 Years ago)
(I need a explanation about what kind of detail you want in his history as he is AMNESIAC!)
Quote from Kefka PalazzoLife. Dreams. Hope. Where do they come from? And where do they go? I'll destroy them all!
SandeviRae
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Posted: Fri, 12/02/2016 17:54 (8 Years ago)
(...You do know that that part of the form is ooc knowledge, right? It's there so other players know what to write for your character's backstory. All of the characters are amnesiac anyways, but they still have their history and relationships from before they lost those memories. Just because they're amnesiac doesn't mean they don't have a history. I'd suggest you go reread the first post. As said earlier, if you have more to say on issues with your character, please palpad me instead of posting here to prevent cluttering this thread.)