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Once pokemon X and Y came out,I was REALLY excited.For my starter,this time,(I always pick fire type as a starter)I picked Froakie.Just because one reason:-He evolves into Greninja.After having my second badge,I looked up on Google and saw how Espurr really looked like.I looked at both shiny and non-shiny and tought;"It'd be cool if I had an Espurr,whatever,Let's go to the GTS"And went trough the GTS.I saw only ONE Espurr;which is a shiny.I traded for my Simisear(which had been transfered from black/white)And received the shiny Espurr.But the thing that bugged me was the name.It was named"EeRiE"I felt a little eerie feeling in my mind but shrugged it off.A few minutes passed.I went to another town and the text box said;"EeRiE wants to know where it is.Tell him?"The Yes/No answer popped into another small box.I picked No and went to train my pokemon.I had put Froakie in first.Finally,I got a wild pokemon battle;Instead of my Froakie being first,EeRiE was first.And my Froakie was replaced as a wild pokemon.I tapped on run,but a text box appeared saying;"No,You can't run,EeRiE wants to fight"in red bloodlike writing.Then I picked items;another text box saying"Let EeRiE be your one and only..."and the text box was cut off,and replaced with a 3 min black out.On the 2 minutes,I heard a faint cry of a Froakie's.And then faded to normal.What a shock I've seen.The Froakie had an X on his cheek and loads of scars.Then he was silently standing on the pool of blood.A text box appeared;"Foakie had died!"Died?I tought and looked at froakie's stats;Its hp is 0,infact,EVERYTHING 0.I then closed the power off.


After 2 months,I went back on my pokemon X.I saw the intro normally.After I skipped the intro,What I saw on the top screen...It wasn't pokemon X anymore...But it wrote;"Pokemon X:Espurr's curse"I went on my save file was....awful....The npc's were laying on a pool of blood.And each step I took,the same text box appeared which is;"EeRiE will haunt you.........."In a bloodlike writing



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Some notes:
1.NO,I don't have pokemon X and Y
2.No,I don't have pokemon black and white

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That... Is creepy. I can't imagine a pink Espurr doing something like that...

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XD

I thought my creepypasta wasn't creepy enough

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Oh my gawd that actually sounds like a creepypasta. I want to play it though. For some reason I like horror like that. lol?

EeRiE is cool though. Shiny.

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I post things like these when I'm in the article mood :D

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It is indeed creepy, but it's really cliche and doesn't really sound as believable as some other ones I've read >w> But I like how you kept everything within the game and didn't put anything like, "When I went to sleep that night, I thought I saw movement in my closet and a pair of glowing, purple eyes." like wat :L

Overall, it's a good story but it could be improved a bit :3

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Thanks for the feedback!












This happens if I read too many creepypastas _ _lll

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I don't think I'm supposed to be reading this at 10:45 at night DX

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Pretty good. I like the idea of a "Pokèmon gone wrong" story.

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Omg this is awesome ;3;

Great job on this!!

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This stuff is great!!

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Meep,I really want to create a creepypasta too,But I get the feel I would be copying you. Even though mine would take place in the Unova region.

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