3/10
There is some good information about you, but the total and
complete lack of BBC Code makes it difficult to read. I also don't
like the excessive exclamation marks, the chatspeak (I luv
pikachu), and the last sentence about killing me and bowser is
difficult to read, and quite disturbing
4/10 its got info about you but theres no bbcode and its kind
of...plain? and a little hard to read
Through the woods a girl came sadly.
Something broken in her chest.
She had dared to love another.
Alas, no better than the rest.
Up my path the girl came gladly.
Something opened up my doors.
I longed to stop her bleeding heart.
And so I called her to my shores.
Those you trust will hurt you badly.
Something now I'm sure you see.
So drown your tears in me my dear.
As you drown, my dear, in me.
0/10
Just some broken HTML Code, which is not used here. No information
on you. Also, would have just been one of those "Pokémon Orphanage"
things, which are just fluff to fill in a space imo.
Through the woods a girl came sadly.
Something broken in her chest.
She had dared to love another.
Alas, no better than the rest.
Up my path the girl came gladly.
Something opened up my doors.
I longed to stop her bleeding heart.
And so I called her to my shores.
Those you trust will hurt you badly.
Something now I'm sure you see.
So drown your tears in me my dear.
As you drown, my dear, in me.