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Eclipse (The story of a shiny umbreon)
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Posted: Sun, 21/09/2014 11:17 (10 Years ago)
Preview-ish: To start off, this is my first fanfiction, so please don't judge me if this is a bit rusty. This is the story of a lone shiny Umbreon named Eclipse, a Pokemon who once had a trainer, but was abandoned in the city to fend for himself in the region of Unova. Of course, the story is suppose to be narrated by the shiny umbreon himself, so it is in first person, please don't judge me for this. I already feel uncomfortable enough for doing this in first person, and I made it even more challenging for myself by making the umbreon have a different personality than I. Anywho... I hope you enjoy! ^D^
This is the story of a mighty, brave shiny umbreon who found life in the world. The umbreon was rare and raged with amazingness, but even that is not enough to explain what this poor Pokemon had to do in this cruel world that Pokemon and human try to befriend in. The mighty umbreon's name was Eclipse and well... That's me.
I'd like to call this story 'The mighty Eclipse vs. The world', but that sounds a bit too... Um... Bedazzled, whatever the heck that means.
As I was saying, this poor umbreon was forced to depart from his poor trainer when he was ungratefully convinced that he was 'hurting' this Pokemon. It all started when N, a member of Team Plasma gave this speech about Pokemon being free, and Pokeballs and research hurting them. Personally, I'd like to Tail Whip this N character in the face.
So, my poor unsuspecting trainer forced me into the wild. A stupid move, really, I don't think he could live without me. On that day, he left me to fend for myself. My dim-witted trainer hadn't noticed what he'd done here. I wandered in sorrow to a forgotten corner of the city, and I was a flower blooming alone. A fabulous, mighty shiny umbreon forced to bloom alone in a forgotten city? How sad is that? Really. Well, I pushed my dreadful history away and became a mightier, stronger version of Eclipse. I trained alone in the abandoned part of the Unova's city, using creative ways to strengthen my skills. Of course, I had no idea where in Unova I was, I just remember it was abandoned and it was a city. I rarely got any food, but sometimes I would find scraps of berries and stuff like that. Once I even had to eat a rotted Magikarp. It was pretty gross. Sometimes poor Eclipse would be distressed about his ungrateful trainer. Some nights the young shiny umbreon would be angry.
So... I just only worked on the beginning. I may edit later if I get good reviews. Rate from 1-5 stars and maybe give a comment, please! I'll make the rest of the story if you people like it. Please be honest. Nothing will hurt me if there are bad results.
