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The Quantum Planet

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VarsityRisneX
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Posted: Sun, 10/08/2014 03:32 (9 Years ago)
The Quantum Planet ENDED
Ending is at the bottom
If you don't want to read a lot of background information you can skip to Chapter I.
Prologue
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In another universe there existed a planet, thousands of times larger than Earth but on this planet there were four domains, four massive domains. Each domain was different and was cut off from other domains with a powerful barrier. The barriers were invisible and prevented anything from seeing over to another domain. The barrier was created by two powerful mystic beings. These two beings sleep for a thousand years before awakening to grant a special wish to the destined one who was also born every thousand years. Each domain had its own kingdom ruled by its own powerful king/queen. In each domain also existed its own guardian. Each guardian protected its domain and were also created by the two mystic beings.

Map of the Four Domains and the Hidden Domains
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Sky Domain
Rulers: Dragas Family Line - Draconic Kingdom
Description: The sky domain is made up of hundreds of floating sky islands in varying sizes. The largest sky island is found at the center and is where the Draconic Kingdom is located.
Common Types: Dragon, Flying, Grass and Bug
Ice Domain
Rulers: None
Description: A desolate place where it is always snowing. The weather here is extremely cold and this domain consists of several large glacial islands surround by an vast ocean.
Common Types: Ice and Water
Dark Domain
Rulers: Crimson Night Family Line - Shadow Kingdom
Description: This domain has never seen a spot of sunlight. It is always dark here and in this domain there are endless amounts of graves and no plant life exists.
Common Types: Dark, Ghost, Psychic and Poison
Fire Domain
Rulers: Golden Phoenix Family Line - Volcanic Kingdom
Description: This domain is extremely hot and is surrounded by a vast amount of boiling lava. At the center of the gigantic island is a massive active volcano that is always shooting out magma.
Common Types: Fire, Fighting, Ground, Steel and Rock

Chapter I - Friends
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During the year x3000, Prince Acnologia was born and was destined to be king and inherit the throne of the Draconic Kingdom after his father, the Legendary King Drake. 10 years passed and in the year x3010 Acnologia and his best friend Frost were training. The two were sparring and as always Frost had won. Frost was a rare dragon being both ice and dragon making him feared by everyone for his type advantage over dragons. The two had just finished sparring and Frost said to Acnologia, "That's 137 to 0, but who's counting." Acnologia snickered and replied, "That's only because you're ice-typed!" Frost was older than Acnologia by a single year and his father was a general to King Drake, allowing the two to spend a lot of time together thus making the two have a close bond. Ever since he was young, Frost was gifted with the ability to fight. He was always at the top of his class and was incredibly smart. He was like an older brother to Acnologia and Acnologia even looked up to him. Acnologia on the other hand was also intelligent but not on the same scale as Frost. He was a little bit above average and was even able to hold his own in a fight against Frost. The two were friends doing everything together and were like inseparable brothers.

Chapter II - The Betrayal
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Years later in x3017, King Drake passed away. Acnologia was to ascend to the throne and take the ritual to become the new king. However, as he was about to say his vows, Frost interrupted the ritual. "You're not fit for the throne, you are far to weak! I should be the one to take the throne not only am I more powerful, I'm far superior to you," he said. "Frost, why must you interrupt the ritual! My father has passed and I am to take the throne! Why must you interfere with the intiation, aren't we friends?!" Acnologia replied. "No, I never was, just a servant to you but no more shall I be your servant, now fight me for if I defeat you I shall claim the throne and rule Dragas and this domain!" said Frost angrily. The two mighty dragons then clashed and engaged in an all at brawl. Acnologia fought bravely despite his disadvantage against Frost's ice type. He went all out using dragon claw knowing that dragon type was Frost's weakness. He continued to attack but Frost countered with blizzard and icy wind leaving Acnologia unable to get close and attack with dragon claw. Then Acnologia tried negate Frost's attack by attacking with dragonbreath but Frost was swift and dodged the attacks.

Chapter III - The King Frost I
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The two fought brutally, clashing as the air shook from their might and power. The audience fled as the two continued to fight. Only a few stood there watching the two continue to engage in the conflict. They were unable to help only watch for they weren't powerful enough to fight against Frost. It was a completely one-side battle, Frost was over taking Acnologia. Frost shot Acnologia with a powerful ice beam attack sending him plummeting to the ground. Acnologia hit the ground hard causing it to rumble. He was hurt badly but with the last of his strength he used his final trump card. A powerful move only known to the Dragas family line. With the last of his energy, Acnologia used Draco Meteor. A powerful beam shot up into the sky and through the clouds. Within a few seconds powerful meteors fell down and struck Frost. Frost was mortified, he has only heard stories of the move and never before has he ever seen such a powerful move. He was in uttershock and awe, he didn't try to counter. The meteors hit Frost causing him to descend onto the ground. The ground shook as he fell and hit the ground and with his last bit of strength he said to Acnologia, " I may have been defeated for now but I'll be back in the future to take over the throne!" Frost dropped to the ground fainting, Acnologia dropped to the ground soon after. The audience watched as Princess Freya rushed to Acnologia's side. Guards arrived to arrest Frost but suddenly a shroud of mist and cold air surrounded Frost. In a matter of seconds, Frost had disappear. As Acnologia watched, Freya screamed at the guards to get the medic and then Acnologia closed his eyes and fainted.

Chapter IV - Recovering
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Several weeks passed by after the fight. Acnologia laid in bed still recovering after being severely injured. By his side, his wife Freya sat there worrying about his recovery. She sat there holding her husband's arm, wondering if he'll ever wake up. Later that day, Acnologia awakens and Freya immediately calls for a doctor. "I'm okay, Freya there is no need to call a doctor. Don't worry I'll recover soon enough," he said. Freya's eyes began to tear up and her she tightened her grip on her husband's arm. "How can I not worry I'm your wife and during that entire conflict I was unable to help you!" Acnologia smiled at her and replied, "I'll be alright but always know that I'll love you, Freya." Freya began to cry as tears dripped down, Acnologia watched and put his arm on her shoulder to comfort her. He closed his eyes and fell back into another deep slumber. Freya sat there still worried but having been comforted she felt relief. But in her mind she was still extremely worried about Frost's words. Is he truly going to return she wondered. She was afraid of what might happen, because next time Acnologia might not make it out of the battle alive. As long as Frost is still out there, the kingdom will always be endangered by his presence.

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Chapter V - Rival or Foe
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While Acnologia was recovering, Frost had just awoken in a frozen cavern. "Ugh, where am I this places is weird. I've never been or even seen a place like this before," he said. The cavern was enormous as a powerful gust of wind and snow blew in. "Your in the ice domain and this cavern is the throne where the mighty glacial king once was," said an unknown voice. "Who are you!? Come out and face me," as Frost said this he struggled to get up. He had been seriously hurt from the battle and could barely stand up. Out from the shadows of the cavern, a weavile walked out. "I am Saber, my lord. I am not your enemy, your enemy is Acnologia." Frost felt his power emitting from his body. He knew for a fact that if he tried to fight back who would surely lose. "What do you want with me and why did you call me lord," he replied. "I want to help you, for you are the heir to the Glacial Kingdom. I am here to help you become the king of this kingdom and to bring it back to its once former glory," Saber said taking a step closer to Frost. Frost was confused but being a king interested him. "This doesn't make any sense the Ice domain is an empty shell, a deserted wasteland!" Saber grinned and said, "No, history has forgotten about this place. It was once ruled by a mighty and powerful king and you are the predecessor. You are to rise and unite the kingdom once more!" Frost smiled and let out a bone chilling laugh. This is perfect he thought, "I'll be coming back sooner than I thought Acnologia." He let out another laugh and grinned.

Chapter VI - Ascension
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"How are you sure that I am that king," questioned Frost. "I know because legend has it that a new king shall be born in the year x2999. That new king's body is frozen just like yours and he is related to the two deities of light and evil. Your father, who is he?" Saber said. "My father was a general for King Drake. He was a Glalie and his name was Frostbite." "That confirms it. Your father was a sage from the ice domain. He raised you in that kingdom for a reason and you are not his son. Your parents died when you were still a baby and Frostbite raised you for you are the new glacial king!" Frost bowed down to Frost. Frost was in shock he wasn't sure what to believe but if this is all true. Then he is the ruler of this massive domain and to all its civilians. Saber rose back up and guided Frost to his throne. It was in a massive glacial castle and inside was a massive throne made just for Frost. "From now on I shall be known as King Frost," he said to Saber. "Yes, my lord. I shall tell the civilians of your arrival. They shall obey your every command," Saber said. Saber left the castle to tell the news while Frost sat on the throne looking around. He was curious of what Saber meant when he said related to the deities of light and evil. But he was extremely delighted and now for his next plan was to not become the king of Dragas but to conquer it as well as the other two domains.

Chapter VII - The Glacial Kingdoms Return
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Several weeks later had passed and Acnologia had recovered. The ritual to become king had continue and Acnologia had finally become the new king of the Draconic Kingdom. His wife Freya also became the new queen but as happy as they were worried about Frost's return. "Acnologia, Frost is going to return at any moment of time," Freya said to him. "I know there is nothing I can do but wait and prepare. I have no clue as to where he went so countering will not be possible. For now, I am going to assemble the army and recruit the domain's most powerful and capable warriors," he said to her. Freya smiled a bit to Acnologia hoping that this will be a little bit safer for him and the kingdom. Acnologia sat down on his throne and took a sip of tea. He had to come up with a way to recruit some warriors against his battle against Frost and he knew for a fact that it won't be easy. Frost is far more skillful and talented and if he was at his full power, he would be able to take out the entire Draconic military. While Acnologia was pondering, in the Ice Domain, Saber had assembled the entire population to meet their new ruler. Frost took an oath and was crowned king. The citizens cheered and rejoiced in happiness for their new king has finally returned. After he was crown Frost made a speech thanking everybody but he also told the citizens of his plan to overtake the other domains and return the Glacial Kingdom to its golden reputation but even better then it once was before. "Everyone I need you all to help me for this is not a simple task. If we are to bring the Glacial Kingdom back to its powerful days we all have to work together. I'm asking you all to be apart of my army. The children, women, seniors and injured can all stay behind and watch the kingdom but for the rest I ask of you to join me on this conquest." Those of you who are more formidable and gifted please come to my palace. I want to assemble not only an army but give each of you ranks and those who are most dominant may be at my side as my royal guards." The crowd cheered and screams merriment as Frost went back into his palace. "The Glacial Kingdom is returning once more and it shall be more powerful than ever. You better be careful, Acnologia," said Frost with a smirk. And once more he let out another wicked and booming laugh which echoed throughout the frozen palace.

Chapter VIII - Preparation
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Back in the Sky domain, Acnologia was coming up with plans in preparation of a war that he knew would soon come. His right hand man and new general was Nova, a Haxorus who was known to be cruel and merciless but loyal and powerful with a good heart. "Nova, do you have a plans of what we should do," Acnologia asked. "For now all we can do is wait and prep the army, for we have no clue where Frost has gone. We should recruit some new soldiers as well and assign them with different ranks. The more powerful and trusted will be here with you my lord," answered Nova. "Alright, but how about you Nova," he replied. "I'll be close by and help you watch over the army in the front lines. I'll be taking your orders and if there is an emergency I'll be back as soon as I can," Nova said. Acnologia nodded to Nova and gestured for him to proceed as he had said. Acnologia sat there but he stood up and out of his throne and walked over to the Sacred Room. That room was where the Sages were and Acnologia sought guidance and training. He walked in through the door and there he was welcomed by the 5 sages. The 5 sages were wise and powerful though they were old they were still able to hold their own in a fight. The 5 sages were Crimson, a Salamence, Severus, a Garchomp, Jade, a Flygon, Azure, a Altaria, and Hydra, a Hydreigon.

Chapter IX - Training PT I
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"Welcome Acnologia," said Crimson as he and the other 4 sages bowed down to him. "Uhh, no please don't you are the sages, bowing down to me is not needed. If anything I should bow down to the 5 of you," Acnologia said to them. "No, you are the new king this despite our age and your respect for us we still bow down to you for you are our ruler," Jade replied. Acnologia nodded and bowed down to the 5 sages for he respected them greatly. "Seeing that you have come here for your first time. You must be seeking something especially after that accident," Jade said to him. "Yes, you are correct. I am seeking knowledge, power and wisdom. I know for a fact that a war is going to come very soon and I need your help. I plead to you please guide me and teach me of your powers and pass down your wisdom to me. I know I won't be powerful enough to defeat Frost the way I am now so please train me," he pleaded to the 5 sages. Severus got up and he looked straight into Acnologia's eyes. "Before we can begin, we must test you to see if you are capable of even beginning this rigorous training," the wise sage said. Acnologia nodded in acknowledge and knew that once he said accepted he can not back out. "Come with me," said Severus gesturing Acnologia to come over. Acnologia followed and entered into another room. The room was massive filled with crystalite marble, an extremely hard material. The sage turned around and told Acnologia, "Come at me with everything you've got, I need to see your abilities to see what are your weaknesses and strong points are." Acnologia was reluctant, "I don't want to hurt you Severus!" "Don't look down upon me and treat me like an enemy. Now! Come straight towards me with everything you've got, like your battle against Frost. Acnologia nodded and immediately lunged towards Severus. Severus went straight towards Acnologia, that surprised him and while he was off guard, Severus tackled Acnologia with a powerful dragon rush. The immense force struck Acnologia sending him to fall over. He was astounded by the sages' capabilities. Despite his old age the sage was nearly able to knock Acnologia in a single blow. Severus then rushed towards Acnologia to inflict another strike. Acnologia immediately got up and flew up towards the top. He knew he had to use a powerful moves if he wanted to win this fight so he began charging up a powerful beam. Massive amounts of energy gathered up into Acnologia's mouth so he could ready a hyper beam.

Chapter X - Training PT II
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The energy continued to gather inside of Acnologia's mouth in the form of a sphere. The air around the energy continued to swirl as he continued to gather more and more energy. Severus felt the enormous amount of energy and immediately rushed towards Acnologia to stop him from finishing. The amount of energy began to expand as more and more energy was gathered. The Sage knew he wouldn't be able to make it in time and released a powerful dragon breath. The powerful move went straight towards Acnologia but it missed. Acnologia was able to dodge the powerful attack and knew that he had to release the energy. He aimed and the powerful hyper beam shot out. The beam cuts through the air heading straight towards the sage at an incredible speed. Severus knew he wouldn't be able to avoid the powerful beam and he knew if he were hit, it'd cause severe injuries. As the beam drew closer, Severus used sandstorm causing the arena to be filled with sand. Acnologia wasn't able to see Severus at first but the powerful beam plowed through the sand giving a small glimpse of vision. After using sandstorm, Severus used twister on himself. A powerful gust of wind surrounded him gathering a massive amount of sand. The sand twister surrounded Severus and the beam struck the twister. The wind and sand continued to swirl around Severus protecting him making the beam unable to pierce through the thick sand. Acnologia was stunned, he has never seen such a thing. The sand started to settle and the wind started to dissipate and he began flying towards the sage ready to strike him. Acnologia soared towards Severus and as he got closer he used dragon claw but Severus swiftly countered with dual chop. Both his arms glowed with green energy and with one arm he deflected Acnologia's arm and with his other arm he struck Acnologia on his back. Acnologia fell towards the ground and the crashed down into the sand. The sage dropped down and walked over to Acnologia. "You've done well though you are not ready," Severus said to him. "Did I...did I pass," he asked. "Yes you've passed but you are far to weak the way you are now. I will be training you from now on and once I'm done you've still got to get the training from the other 4 sages," Severus said. He gave Acnologia a hand and helped him up. Then, he helped to carry him to the medic. "Your training is only starting, the battle just now, I wasn't even using my full power," Severus whispered to Acnologia.

True Ending - How it Was Supposed to End
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After finishing his training Acnologia, meets up with Nova to see the army has been assembled. The two have a conference discussing what they should do. It was then a massive ball of ice is launched towards the kingdom. No one was hurt but in the distance Frost's glacial army marches towards the sky kingdom led by Saber. Acnologia takes to the skies and sees that Frost is not around. He goes back to Nova where they 2 decide to split up the army into two groups. 40% of the army will stay behind to protect the kingdom and fight against the small glacial army. The other percent will be led by Acnologia to launch a full assault on Frost and his kingdom. With this Acnologia starts to leave but told Nova to start forming alliances for this isn't going to be a simple war. Acnologia leaves with a majority of the army and puts Drake a Druddigon his second in command to stay here and lead the other army. As Acnologia leaves, Nova immediately travels to the Dark domain to meet with their king. Having arrived there shortly, Nova meets Eclipse a Zoroark who is the king of the Dark domain. While Nova discusses with Eclipse of the upcoming war, Frost is talking with Polar a Beartic and his second in command. He tells of Polar to go to the fire domain and form of an alliance. Knowing Acnologia would form alliances, Frost wants to form an alliance with the Fire domain in order to balance the battle.

To be continued...
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