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Fujiwa OFFLINE Forum Posts: 22 |
Posted: Fri, 19/07/2013 03:11 (10 Years ago) |
It reads : "...What's that? Those Aurora look amazing!" I think it might want to read : "... What's that? Those auroras look amazing!" or maybe "... What's that? That aurora looks amazing!" The second one because I don't think you can see multiple auroras at one time, unless you can, then I'm stupid. ; o ;' Sorry if I'm becoming bothersome xD [Read more] |
Fujiwa OFFLINE Forum Posts: 22 |
Posted: Thu, 18/07/2013 20:27 (10 Years ago) |
"Is that gusty! It blows me almost away!" Maybe it should read something like this (if possible?): "Is that gusty!? It almost blows me away!" I put a question mark in the first sentence because it seems like a question, but it sounds a little weird... I hope I helped~ ; w ; [Read more] |