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Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 14:09 (10 Years ago)
	"Naah," she waved it away "We're simply talking about his bed. It's like really huge and fluffy, but he didn't believe me" [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 14:03 (10 Years ago)
	"I totally told you!" her huge grin was back on her face, as she looked at Lucas [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 13:54 (10 Years ago)
	"Shouldn't you be happy about it?" Hage' asks looking at him. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 13:18 (10 Years ago)
	Hagetaka looked his way, hearing the part about DNA. She frowned, her eyes fallowing his every move, trying to figure him out. "I haven't thought about it yet" the Mandibuzz answered without even looking at Lucas. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 13:10 (10 Years ago)
	( Tom and Lucas are both shiny umbreons, I'm a Mandibuzz, there's also a Luxray, but she's offline) She started nodding furiously, not wanting to talk with her mouth full. That was rude, after all. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 13:04 (10 Years ago)
	(Were're in the cafeteria, but others in their rooms, I think.) "They can tell you any stories they want, it won't change the truth" Hage' puffed her cheeks even more, before putting another mouthful, chewing with vigor. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 12:46 (10 Years ago)
	"Nice to meet you too shy pants! How about you two sit down?" Hage' chirped, looking up at them. "And compliments won't gonna save you." she added with a puff of her cheeks. But you could see in her eyes that everything was already forgiven. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 12:27 (10 Years ago)
	"Huff, I'm with headphones and I can hear everything, yet you talk with people with ear plugs? Not very nice.." Hage' turned her head a bit in fake anger. "But I heard nothing of what you said, Tom. Would you mind to repeat a bit louder?" [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 12:14 (10 Years ago)
	She swallowed, cracking his brother a smile. "Nice to meet you, Tom! I'm Hagetaka, but you should introduce yourself, you know?" [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 12:00 (10 Years ago)
	"mmmmhmmm" she nods, since her mouth is occupied with food. But when Kioiki didn't say anything past that, she knitted her eyebrows and started waving with her hand. She tried to encourage the other without any words. When Lucas called her she looked up at him, not very happy, since when she talked to him, she got a cold shoulder. But in the end rolled her eyes and waved him over. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 11:53 (10 Years ago)
	Hagetaka's mood drops when Lucas ignored her in favor of his brother. Upset she looks back at Kioiki, giving her a smile. "Maybe you'd like to be friends?" she thought for a moment, before correcting herself once again. "You don't need to answer that, it was way too soon. How about instead you tell me more about yourself? Like what do you like on your free time and ect.?" [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 11:43 (10 Years ago)
	"That's great to hear! I can't wait to meet everyone in this school, I only transfer two days ago, but I'm already pumped!!" she announced to Kioiki. That's when Hage' noticed Lucas walk in, she shouted out to him, too. "Morning Lucas! Maybe you want to join me an Kioiki here?!" [Read more]

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Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 11:25 (10 Years ago)

Hagetaka enters the cafeteria, her headphones present and covering her ears. She humms the tune to the currently playing song, as she heads to take some pancakes and tea.

She's too busy enjoying herself to notice the other student, so she sits at the same table without asking permission first. She starts to eat her food, her eyes finally focusing on the other gijinka. There's clear shock, as Hage' quickly tries to amend her mistake.

"Good morning, sorry I didn't see you there. Actually I haven't seen you at all.. My names Hagetaka, and you?" she smiles towards the other.

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Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 11:11 (10 Years ago)
	Hagetaka woke up feeling pretty good, she did her usual morning routine, then headed out to catch some breakfast. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 07:49 (10 Years ago)
	That sounds like a great idea! I've already read your first day, and I must say it was pretty great. Now I'm moving on to the next two days, but my best guess would be - they're as great as the first! You're a truly wonderful writer. I wish I could see some mistakes to point out, but my level of writing isn't anywhere close to yours, so I don't.. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Thu, 13/08/2015 07:32 (10 Years ago)
	The first two paragraphs are a bit confusing, since first you talk about the pokemon and it's trainer, than jump to the reader all of a sudden. But besides it, I think the story worked out pretty great! As for the RP part, it could, if you added more detail and depth to it, like what kind of world is around you, what are the other RPers, and so on. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Wed, 12/08/2015 18:55 (10 Years ago)
	"Heeh? Oh, no, no one! I'll be going now!" She turned beat red from her nervousness, then ran off towards her room in a hurry, stumbling a few times on plain air or her own feet. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Wed, 12/08/2015 18:48 (10 Years ago)
	"Yea, someones waiting for my return and I'm beat! Some sleep would be pretty great right now!" Hage' allowed herself to be laid, trying her hardest not to trip on or crash anything. [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Wed, 12/08/2015 18:41 (10 Years ago)
	"yeah I do! Just help me to get to the door and I'll be out of your hair!" [Read more]

Giltine13 ONLINE Forum Posts: 464	Posted: Wed, 12/08/2015 18:35 (10 Years ago)
	"I have no idea.. I probably should head to bed. It's getting pretty late. You should head, too, you wouldn't want your headache to come back.." [Read more]

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