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Posted: Tue, 07/08/2018 01:03 (6 Years ago) |
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Posted: Tue, 07/08/2018 01:00 (6 Years ago) |
"Don't know, but if they do, it'll make my night," Aite snickered quietly, smiling. "They're definitely not hopeless, though. They've proved themselves on that front," Toka pointed out. [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 21:22 (6 Years ago) |
"It means no worriesss, for the rest of your daaays," Aite hummed softly, shoving his last bite of ice cream into his mouth to shut himself up. Toka smiled and kissed him back quickly. "Man. We are so much better at that than them," She chuckled quietly, casting a glance at Tiger and Mira. [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 17:09 (6 Years ago) |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 17:05 (6 Years ago) |
"I get it. That makes sense," Aite nodded. "Hakuna matata or whatever." Toka smiled and nudged him back. "You were a help in getting Tiger more cautious too, I'm sure." [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 16:26 (6 Years ago) |
I'm always so intrigued by your poetry because you write it so well. That was expressive, deep, and extremely thoughtful. Coming from a person who's always been awful at expressing emotion, it was terrific. @Mimi While I'll admit I've never been a huge fan of x readers, that was very heartfelt and well-written. The way it was written really showed a ton of emotion and the general feel of the situation. My only gripe is that the point of view seems kind of off sometimes. I can tell that you want to write in second person and stay in second person, but it seems to shift to third person omniscient from time to time when you write what Loki is feeling. @junguwu Ah, thanks! I wasn't sure if it was too... Weird of an idea or something, so thanks for the feedback :3 As for yours, I'm genuinely invested in this. The characters all seem well-developed and real, and you definitely see how the world affects them. It's really great! @everything/everyone else ...No comment, I don't feel like starting an argument lol [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 04:40 (6 Years ago) |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 04:39 (6 Years ago) |
"Ooh," Aite's gaze lit up with interest. "Sounds terrifying. But... Cool that she found you, right? I always kind of wish I came from a colony. Gives you some place to return to and go 'wow, I grew up here'." Toka smiled and finished her share of the ice cream as well. "...And not to sound narcissistic or anything, but I'm just going to go ahead and take some of the credit for Mira being more careful now, too." [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 04:24 (6 Years ago) |
Colin blinked slightly. "Well I guess we'll have to see then," He mumbled, following and jogging slightly. "The boots are the one thing I miss about the Rocket uniform. I will not lie." [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 04:18 (6 Years ago) |
Aite nodded. "When was the last time you saw her?" "Thanks to the group," Toka pointed out gingerly. "But I'm proud of him for doing so." [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 04:05 (6 Years ago) |
Colin glanced over to Snow before looking back at Lum. "Regardless of whatever machine they may be using, they're still Rocket, and Rocket still has more flaws than any evil team ever. They work off of spite. That's how you get under their skin. That's how it's been and that's how it will be forever." [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 04:02 (6 Years ago) |
"Heh, sounds like a case of sibling rivalry to me," Aite grinned. "Think you could beat her in a fight?" "And bad luck. Oodles of bad luck. Self-inflicted bad luck, mostly, but bad luck nonetheless," Toka shrugged, taking another bite of ice cream. [Read more] |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 03:58 (6 Years ago) |
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Posted: Mon, 06/08/2018 03:46 (6 Years ago) |
Colin scoffed. "That would mean that they have some semblance of a strategy," He grumbled, though it was really more to comfort himself. [Read more] |
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Posted: Sun, 05/08/2018 03:10 (6 Years ago) |
Aite nodded. "Viridian is nice. But I couldn't imagine growing up there." Toka laughed. "He seems to have a lot of moments of dumb luck, doesn't he? Or... Luck in general, I suppose?" [Read more] |
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Posted: Sun, 05/08/2018 02:29 (6 Years ago) |
"That's fine, actually. Unova can wait. I've never liked the city anyway," Aite shrugged. "And that's mostly what Unova is, y'know? Sure, it's... Home, kind of, but it's NOT home. That makes no sense but that's pretty much the best way to describe it." Toka smiled. "...Just out of curiosity, how do you think Tiger guessed our favorite flavors the first time he met us?" [Read more] |
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Posted: Fri, 03/08/2018 19:01 (6 Years ago) |
Aite grinned and shrugged, licking his ice cream. "Sorry not sorry I guess," He shook his head. "But legit, I wouldn't mind going back to Unova. Haven't been there in... How old is Mir now? Nineteen? ...At least twenty years." "Mhm," Toka nodded, eating a small bit with her spoon. "But when it melts it'll be a delicious chocolate-vanilla ice cream soup." [Read more] |
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Posted: Fri, 03/08/2018 16:59 (6 Years ago) |
Aite snickered. "I could look like Reshiram if I wanted to. ...Yo. If we ever go to Unova, I'm doing that as a little prank." "Yeah," Toka agreed, grabbing the other one. "As long as it's ice cream, I don't care how it's consumed." [Read more] |
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Posted: Fri, 03/08/2018 16:31 (6 Years ago) |
"It's because of you, you humble little rodent," Aite snickered. Toka smiled back. "One bowl. Two spoons. Like the milkshake, but with a bowl. And spoons." [Read more] |
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Posted: Fri, 03/08/2018 15:58 (6 Years ago) |
Aite handed Toka and Kibo the chocolate and vanilla ice cream and took his own rocky road ice cream. He handed the milkshake to Mira and Tiger and shoved some pokedollar in the tip jar before shaking the human illusion and sitting down by Cyndaquil. Toka smiled and took another table for her and Kibo. [Read more] |