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Pokesona/OC Bio/Backstory commissions!
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So I've done this on Lioden before ( Still doing it ) and I found I really like writing! And on popular demand , I'm doing it here now too!
First of all , credit me when you're using! ( In case you need it on Deviantart m my DA account is A-Sinning-Midget
The final results will be PM'ed to you.
Here's some Lioden examples ( That are safe for PH. Lioden is 16+ so I'm only using the ones PH friendly. They're not that long though. ) :
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After the sudden unexpected death of
the former king Inlé-Rah , Mwali , dubbed Frith-Rah by his pride ,
stepped up to take the throne since Kannapalli , another male ,
refused. Mwali was raised in secret by his mother , who was afraid
of what Inlé-Rah would do if he found out she had a son that was
not his. However , Inlé-Rah had proven to not be so evil as they
thought. He fell to his death as he was trying to defend Menhit
after Apedemak killed her mother , Tefnut.
Now Mwali leads as a gentle , kind leader , who , unlike Inlé-Rah , lets his lionesses free to chose what they want. He earned his nickname thanks to his bright personality. His nickname , Frith-Rah , means Lord Sun. The opposite of Inlé-Rah , which meant Lord Moon.
Unlike Inlé-Rah , Mwali sticks to just one lioness in his pride. His queen , Nyreem-Rah. Although both of them have decided to still help other prides out by providing cubs. Mwali has decided to keep the mighty Lothaire as an ally , despite their personality clashing , as Mwali is more laid back and gentle.
Once night falls , Mwali takes the time to have a conversation with the former kings. He found out that way that this pride had been lead by good lions. First , Nizno , a strict , but loving man. Then , Vervain. A lion who definitely wasn't the brightest. Okay , plain out stupid. And last , Inlé-Rah. Deeply admiring them , he wants the three to live on in memory within the pride. Se he decides to tell their stories. Nizno's story about how he started this pride , his journey until how he got here and eventually passed away without reaching a ripe old age. Vervain's story about how he started the alliance with Lothaire as a young lion , and how he still managed to rule over and defend his pride despite being the laughing stock of many lions. His death was not peaceful , however. And , of course , Inlé's story , about how he came up with the idea of having "Rah" behind every lion's name that had a higher status. How the events surrounding Apedemak made him decide to turn good and how he saw he was starting to turn into a copy of him and wanted to change it. For now , the stories are told like any other , but Mwali is sure that in two or more generations , they will start to become myths of mighty lions that once lived. Holding on to that feeling , he now lives to protect the pride that was once theirs.
Now Mwali leads as a gentle , kind leader , who , unlike Inlé-Rah , lets his lionesses free to chose what they want. He earned his nickname thanks to his bright personality. His nickname , Frith-Rah , means Lord Sun. The opposite of Inlé-Rah , which meant Lord Moon.
Unlike Inlé-Rah , Mwali sticks to just one lioness in his pride. His queen , Nyreem-Rah. Although both of them have decided to still help other prides out by providing cubs. Mwali has decided to keep the mighty Lothaire as an ally , despite their personality clashing , as Mwali is more laid back and gentle.
Once night falls , Mwali takes the time to have a conversation with the former kings. He found out that way that this pride had been lead by good lions. First , Nizno , a strict , but loving man. Then , Vervain. A lion who definitely wasn't the brightest. Okay , plain out stupid. And last , Inlé-Rah. Deeply admiring them , he wants the three to live on in memory within the pride. Se he decides to tell their stories. Nizno's story about how he started this pride , his journey until how he got here and eventually passed away without reaching a ripe old age. Vervain's story about how he started the alliance with Lothaire as a young lion , and how he still managed to rule over and defend his pride despite being the laughing stock of many lions. His death was not peaceful , however. And , of course , Inlé's story , about how he came up with the idea of having "Rah" behind every lion's name that had a higher status. How the events surrounding Apedemak made him decide to turn good and how he saw he was starting to turn into a copy of him and wanted to change it. For now , the stories are told like any other , but Mwali is sure that in two or more generations , they will start to become myths of mighty lions that once lived. Holding on to that feeling , he now lives to protect the pride that was once theirs.
Yes , that example is pretty short , but I have written bio's of 1000+ words.
Payment I accept :
Pay what you think it's worth!
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Username :
Character I'd like a bio for : [Link to the character]
Basic things I want in the story : [Leave blank if you want it to be a surprise]
Basic personality of the character : [Leave blank if unknown]
Username :
Character I'd like a bio for : [Link to the character]
Basic things I want in the story : [Leave blank if you want it to be a surprise]
Basic personality of the character : [Leave blank if unknown]
Slots ( One slot per person. 1 character = 1 slot ) :
1. -Hau ( Finished , 703 words )
2. SensGirl25 ( Not started yet )
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Just a reservation post because I can't link the character when I'm on mobile.
Username : -Hau
Character I'd like a bio for : him
Basic things I want in the story : n/a [just don't let it be too dark; more happy; also he's still pretty young]
Basic personality of the character : [see "personality" on his profile]
( I hope this is okay;; )
• woah-oh, higher, i'm going up over there •
• woah-oh, higher, i'm going to fly higher •
Character I'd like a bio for : Lombard (the female OC on the left)
Basic things I want in the story : how she got the love of 80s music, and how she learned about the library
Basic personality of the character : skilled and sporty