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Crest Of Beginings

Forum-Index Roleplay Crest Of Beginings
Demon_Child
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Posted: Sun, 05/06/2016 08:50 (7 Years ago)
You, are a pretty normal kid, as normal as one in Harlet(made up place on earth in 2016 so people that are not america will feel excluded) You find yourself in your very very messy room, which you hate to clean. You sit happily in your chair; checking your friends updates. You.... don't really have any but you like to think you do! While you're happily enjoying much needed down time for summer, you hear a knock on your door. oh freaking god it's a parent.. as you open the door... you're not greeted by your loving parent, but two odd figures..They tell you to come with them, oddly telling you nothing, only that you've been chosen. This is really...(begin!)
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Gender:
Age:
Appearance:
Species:
^(options are demon, angel, mutant of sorts. all must be Half Human. or you can be a normal human)

Rules: 1) no themed characters, like no pokesonas, trollsonas, or anything. un themed. 2) no swearing please! 3) : try to have as much fun as possible!!
You can have your own story and wait for me to update certain things, or team up with me and others :3 just post it here please
( for extra info, at such an early stage, idk how else id add it in. No, only humans are normal, the rest like demons and angels are thought up as parts of religion, nothing to be thought as real, and mutants are like neko girls, super humans, and maybe telekinetic or physic people.)
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Name: Chance
Age: 15 and a half
Appearance: Blond hair with black streaks. left eye blue, right yellow. pale skin.
Species: half demon half human
Demon_Child
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Posted: Mon, 06/06/2016 21:41 (7 Years ago)

Title: Update!!<3

Everything has gotten updated thanks to help!! so feel feel to join in its back and up and i'm SO SORRY for drama. i'm dramatic at times.

i'm thinking of this being a school/high school kinda thingie, so if you wanna, groups can be formed. but don't exclude ppl please!!

just so you all know, CuppaJoel has been helping me alot with this to make it as best it can be. so in a way, good job to you for making this too!! ^.^
CuppaJoel
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Posted: Tue, 07/06/2016 02:13 (7 Years ago)
Here is a hint, to help future roleplays: give us rules to abide by, genre synopsis, a plot that introduces a conflict or mystery to resolve and a direction for the roleplay to progress. All you did was tell us that two people showed up to our doorstep. What purpose do they have to be here? Why shouldn't we just call the police (which would end the RP rather quickly.) You told us literally nothing of consequence to pique our interests. Present a problem to be solved.

Also, work on your grammar, and "forgetting" the name makes you seem amateurish and that turns off a lot of prospective RPers. It actually looks like you didn't put much effort or thought into the roleplay. I'm not saying that you didn't -- but that's what it seems like when you don't bother proofreading.

In short, perhaps entertain the theory that it wasn't that we were rude, but that your post seemed incomplete or simply didn't interest anyone. Again, you gave little by means of plot. If I say "The cat", I have no right to call you rude when you don't bite at the bit to join a roleplay with me. No one on this forum owes you a roleplay. Keep that in mind.
Demon_Child
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Posted: Tue, 14/06/2016 15:59 (7 Years ago)
bump :3
Giyu
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Posted: Thu, 23/06/2016 13:12 (7 Years ago)
Name: Coral
Gender: Female
Age: 14
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Species: Mutant
Demon_Child
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Posted: Tue, 28/06/2016 03:34 (7 Years ago)
accepted, very very pretty :3
Demon_Child
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Posted: Thu, 21/07/2016 17:01 (7 Years ago)
(waiting for maybe 2-4 more people, sorry for le long wait. kinda annoyed by how long i've had to -.- it's not that bad! so wat if it's not pokemon l:I )