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You're accepted! I'm gonna have to make the descriptions for your moves because you didn't provide any. However, you can change them at any time if you're not pleased! Just palpad me! :)

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Without the details, I had to improvise. Hope you're okay with it. :| (Y)

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Moves (remember, I'm just basing them off the names, so if you want the effect/description to be different, just palpad me!)

Quote from Xerneas

You're late. Skywarrior. Luckily, you're not as late as the rest. I've deployed only two troops to take back the rest of our kingdom. While I'm happy that you decided to come here, I know it was also your initiative to come along, because of the ultimate weapon that took over our lands for many years. *Xerneas tosses a shield at the silhouette which stood in the shadows*

Remember to reply with good grammar and at least 3 sentences!

-I was slowed by the rain. You know. Fire type against water from rain. No chance for me...

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Quote from Xerneas

*narrows his eyes at Skywarrior while the badge teleports him on top of the location where the rest of the two characters are located*

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Quote from Setting the Scene

All of the characters are gathered around the unknown fusion's unconscious body. For some reason, nobody else seems to notice the strange person.

Btw, I made you a portable form, @Dragon, use it in your post to display your character's info!

-I am Skywarrior. This... is a Pokemon Fusion! I had never seen one like this but I have grim news.
Mew,Moltres and Articuno were destroyed. Zapdos and Mewtwo escaped but Mewtwo is dying.

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Name: Vector
Gender: Male
Appearance:

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Character's Typing Psychic, Fire

Vector narrows his eyes at Skywarrior after staring at his shield for a while. I'm guessing Xerneas sent you? I suppose you're one of us then? Also, I'm pretty sure your 'grim news' is outdated, because they've been dead for quite a while. Anyways, what do you think we should do with the girl? I had to knock her out of it after Olika here encountered her.

(Donald Bump. ^^)

-Question her. This way we could get it all. I have some not so outdated news: Yveltal didn't kill Darkrai. He placed his wing on Darkrai's forehead, Darkrai became purple and he suddenly attacked me! Yveltal found a way to Shadowify Pokemon.

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Name: Olika
Gender: Female
Appearance:

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Character's Typing Normal

Sorry for not being on recently! Been a bit busy, so sorry about that! T-T

Olika nervously stepped forward and sniffed the creature before looking up at Vector with wary eyes in a suspicious glance, "Might as well bring it to Xerneas." she decided after a minute, before straightening up in posture and flicking an ear, "She might be a threat, we don't know, but we should at least see if she's here for a purpose." but she seemed undecided in tone and looked at the unconscious body quite sympathetically, unsure of what would be in store for the human.

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Quote from GameMaster

The heroes make their way back to Xerneas' Temple.

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Quote from Xerneas

Xerneas appears as a hologram from their shield-badge things.
"Ah! It seems that you're on your way to my temple. Before you go and do that, I need you to go and explore Pallet City (Pallet City is the newly developed Pallet Town, with a statue of Red in the center.), there seems to be some mysterious activity going on in there. Meet up with Professor Slowbro near the center of the city. (I'll be drawing a map soon.)

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Quote from GameMaster

You stop by at the center city, and there doesn't seem to be anyone around besides a Pokemon in a hoodie, seemingly smirking. He/She looks up and smirks at the team.
"Your move."
There is a large tremor, then suddenly, fire spews up from the ground, prompting you to dodge!

*Vector ran straight for the mysterious Pokemon to fire some bullets at them, but they are easily blocked by shadowy hexagon shields in midair* "Tsk. I guess you're a fire-type just like me."

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"I'm pretty sure you should be more worried about who you're dealing with here."
*blows Vector away with hydro pump*

A battle will take place soon. Keep roleplaying until I make a post that includes the battle.

-Wait! Who's that?!
Shadow Darkrai suddenly appears.

-IT'S DARKRAI! I told you that he was turned to the dark side!

He was holding the dead body of Lugia.

-Not my brother too! And no. Lugia was alive yesterday.

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(Hey there, unfortunately I'm pretty much gonna be inactive this week due to an expedition but will be back on Thursday/Friday. Sorry about the delay but I thought I'd let you know beforehand!)

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Name: Olika
Gender: Female
Appearance:

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Character's Typing Normal

Olika snarled, drawing her jaws back to reveal small, but thorn-like teeth. Suddenly, she leaped to one side and then another, seemingly dodging the exploding infernos from the ground, but not showing much fear as she remained close to the twisting flames. With an irritated growl, she swiftly darted closer to the unknown pokemon but rather than attack it head on, she faced this creature defiantly with a high-screech.

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-Wait... Is that Shadow Zapdos? Not Zapdos too! And... MOLTRES?! HE WAS KILLED! It can't be worse!

Suddenly, Lugia is revived by nothing and becomes Shadow Lugia and Shadow Articuno and Mewtwo arrive.

-Shouldn't have said that...

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(Okay... okay. Not too many Shadow Pokemon at once...)

(To be faced one by one, Shadow Mewtwo is actually Yveltal himself so he runs quickly.)

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(Try to let the plot develop itself. I mean, don't make Shadow Pokemon spontaneously come in out of nowhere, and suddenly Shadow Mewtwo is actually Yveltal. I'm trying to control the story that that it has a true, unique plot and so that it doesn't explode into random things happening all at once, like quite a few examples on Pokeheroes. I mean, yes you can control things that happen, but nothing too gargantuan that'll revolutionize the story. Try to cope with what you know. Remember, you're playing the story as if you're reading a book.

Example:
What happened: The hooded Pokemon summons fire from the ground... (which is to be explained later)

An Acceptable Logical Reaction: You dodge the fires coming out from the ground./You protect yourself from the fire.

An Illogical Reaction: Suddenly, Shadow Pokemon come out of nowhere and Shadow Darkrai appears holding the dead body of Lugia who is apparently your brother (The fact that Lugia is your brother should be mentioned in your History. Nobody knows that Lugia was alive yesterday, because it wasn't proven in the story. Remember to cope with what happened in the story or what happened in your history!) Suddenly Shadow Zapdos + Moltres come in and Lugia (who is again apparently your brother) comes back to life as a Shadow Pokemon, then Shadow Articuno and Mewtwo arrive which is a response to jinxing your words...

Quote from Skywarrior

"It can't be worse!"

...and to top it all off, you say that Shadow Mewtwo is actually Yveltal himself.

To tell the truth, that reaction is as random as Digimon, Bakugan, Yugioh, and Beyblade suddenly coming into the story.

I can deal with one random event happening, but not all this happening at once.

Another small example that didn't affect the story too much was when you said;

Quote from Skywarrior

I had never seen one like this but I have grim news.
Mew,Moltres and Articuno were destroyed. Zapdos and Mewtwo escaped but Mewtwo is dying.

We don't actually know that Mew, Moltres, or Articuno were destroyed. We don't know that Zapdos or Mewtwo escaped. We don't know that Mewtwo is dying, since the story didn't provide most of the details yet.

Think about it as Minecraft Survival. In survival mode, you have to make things and survive with what is given to you, unlike creative, where you survive with your own imagination.

So, let's pretend that this never happened, and lets start again.)

Quote from GameMaster

Fire spews up from the ground, about to scorch everybody.
Olika dodges out of the way of the fire, and defiantly screeches at the enemy.
...What do you do?

@Olika
That's fine, see you soon! ^^

(Sorry.)

-OK, I think i can reverse the fire to go back underground. And who is that hooded enemy?

Skywarrior tries to use The Blackcard on the Hooded Pokemon.The fire goes back,only to come back.

-I say we just attack him now and get out of Pallet City!

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(Good job! Much, much better. Keep it up!
I'll be setting up a battle soon. Be on the lookout!)

-If he shoots fire out of the ground he is a fire/ground type. I am a fire type so I stand no chance against Ground types. If I concentrate enough I can control that Fire. I know a Fire/Ground type but I did not see him after his birth. It would be very illogical to say he is that Pokemon but: Primal. Groudon. It is just a theory, but I think Yveltal Shadowed him and forced him into Primal Forme!

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