Don't have an account yet? 
Forum Thread
Two Lovers Nightmare part 2
Forum-Index → Fanmades → Fanfictions → Two Lovers Nightmare part 2
Posted: Mon, 13/07/2015 16:04 (8 Years ago)
Riako and Claire had dozed off peacefully. Hours passed by, when Riako was awoken. He decided to go downstairs, knowing when he's up, he can never fall back asleep. He went to the kitchen and turned on the coffee brewer. As Riako was tapping his foot impatiently, he heard Claire scream.
Riako ran upstairs, where he saw his doll perched atop a shelf. Claire cowers backwards as Riako tries approaching the doll.
"What's the matter? We probably just forgot we put it here." Riako responded, slightly nervous. "I-I." Claire was stuttering. "But, we...we put it on the other shelf." Riako didn't understand as there were two shelves in the room. "Claire, everything will be alright, don't worry." He walked over to the bed and gently pecked her on the cheek. "I'm here for you." Claire blushed at this remark. "Go back to sleep." Riako said. "Everything's fine." He heard his coffee still brewing and went downstairs to pour himself a cup. As he walked downstairs the doll smirked. Riako was in for a night to remember.
Posted: Tue, 14/07/2015 00:39 (8 Years ago)
Also, just because it's part two, doesn't mean it has to be only one chapter. Lets go for it guys. ;) if we can get 3 reviews that would be awesome.
The doll crept down the staircase. Going step by step as quietly as possible. It edged the corner and snuck up behind Riako. The doll slowly moved its arm forward when Riako realized, he wasn't alone. Riako turned around, and to his horror, saw the doll. A bloody knife was in one hand, he smirked viciously and backed Riako up against the wall. The lights flickered quickly, then dimmed.
It was pitch black as Riako tried to shuffle around the doll. The doll found him, and raised up his knife. He slated it down......and it cut Riako's wrist. He bled out, his vein hanging out of his wrist, his pulse slowly fading. "You better not yell, or Claire gets it." The doll smiled viscously as he said this. "Why, just why? Why are you doing this to me!!" Riako yelled out angrily, his teeth were snarled as he lunged forward to the doll. The doll stopped him and grabbed onto his arm in one hand, and covered his mouth with the other.
In a demonic voice, the miniature toy answered. "I want to see you suffer." He forcefully pushed Riako up against the wall, and drew his weapon. "I always knew you liked Claire. You threw me away for her. I waited for this moment, every night I sabotaged the old house so you would move. And then...I would have my revenge. No one knows were you live, so this'll be the perfect cover-up."
Upstairs Claire was looking for a weapon, she didn't want to waste time but she knew she needed something strong. She couldn't find anything lethal, but she glanced over to the bathroom and got an idea. It might not be a weapon, but it COULD be used for a plan. Claire grabbed the toilet plunger and ran back to her bedroom so she wouldn't get caught. She soon started to devise a plan involving the plunger and whatever she could find in her room. A while later, she had a plan. And she could tell, the doll was going to be sorry
Posted: Wed, 15/07/2015 13:39 (8 Years ago)
Title: Love the story
Posted: Mon, 20/07/2015 16:37 (8 Years ago)
Posted: Mon, 20/07/2015 17:25 (8 Years ago)
"P-please, I beg of you. Don't hurt me." The doll cracked a small smile then burst out laughing in a very high pitched tone. While he was laughing, he heard something coming from upstairs. "Hmmm, I don't want to leave you, yet I don't want to let you have all the fun." The doll thought it over. He grabbed onto Riako and tied him to the wall. "I'll be right back. We wouldn't want Claire to ruin our plans, now would we?"
Once the doll had made its way up the stairs, it lurked into Claire's bedroom. There was no sign of her "That's weird, there's no way she could have escaped." A faint sound of screaming could be heard. Then, Claire was on top of the doll. She had used the plunger to allow her to stick to the wall and pounce. "Get off of me!" Clair got a letter opener and clicked it open, she then stabbed the plush doll. The duck started chanting. .em eviver stirips raed hO, em eviver stirips raed hO.
".hsiw uoy sA." Replied the spirit. The duck was healed, and now had the letter opener. Claire took the plunger and put it on the ducks head, then grabbed the letter opener back.
"What the heck are you doing?!" He yelled. Claire was about to answer, when she heard a cry for help from downstairs.
Claire rushed down to see who it was. It was Riako calling for help. The duck followed.
To be continued.......
Yeah, sorry I had to cut this one short, I couldn't get my creative juices flowing this time and it felt a little rushed. So I apologize.
Posted: Tue, 21/07/2015 08:28 (8 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 21/07/2015 19:56 (8 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 21/07/2015 19:58 (8 Years ago)
Posted: Wed, 23/12/2015 18:30 (8 Years ago)
Authors note:I'm sorry to say, but this is the final chapter. A voting was held to determine the end, so don't be upset if it doesn't end the way you want it to.
When Claire was downstairs, she saw Riako and what had been done to him. "You...you monster..." The duck cackled. "Thinking you could escape was your first mistake! There IS no escape from me." The duck yelled, breaking what was a quiet weeping of Claires'. She lunged straight towards the doll. "You beast!!!! What the hell would make you think ANY of this is okay!?"
She bent down,grabbed the doll, and tried to strangle it. "You can't strangle a doll to death, my dear. You have to learn your manners, madame Pauline." "Don't treat me like I'm your princess! You're trying to sweet talk me so I'll let you kill my husband! Well there's no way that's happening!" The duck just smirked, and pointed to Riako. He was barely breathing. The lack of blood was getting to him. The duck soon felt something trickling down his leg.
He looked up and saw Claire twirling a knife in her hand. "I might have grabbed this while you were reviving yourself." She said. The duck looked at where the blood was coming from. It was coming from his chest, his stomach had been slit. As he saw a bright light, he fell to the ground. The doll was dead.
"Riako!" Claire ran over to him. "Claire...thank you..for........" "Riako!! Speak to me! Oh god, I need to help untie you and take you to a hospital." "No need...you've done...enough." Riako stopped breathing. He fell to the ground. Tears swelled up in Claire's eyes. "Riako!!! Riaaaaakkooooooooo!!!!!!!!!" Claire grabbed the knife. "Ria....ko...." The grief took over...and she couldn't handle it anymore...