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Betrayal of a warrior
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Posted: Mon, 20/04/2015 03:45 (9 Years ago)
"You guys want to know the story about my brother cloudstar and our family?" A long fured tom repeated his kits his blue and amber eyes filled with sadness. His mate tigerfrost a tiger printed she-cat with silver paws and amber eye and scolded her kits "you know we can't talk about him!" The 2 kits fell back some. One kit had brown fur and a light brown underbelly and amber eyes and the other kit was white with black paws and long fur just like her dad while the other she-kit looked more like her dad. "Now Lynxkit and Lightkit, you know we can't talk about him." Lightkit the white one nodded and replied "okay we won't Angelwing." Lynxkit looked down and looked around the nursery and asked "were's snow kit?" Angelwing flinched a little and called out "snowkit were are you?!?" A little white with ran in the nursery he had long white fur and black ear tips. The kit yelled to them "I caught a mouse with Honeykit and yellow kit! Oh and blackkit was out their to!!" He looked over and saw that Lynxkits ears perked up. Lynxkit had always had a crush on black sense we meet him. She didn't give her hopes up sense he said he wanted to be a medicnce cat. Angelwing ordered the kits to play outside. So Lynxkit and Lightkit ran out the nursery. Snowkit stayed by the entrance and heard Angelwing hiss "he looks just like his father!" Tiger frost tried to calm him down "I know but we can't he's cloudstars kit any ways." Snowkits ears folded back and he stomped in the nursery and hissed "what did you just say!!" Angelwing cursed under his breath so did tigerfrost. "Your the kit of cloudstar," Angelwing told him. Snowkit hissed "why didn't you tell me is that why everyone stares at me weirdly and their eyes full of hatred!" Tigerfrost hissed "calm down both of you!!" Angelwing sat up and told him " we will tell you the story of how he met his living mate and family and the story we aren't suppose to tell.."
do it!
Posted: Mon, 20/04/2015 04:27 (9 Years ago)
Title: Schedule
I don't write on weekends or holidays- I have other things and stories to do on other websites
I write once a day or if I have something good Ill write Ill do a second
I do it after school (4:00 in the USA)
Sometimes I do it on Fridays but not a lot
Posted: Mon, 20/04/2015 20:55 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 1 ~ And so it began
Angelwing started "well me and my brothers snowkit and cloudkit..-in the story-.. Three little white kits snuggled close to a white cat that had light grey spots on her back. Her collar said 'snowfall.' The kits were about 3 moons old and already meet a dead cat their mother. A black tom wih green eyes stood over her and had a evil sinister smile on his face. The black tom licked the blood off his muzzle and walked away.the largest but youngest one had was white with long fur and black ear tips and blue eyes. The other had snow white fur a black hind paw and short fur with amber eyes. The last one had fur different from them all he had white fur, blue and amber eyes, long fur and, a silver wing pattern on his back.
The next sunrise a yellow tom took the kits. She smells weird 'thought the biggest one. The kits started to squel to their mother. The tom walked in camp it started to smell like the tom even more. The largest kit dangled from his mouth and so did his brothers. The kits were set down on a soft green bed. Each kit tried to stand but keep falling over. The tom ran out of the den and told them in a deep voice "i'll be back with food." All the kits and she-cats stared at the 3 mysterious kits. A amber eyed cat with fur like honey she-kit hissed "they smell wierd!" Two of the kits flinched back at her words but the biggest looked at her and felt a small conecrion with her....
Posted: Tue, 21/04/2015 21:19 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 2 ~Greetings
The honey pelted she-kit looked at him also and said "who are you?" The white and odd eyed kit answered "we don't have a name.. I think.." The others shoo. Their heads with him. The she kit started another question "where do you" - the yellow tom walked in sat a mouse in from of them and meowed "here eat this." They all looked confused the youngest asked "what is this place?" The older ones dug into the mouse. The yellow tom answered "I'm Lionfang. The yellow kit is honeykit" - he looked at another kit that looked a little like honeykit-" that's palekit honeykits brother.." -he pointed at a silver she kit and a tiger she kit -" that is silver kit and tigerkit." He sighed "come with me.." The kits followed him to a large rock. On the way there all cats looked at them and muttered stuff and asked questions and so on. The kits fell over a few times and the odd eyed kit keep on hiding under the oldest kit and whimpered. The kits walked in the rock and saw a she cat with dark grey fur and amber eyes. She glared at the kits and hissed to lionfang "why are there new kits here!?!"
Posted: Thu, 23/04/2015 02:43 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 3 ~I saw....
The kits earned new names the blue eyes one cloudkit the amber eyed snowkit and the last one Angelkit. Cloudkit was playing with honeykit and palekit. While angelkit was playing with Tigerpaw and silverpaw they all shared a special connection together. Snowkit was playing with lionfangs tail. Lionfangs told the tiny kit "I have to go now." Snowkit meowed "okay bye!" Then ran off he ran into a tall cat that had a spotted pelt.
Lionfang walked into to shadowstars den and asked "why did you need me?" Shadowstar stared at him and asked "if you bring something somewere and a starclan warrior and a dark forest cat shows up to the object or kit what does it mean?" Lionfang answered" um it would mean that thing would have a bright further or save something for the starclan warrior but for the dark forest it would most likely mean death and other things." He shivered then asked "why?" Shadowstar looked at him and said "I saw amberstar bluestar leopard star and batstar when your brought the kits here." Lionfang perked up "the great leaders?"
Shadowstar noded "but I also saw...."
Posted: Thu, 23/04/2015 23:09 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 4 ~shadowstar~
Posted: Fri, 24/04/2015 22:22 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 5 ~ we do!
Snowkit and angelkit was talking to each other about random things. While cloudkit was with palmkit and honeykit talking about what thus wanted to be when they grew up. "I want to be a warrior!" "Me to!!" "Me three!" The kits said in order. Loud kit giggled as he said it last while palmkit did the same. Palmkit ran out the nursery saying "i'll be back!!" Cloudkit called out after him "okay see ya!!" Honeykit looked at him and asked as she blushed "do you want to play out side of the camp...?" Cloudkit looked at her and told her "we can't it's almost our apprentice cermonry." Honeykits squealed with happyness
Posted: Tue, 28/04/2015 21:30 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 6 pt 1 ~ Love or what?
I was talking to angelkit and looked inside his deep blue and amber eyes. When snowkit came by and said "guys we need a truss!" I was confused what did he mean by truss. Angelkit stood up and hissed "like what!?" He puffed out his chest as I stood up and whispered "we make all the she-cats in the clan fall for us!" I hissed back "how would that work most cats already have mates!"
snowkit
I heard cloudkit hissed "How would that work most cats already have mates!" I stared at him and told him bravely " well we could make the ones who don't have a mate like us!" I saw angelkit sit back down and say "I have something to say.." Cloudkit put his tail on the white and silver tom kit and asked softly forgetting about his anger not two seconds ago "what?"
Angelkit
I felt cloudkit put his tail on me and I blushed hard and said "I think I'm gay!"
Posted: Wed, 29/04/2015 20:55 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 7 pt 2 ~ love or what?
I hissed "what do you mean?!" I stared I his odd eyes as he confessed softly with sadness and fear "well I kind of liked palekit sense we got here. Don't tell any one!" I looked at cloudkit and back to my other brother and poked him "if that's what you want then I won't stop you," I heard cloudkit say to angelkit.
Angelkit
I was confused 'why would one of my brothers let me be gay and accept that!' I looked at cloudkit and asked "really you think that a gay cat is okay and not weird or anything?" My younger but much bigger brother nodded as he purred.
Cloudkit
I purred to angelkit as snowkit stormed off and mutering stuff like why do I have this family and other things like that but I could only hear some of it and ignored it. I flicked my tail so my brother would come to sleep with me in the nursery. I knew it snowkit was already asleep. I pushed him over some as palekit woke up and ordered "be quiet!" I could see angelkit blush hard and jumped in he bed and went to sleep.
angelkit
I was laying in bed as I felt cloudkit go to sleep behind me. I couldn't stop h
Thinking 'oh my god! He's so cute!' Then I eventually went to sleep.-- snowkit looked at Angelwing and asked confused "you were gay!?!" Angelwing nodded his head up and down sadly and said looking around the nursery to see if tigerfrost was around and said "I still am.."
Posted: Thu, 30/04/2015 20:47 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 8 ~ Still here
Posted: Fri, 01/05/2015 21:17 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 9 ~dogs
I was talking to tigerpaw and silverpaw. They just became apprentices not to long ago. "So how old are you and your brothers?" Tigerpaw asked as she sat down staring at me with excimet "we are about 3 moons old?" I asked confused. I looked in her eyes and saw happiness in them and same with silverpaw. I heard meowing and yelling from in the camp saying 'we are being attacked!' I raced out the apprentice den and saw shadedclan cats out side. I ran over to my brothers and asked "what's going on!" They both were confused as I was. We hid behind lionclaw. He looked at us and reassured "it's okay I'm here with you" We all looked at him and smiled.
angelkit
I watched as a silver grey she-cat walked into camp surrounded by other cats ready to fight. The silver cat ran over to shadowstar and asked something but couldn't hear anything. I saw shadowstar nodded and yell out to everyone "The shaded clan cats have been driven out by dogs they shall stay here until the dogs are gone!" Many cats hissed and growled 'why that's not fair and even what is our leader thinking!' She went to talk to the cats and walked over to us. A few cats walked in the nursery hissing at the other queens and kits. Shadowstar told us to go in the nursery and meet everyone and be nice to them. She walked over to the silver she-cat who looked as if she was scarred and hurt. Her left ear was gone and bleeding with the same as her eye. I walked I the nursery after snowkit and cloudkit behind me scared I wasn't looking were I was walking and ran into about 4 she-kits. The kits all hissed "hey watch it!" Then a larger tom kit hissed to them and jumped in front of me hissing. "Hey rember what Silverstar told us. Be nice to the others!" I looked at the orange and reddish tom kit and blushed I liked him. The kit smiled at is and said "I'm...
Posted: Tue, 05/05/2015 00:37 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 10 ~ Fire
The kit finished his name "I'm firekit!" Snowkit looked at him and pointed our names off he pointed at me "that's cloudkit. The other one is angelkit" I looked at firekit and asked "who's the kits?" Firekit looked surprised that he forgot and said "oh these are my friends. The brown kits are oakkit and mudkit. Their mother is lynxclaw our deputy. The white and grey one are blackkit and greykit." I looked as the she-kits ran off to their mother. But oak kit stayed and walked over to me and whispered in my ear "talk to me latter by the warrior den." Shadowstar walked in called out "I need oak kit, blackkit greykit and mudkit. Also lynxclaw! - snowkit and angelwing was out in the woods together when snowkit askers "wait if Cloudstar was leader before shadowstar how could he be the leader after her to?" His eyes filled with confusion as angelwing told the kit "oh yeah. Our leader was darkstar at the time.." Snowkit nodded and said "go on!" So angelwing keep going "darkstar waited for the kits to go as they walked out. I could see a red and yellow cat with odd blue eyes and a blood red tail. I walked over to her my blue eyes confused "are you firekit's mother?" The she-kit nodded and said "yes I am his mother but he's the only one." I looked confused even more as the she-cat looked sad and upset I asked wanting to know what's wrong "what's wrong?" She answered "I lost...
Posted: Wed, 06/05/2015 03:36 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 11~ what did she do?!
I was walking around and saw cloudkit talking to some cat. I could see him walk out with Firekit I saw them talking to each other. My odd eyes wondered around and saw a place were I could here them but they couldn't see me. I ran over to the tree and climbed it. I heard them the orange kit asked him but I was to late to her the beginning "gay?" Cloudkit looked at him and nodded "yes is it a problem?" Fire kit put his paw up and said "oh no it's not a problem!"
cloudkit
I was getting mad at this kit for asking me this question. I asked wih a growl "how did you know?"
"His face was so red when I looks at him!"
I sighed "ugh. Don't tell anyone. Mainly tigerpaw and silverpaw." I walked off with a growl to the fresh kill pile. Darmstadt jumped up on the high tree and yelled "all the cats may come to the meeting!" I walked over with my brothers and the she-kits and Firekit he sat net to me pretty close. Until honeykit pushed him and rubbed aginst me. I was confused a little was she jellous?! I looked up to dark star and listened at the end "shaded clan will join us!" I heard gasps after with growls filled with anger and hissing I could here cats barking at them about other things like 'there isn't enough food or room!' I saw Firekit brighten up and sat on the other side of me rubbing up aginst me purring loudly with honeykit there's eyes meet with anger. All the cats heard them and saw us. My face burned red as most cats said. "By hats gross or get them! I said "oh god! It's not like what it looks like!" Both of them jumped on me and licked me. I tryed to push them off but stoped when honeykit did something that made everyone gasp even me.
Posted: Wed, 06/05/2015 03:54 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 12 ~ problems
I felt honeykit back away with her eyes filled with embarssment. My eye twiched. Firekit hissed "you kissed him! I can do better!" He ran over to me and kissed me also. Both of the kits mothers picked them up them hissed at me with disgust and so did the others. Snowkit angelkit and me ran to our secret place inside a hollow tree. I saw palekit crawl in and hissed "what's with you and my sister!" I hissed back scared behind snowkit and angelkit "I didn't know I was mated with her or something!" He hissed again then left. Honeykit walked in dining from her mother and the same with firekit they both asked the same qeustion but at different times I didn't head by i said "yes sure why not?!" They both looked at me with happiness and said "you'll be my mate?!?" I looked a them and yelled "what?!" I ran out wih them following me happily hey ran over to the other kits telling them what I said. They spreaded it over to the apprentices by the next day they spreaded it to the adults. I was given disgusted looks everyday from then on but snowkit and angelkit would protect me by saying "at least he got two cats to love him then none or one!' They would say diffent things but mainly that phrase. They even said that to our leaders. For what they said once they would learn the worst punisment ever
Posted: Wed, 06/05/2015 22:05 (9 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 13 ~ Apprentices
snowkit
I was next to cloudkit trying to comfort him for it was our day to be a apprentice. After cloudkit told us he didn't want to be a warrior but a medicnce cat he told dark star and Silverstar. They both approved of him doing so. All the kits lined up. Honeykit Palekit angelkit me cloudkit grey kit blackkit Lynxkit Lightkit and then at the end Firekit. Both cats jumped up the high rock and called a meeting for us all. We all were lined up already and were being cleaned by our mothers but me and my brothers. We didn't have a mom or a dad. Well we didn't know them. I snapped out of my thoughts and looked at the cats as they told me to go up. I went up and saw black legs. He was a grey tom with black legs and blue eyes. He looked at me and touched noses. I was called snowpaw! Snowpaw! Yes my eyes gleamed with happyness as my smaller but older brother Angelpaw's face was a red after he touched noses with his mentor lighting heart. I shook my head at my brother. Now cloudkit was last Silverstar called out "a young kit with a interesting life has chosen to be a medicnce cat!" Honeypaw and firepaw looked upset a little. I thought 'were they upset about him not being their mate?' Moon feather the medicnce cat and nightclaw the other medicnce cat touched noses with him as their other apprentice 'snail paw' smiled purring "welcome." Cloudkit looked happy and asked "can I learn how to stop infections?" All three cats nodded and walked off. I relized our tri went down to a dou..
Posted: Thu, 07/05/2015 22:23 (8 Years ago)
Title: Chapter 14 ~ moss
I walked in the woods with my brother and the other apprentices. I walked with lighting heart one of the clans most loyal cats. They all showed us the clan borders and sents. After a while we split up. Lighting heart and me walked over to some moss. He looked at me and order "get some moss for the elders." I looked at him and grolwed "what that won't do anything!" He looked back "
Posted: Fri, 15/05/2015 20:51 (8 Years ago)