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Age: 11
User name: Blackscorpion2
Pokemon: Luxray
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Pokemon name : Shinji
Is this right?

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are you acepted :/

Tori was surprised. So many new Pokemon! Well, she had just moved in a few hours ago... "Hey!" she chirped to the Mareep. "I'm Tori!"

I am Shinji.....a lone hunter who seeks nothing but a worthy opponent to crush, so I spend my day's in this silent and paranormal forest. Nothing can escape my eyes and nobody can defeat me.
I get bored, there are no strong pokemon left to defeat in this forest, the rest of them are of a far inferior league.
The best way to spend my time without wasting it is to either hunt or stroll the grounds.
"This is odd...." I saw a extra ordinarily large slash mark on a tree. "There must be a worthy pokemon around here..." I used my ability, Gleam eyes.
"Now where are you?" I scanned the area for a tough pokemon.
Fate must be on my side today because I saw a ursaring, It was standing there sharpening it's claws right behind a huge boulder next to the water fall.
"Let's battle!" I charged straight at it, It noticed me and howled furiously.
The ursaring used focus blast which I neutralized by using electro ball. Both our attacks clashed and created a huge explosion.
It then used bulk up which a red aura surround him, I had to think fast so I used shock wave. It was a direct hit but the ursaring stood still, ready for more....
"Take this!" I barked and used hyper beam, it landed in his mid section and sent the large bear flying to another tree.
"WHY YOU!!" The Ursaring tore the tree from the ground and hit me with it, in other words, he was a cheater!
"OUCH!" I was sent flying into the river which ended with.....A WATER FALL!
"Oh Arceus!" too late, I dropped down the magnificent water fall and flowed down stream.
"Where am I?" I got out of the water and before I fainted the only thing I noticed was an ampharos, mareep, skitty and purrloin running towards me.

(EDIT: yeah! I'm introduced as a pokemon in need of your help!
Guys heal me up will ya?
Hope you liked my 'Lone-warrior' background,
@alex, I will only continue if you approve of my introduction so please tell me as fast as you can. Can I be the sheriff of the village?)

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yes, you are the sherif and are on the game!! :P

Twinkle quickly ran and used Discharge. The ursarang wobbled a little bit and used focus blast. Twinkle barely dodged it but injured herself badly on the landing. She used thunder wave to paralyze it. The ursarang became paralyzed and stood there. Here's my chance! Twinkle thought as she prepared to use another move

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Ampharos told others to be noticed that luxray
Ampharos:-you do here in the river and ... what happened to you why you have so many injuries?

OOC: @ Alex,
please don't mind my post, but what just happened? You time skipped alot and this was against our will.
I am fainted at the end of the river near you guys, and the ursaring is far-away, he is at the top of the water-fall, in other words you guys haven't even seen the villian who attacked me. I don't even know you guys and well we didn't even start the 'building of a new village' thingy.
I am taking part in ALOT of RP's and each and every one of them take atleast 20-30 post's of character introduction. If your RP continues this way it will die out far too early than expected. I just want the better path for this RP.
Hope you understand and take this advise under consideration.
I can edit this post if that is what you want, but you should consider yourself lucky that a person takes the time to tell you your faults and help you turn them into something far better than our expectations lead to :)
-Scorpio

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adited! thanks you ;)

I stirred my eyes open as I heard the ampharos say something I couldn't understand. "What did ya say?" the world was all dizzy to me and I saw everything in reverse. "Where am I? What happened?" I sat on the floor to get my senses back into action. "Where is that Ursaring?!" I got up and started to run but accidentally bumped into a mareep. "Get out of my way short stuff!" I attempted to run again but this time my paw got stuck on a rock and I fell down. God...I'm dizzier than I thought I was.... I looked at the small pokemon in front of me and shook my head, They must've done something with me! I showed my fangs and growled at the ampharos, "What did you do with me?"

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"How rude!" Twinkle squeaked as the Luxray bumped into her. He had a bad case of dizziness. She shot a look at Ampharos. And to think you wanted to help this guy, she glared at the two boys. She shuffled through her fur and found a Lum berry. "Here," she muttered as she shoved it into the Luxray's mouth.

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Just as soon as I was going to bite the ampharos's head off, a small creature had shoved something inside my mouth. I gulped the berry in one go, then stared at the pokemon in front of me, "what the hell?" a slight shade of red had appeared on my cheeks because I was a bit embarrassed, none of them were resembling a true and worthy warrior; in fact they looked like sweet and innocent by-passers. I bowed down and asked for their forgiveness, "I truly apologize for my uncouth behavior, I had misunderstood you pokemon for poachers" After saying my apologies I had switched to my gratitude mode and looked at them, "Thank-you for helping me, I hope that one day I could return the favor" then turned the other way.
I looked back at the pachirisu and advised, "Oh and young pachirisu, now that I am in my senses and my brain is functioning properly, I would like to advise you about using a leppa berry instead of a Lum berry" I sat back into my regular position and and started to explain, "It heals alot of damage and eliminates the confusion condition where as the Lum berry only eliminates confusion...I could've used the re-energizing". My gaze then shifted to the ampharos, "I am sorry if your questions were not answers and that I could not introduce myself properly, but unfortunately I have a foe to demolish.....I'll come and visit you when his grave is buried" these line were spoken with alot of seriousness and calmness. "Cheerio! I started to linger out of this clearing, this much was clear that the ursaring was going to live for more than a few hours.....no one dis-respects Shinji and gets away with it, especially if they cheated on me, but in my weakened state I was not very sure that I could live up to my words.

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Twinkle watched the Luxray dash away. I'm a mareep, she thought as the giant cat's figure disappeared.
"I'm not quite fond of this Pokemon. He seems a little......out there...."

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well ... I thought we could ... um ... go home, esque ... I have very hungry

Is this still open?

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yeeess :D

age: She's 25
username: EpicShuckle
pokemon: Salamence
image from it:

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acepted! are you shini??
but all began to hear approaching strong feet: bom bom bom
Ampharos:! wh-wh-what's that mmm ... already I have a plan ... run!

Yes, she's shiny.
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Ryoko slowly walked up to a group of Pokemon. She hadn't eaten for weeks, and felt weak with hunger. There was no food around this area.
"Finally, something to eat..."
As she walked closer, she noticed they were types of Pokemon she didn't really like the taste of, such as Skitty and Mareep. She sighed, and got closer. When she did, however, she noticed that they were getting ready to run. But, what from?
"They're getting ready to run? Just typical, everyone's scared of me."
She stood still, and watched for their next movement.
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I'm online when everyone's offline. ._.

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Sorry about the bump, but I can be impatient at times...
So sorry...

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