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GaleAkolt
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Posted: Sat, 07/02/2015 18:46 (9 Years ago)
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Final Turn. Chapter 1


Once in a day of stillness one kid was born,born to save each world one by one from great dangers.This child's name was Astral,he was rather a person who does not make friends as years went by as he grew stronger,when he didn't even know it.Then it came as a meteor shower came one of the most biggest meteor Astral ever seen.When Astral woke up after being knocked out unconscious,he looked around the planet was in peril,and his parents were dead.Astral roamed around the earth seeking for anyone or anything that could help him,though he never found anything and soon enough he collapsed...
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Posted: Mon, 09/02/2015 02:00 (9 Years ago)
Final Turn. Chapter 2


In another world far away from earth with mysterious energy flowing in every part.There was this child named Nash as he was the chosen one of the whole world and people respected him.Later his friends Dumon and Kite went on an trip to go through the galaxy and then they landed on earth.Then they found Astral lying unconscious,and they brought him back to thier world known as Barian world.Medical support came to Astral as they got close to barian world.Suddenly the same looking meteor came down to barian world as the one that came down on earth.Dumon and Kite quickly landed on barian world and got Nash as they then flew off in the galaxy.
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Posted: Tue, 10/02/2015 03:03 (9 Years ago)
Final turn. Chapter 3


When Astral woke up Nash,Dumon,and kite were waiting for him."Hello,whats your name?" Kite said as Astral got up."My name is Astral,who are you?" Astral said."I'm Kite and this is Dumon and that's Nash" Kite said pointing to Nash who was driving their ship."Where am I" Astral has asked as he looked around the high powered space ship."This is the Barian cruise it was once to take new kids around a tour of the Barian world then it became a ship for serious expeditions" Dumon said."Dumon open the main portal control were heading off,anywhere" Nash said.Then Dumon pulled a switch and three lasers on the outside of the ship started charging power in front of them,which then opened a portal.Suddenly the portal began sucking them in on its own."Whats happening" said kite as then the ships wings broke off and they were sent right into the unknown portal,but where no one knows.
GaleAkolt
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Posted: Wed, 11/02/2015 06:27 (9 Years ago)
Final turn. Chapter 4



Astral and Nash woke up in a wasteland with their broken ship,but then they couldn't find Kite or Dumon.Then they went out and walked around the wastelands.They walked and walked as they tried to find someone,anyone."stop..." Nash said as they both stopped in the middle of a circle of cacti.Suddenly a huge portal appeared.Then a person in front of them came from the portal,"my name is Girag and to enter this portal you must defeat me" girag said.Then a huge barrier came around the 3 of them and then Girag launched at Nash...

(To be Continued)
GaleAkolt
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Posted: Thu, 12/02/2015 03:39 (9 Years ago)
Final turn. Chapter 5


Nash almost dodged the attack which it hit the tip of his arm,and that force was incredible.Then Nash charged at girag but when he hit girag barely seemed to feel it.Astral then launched forward but Girag grabbed his foot and threw him over.The battle continued again and again as Nash and Astral got even more tired while Girag didn't even brake a sweat."give up yet?"Girag asked,"never"Nash and Astral said at the same time.Then girag said "good job you passed",Nash and Astral looked puzzled."you never gave up and now you get more than just the portal" Girag said as he handed cards to Nash and Astral,he gave Nash number 32:shark drake and Astral number 39:utopia."Use these cards to face the challanges ahead"girag said then he dissapered.Then Astral and Kite went through the portal to where their next challange awaits
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Posted: Fri, 13/02/2015 03:30 (9 Years ago)
Final turn. Chapter 6




Nash and Astral went through the portal and they dropped for what seemed like a whole 3 minutes,they then landed in a coliseum.It was very empty then they heard a crash and behind them someone came sliding down from the top of the coliseum."This must be another fight" Nash said,"it sure is but I wont be going easy like Girag did and by the way my name is Ilito"Ilito said."Come number 105 battlin boxer star Cestus"


To be continued...