Your not listening to me. Im trying to help you make shops which
wont get closed. This is lacking detail. This could at least be
presented better, and eye catching. You should look at other shops
made, otherwise this will be closed just like your other shops.
In fact, you should change the price to 200 pokedollars at least.
500 is kinda overpriced...
You should make examples so people would know if they want one or
not. Otherwise, they will pay you, but may not like it... you need
to be more organized and prepared.
Not to mention, the grammar is pretty bad. There is no capital
letters at all.
You have until tomorrow afternoon to change this into a working
shop.
Explain what you are offering.
Explain what you can do.
Explain what you're wanting for it.
Or this thread will get closed once again tomorrow 8 pm Server
Time.
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directed to you personally but to everyone.