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Experiment Pokemons(Accepting)

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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 02:35 (10 Years ago)
(Im talking to you, who do you think XD)

"And..? Why is this here?" Endy points at the sword he struck them.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 02:58 (10 Years ago)
Angel was unconscious, She woke up and tried to get up.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 02:58 (10 Years ago)
"Are you alright?" Endy said annoyed.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 02:59 (10 Years ago)
"Yeah, i guess." Angel said sighing.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:01 (10 Years ago)
"Just to let you know, half of your lower leg is a bit..messy," Endy said pointing at her leg which was bloody and wet.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:01 (10 Years ago)
"Ew.." Angel looked at it.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:02 (10 Years ago)
Endy shook his head,"Yep," He said.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:03 (10 Years ago)
Angel was getting pale from bloodloss.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:03 (10 Years ago)
"Youd better patch that up!" Endy said handing her a cloth.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:05 (10 Years ago)
Angel patched it up. She said to Endy "Edeen if i die now i must tell you something." She got more pale and rasped.
Endy
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:06 (10 Years ago)
"What? You like pie? No surprise!" Endy said jokingly.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:07 (10 Years ago)
"I do like pie, Its just, I cant say it.." Angel said rasping.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:08 (10 Years ago)
They floated through the air. "It's hard, knowing the past.." Said Stereo.
i eat kids
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:08 (10 Years ago)
Endy got annoyed with all the rasping, he threw a heal-berry in angels mouth and then laid down and yawned.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:10 (10 Years ago)
Tokoro nodded and flew away from Stereo. He got bit on the shoulder by a mutant. Swirling around, he nom-nom-nom on the mutant.. "Blugh.." He sprayed fire onto it.
i eat kids
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:18 (10 Years ago)
Angel sighed as her cuts formed into scars she slept alone watching the stars, She felt alone, The pain killed her from the inside. She didn't know why Edeen was mad. But she didn't care. She fell asleep soon after.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:19 (10 Years ago)
[new day :D]

Endy woke up to the blinding of the sun, he stood up and stretched, then looked back at the others, laying still like a book.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 03:23 (10 Years ago)
Angel woke up, She didn't know a scar was on her right eye. She stretched and thought to herself
Goodmorning world.. She felt more depressed then usual.
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 16:49 (10 Years ago)
I teleported away from all of you then blew up a lab BUTT.... found a note ( From Susan, Dad I miss you and I hope you have fun at work!, Your experimenting on my Budew but I hope you keep him safe!To Dad) (Feels weird emotions never experienced) Ugh whatever, (Takes these random things and sees a note (Experiment 97a) (Electro sword) (Instructions: DANGEROUS click the blue button to turn it on and red to turn it off and hold red when about to turn off to make an energy wave) Cool....
(IF im allowed to have that)
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Posted: Mon, 24/11/2014 21:29 (10 Years ago)
(Ok so heres a few suggestions ben4arm! when your character reads something, use the italicts and not brackets, also, when your saying something not in rp, then use brackets please, it makes it less confusing,

now heres some other stuff, yes you can have it, but just make it so it doesnt do damage, cuz thatll be a bit op, and also, every energy sheild is penretable, so dont make it unbreakable.

Also, you cant just keep teleporting, its starting to get a bit...(dont be offensive..)bugginh...and also please, if you wanna do puns, use brackets, and dont put them in the middle of the rp, like you did with the 'BUTT',
heres an example,

what you did: I teleported away from all of you then blew up a lab BUTT....

what you shouldve done: I teleported away from all of you then blew up a lab but....

(Lol butt)

and also, blowing up a lab right off the bat seems a bit random..., so...make it less random, like mabye say:

I couldnt take it anymore with these labs, as soon as I found one, I couldnt control the urge to blow it up.)

(these arent a must-dos, just suggestions, itll make it less confusing, because wen I was reading this..I got really confused X3)