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[W] Story Contest ~ Prize: Shiny of Choice
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Posted: Fri, 28/11/2014 03:47 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Fri, 28/11/2014 04:25 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Fri, 28/11/2014 04:51 (9 Years ago)
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Italics- Flashback/dream.
Bold: Protagonist.
It was quite a cold morning as I looked out my bedroom window. I, being a young Growlithe at the time, I was excited for snow. I ran to tell my mom, and I saw a note. She had went to work at the mall, and I just decided to put my warm coat, hat, boots, and socks. And I walked out the door.
Artrak jolted awake, breathing heavily. "Why was that... so odd?" He wondered out loud. He seemed to remember it from the distant past, but on this warm morning a he looked out the window, the sun and flowers seemed to be inviting him out.
Going down and watering the flowers, Artrak looked at the scorched frame, glass, and brick of the old mall he lived near.
I was screaming and crying. My older brother was holding me as the mall my mom worked in was bombed. Our house was burning behind us. My mom was lost in the debris of the mall. Everything we had was lost. The only thing we recovered was my journal. I quickly wrote.
9/11
Everything is lost.
I'm losing hope fast, and the only thing I have left is my brother... I will keep going, but at what risks...?
Artrak snapped out of his little daydream, and went towards old mall. "I never saw you when you died, mother. But trust me, it's fine." He said, and touched the old framework of the mall. This was his tradition, but today he felt a lot more confident touching the mall. Maybe... It was time.
Posted: Fri, 28/11/2014 07:41 (9 Years ago)
And whoops, I should've added Corebess to the Unfinished section. :S
Posted: Thu, 04/12/2014 02:58 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Thu, 04/12/2014 16:48 (9 Years ago)
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Posted: Fri, 05/12/2014 05:30 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Fri, 05/12/2014 05:45 (9 Years ago)
Corebess: if you edited, that's fine. I'll add it in.
Noctis: Just like in the real pokemon games, you cannot breed Ditto unfortunately.
Posted: Thu, 11/12/2014 03:36 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Thu, 11/12/2014 03:37 (9 Years ago)
EEVEE as the pokemon
Shiny Rowlet
Shiny Dhelmise
Shiny Female Salandit
Shiny Palosand
Shiny Eevee
Posted: Thu, 11/12/2014 17:29 (9 Years ago)
Alright, Froakie.
Posted: Sun, 14/12/2014 02:47 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Thu, 08/01/2015 19:35 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 18/01/2015 22:28 (9 Years ago)
Is this still going on, because this thread has been inactive for a while
Posted: Mon, 19/01/2015 01:07 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Mon, 19/01/2015 01:19 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Mon, 19/01/2015 02:07 (9 Years ago)
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It was a date of no importance to anyone, a barely above average warm summer morning in late July. An egg hatched, a new born Sandshrew crawled out of the broken shells of the green and white egg. He appeared almost normal, a tiny tan ball of armor with an elongated nose, a clean white underbelly, and large curious eyes. But see, that's where the problem fell. His eyes were glazed over with a clear gloss to them, almost like fog covering his eye sockets. He was blind. His parents decided he was too much of a burden to raise, so they left him alone, in the middle of a desert.
The young Sandshrew knew nothing but darkness. He traveled the desert, the only sound he heard being of his claws dragging across the deep sand. He went three weeks without food or water. Simply a miracle that was. He reached the end of the desert, barely alive. A scrawny blind weak lump of tan brick like armor. A young child, barely 5 years old found him when she tripped over the little curled up ball and fell into the sand. She brought the little thing home, earning herself a scalding for leaving the house without an adult. But her parents saw the gleam in their child's eyes as she looked down at the shivering ball in her hands, and they had to let her keep him. The child, Carter, fed and raised the Sandshrew back up to full health, even giving the little one a name - Oke.
Oke adored Carter. The little Sandshrew did everything with this girl, he never left her side. The blind Oke learned how to follow Carter's voice and even began to learn her smell. One night, the two went out on a chilly winters evening. Carter had wanted to visit the bakery. It was fairly close to her home, so she assumed her parents wouldn't mind as long as she got back before dark. But at night, everything seems to be scary, and the two learned that the hard way. Every small noise scared Oke and every shadow scared Carter. Carter became so frightened that they ended up going the wrong way, finding themselves in the forest. Oke knew the way home due to his amazing sense of smell, but his fear overtook him, and he followed Carter as she led them both deeper into the forest.
It was an accident. The small girl lost her footing as they were passing by a small cliff side. Oke couldn't warn her- he couldn't see the cliff. He heard her though, falling, small screams escaping her as her voice slowly faded into the distance. Oke tried, he really did. He curled up, following the sound of the voice until he hit the bottom. But there was no voice to guide him when he got there, and his nose was filled with dust from the cliff. His whole life all he had known was darkness, but now it was a darkness he had never seen before. Carter was his soft light, that brought him a bit of ease from the complete darkness, but she wasn't there. The Sandshrew searched all night, until he could feel the morning sun warming his back. That's when the humans came. They found Oke.. and soon after they found Carter. But Carter wasn't breathing. Carter wasn't alive. Oke never felt true pain until then. Not when his parents abandoned him, not when he went 3 weeks without food or water, but now, without Carter.. that was the true pain. This was his human, this was the girl who believed in him.
Oke was sent back with the parents. Of course they were too much of a mess to even pay him any thought. The Sandshrew sat, listening to voices he never heard before, as they gave their sorrows to the parents. Oke couldn't stand it anymore. He headed to the forest, past the many trees, deep into the last place he had last seen his subtle light. That's when he felt it, a small pinch on his shoulder, just like Carter had always done to wake him up in the mornings when the lazy ball of shell didn't want to awaken.
And the voice like velvet whispering out to him -
"I'll always be your light."
Posted: Mon, 19/01/2015 02:09 (9 Years ago)
Posted: Mon, 19/01/2015 08:16 (9 Years ago)
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(Aura's POV)
I am a breeder's child. my sister loves to Shiny Hunt Pokemon, my sister has a collection of them, until one day, she quits this hunt and brings back over a thousand eggs back home.
"Maria, what are you supposed we do with all these eggs?" Dad asked.
"I give up Shiny Hunting this Pokemon, I've decided to go for another one! The eggs are your's!" Maria,my sister said running away.
"Dad! I want to hatch them!" I said
"Aura, you're only 5, you can't keep you're own Pokemon yet, I'll just sell these eggs" Dad said
"Let me hatch them, please Dad?" I pleaded as my dad nodded and helped me hatch the eggs. My Family owns a Pokemon daycare center, If we get millions of that Pokemon, we can just give it to random people.
A couple of minutes later, my first egg turned out to be an Eevee, but it was a different color.
"Dad, what if a Pokemon has a different color from the normal one?" I asked
"It's a shiny then" Dad said hatching the 100th Eevee.
"My Eevee seems to be a different color" I said as my dad examined it
"No joke, this is a Shiny Eevee" Dad said
"May I keep him?" I asked as Dad nodded. "We'll show you're sister that we hatched a shiny Eevee"
I went up to my room with my Eevee, I had Anime posters hung around my walls.
"What to call you?" I wondered
"Why would you name me?" The Eevee asked
"You talked!" I shrieked
"Well Duh!" Eevee said sighing
"I'll name you Vee? How's about that?" I asked the little Eevee
"I like it!"Vee said
Time flew by as my sister, Maria came back with more eggs.
"I need you to hatch the eggs again! Bye!" Maria said leaving
"Well Aura? Let's get to work again" Dad said as I nodded and help him hatch the eggs, my Eevee helped out, We kept 8 Eevees, my dad had the Idea of having a full eeveelution set, we have:
Cute: The cute Eevee
Hydro: The elegant Vaporeon
Flare: The courageous Flareon
Thunder: The shocking Jolteon
Espy: The kind Espeon
Nightmare: The anxious Umbreon
Leaf: The bold Leafeon
Glacier: The hasty Glaceon
and Fairy: The adamant Sylveon.
We were known as the "Pokemon Adopt Center" because of Maria, my sister, bringing back so much eggs from the Daycare Center.
The Night before the opening of our Adoping Center, I looked out to the moon, Vee gave me a look
"Vee...You will always be my friend, forever and ever" I said smiling, he was shocked
"Yeah!" Vee said as I hugged him
Posted: Tue, 24/02/2015 14:11 (9 Years ago)