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Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Sky Town Team
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Posted: Sat, 24/01/2015 20:32 (10 Years ago)
Name: inferno
Pokemon: charmelon
Gender: male
How does the character look? (Picture not needed, only description): a normal charmelon with a bit of gold over his right eye
Turned into pokemon?:nope
Personality: loner
Level (Must be between 5 and the level before the pokemon evolves. Pokemon without "level-up" evolutions must be between 5 and 30): 20
Moves: ember, scratch, metal claw, flamethrower
Item Held: none
Job:when not exploring he does nothing
Team (Explorer or Rescue Team): team eternal fire
Partner(s):none
History: he grew up like a normal charmander until he ran away to become an explorer
Want to add anything else?: not that I can think of
Password: shaymin
If you want details PM me
Posted: Sun, 25/01/2015 04:53 (10 Years ago)
You're not accepted for the following reasons:
-The name is already taken
-As said in the rules YOU CAN'T START WITH EVOLUTIONS.
-You know what's worse? You didn't even use the correct password.
Sorry i'm being rude, but SERIOUSLY. You didn't even read the Rules.)
Posted: Sun, 25/01/2015 18:50 (10 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 27/01/2015 16:40 (10 Years ago)
Makai, still being in awe, watched as the person that was overpowering him just a minute ago was getting beaten. The flaming battle was now over. He then slowly approached Torch. ''So... Where are the two captives hidden?''
Posted: Wed, 28/01/2015 03:58 (10 Years ago)
-minute later-
"WHERE ARE GALLADE AND FROSLASS? TELL ME OR GARDE WILL USE HER POWER ON YOU" said Torch, nearly strangling Inferno. "PLEASE, NO. WE HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH THEM. THEY JUST TOLD US TO CAPTURE THEM AND LURE YOU HERE" said Inferno. "They? WHO ARE THEY?" said Torch, ready to hit Inferno. "AAaAaAAH! I only know they call themselves the Chess Team!" said Inferno. Torch drops Inferno. "And you call yourself a villain?" said Torch. "You call yourself a hero?" said the injured Infernape, taunting Torch. Torch turned back and glared at Inferno. "WHAT DID YOU SAY?" said Torch. "Oh no. Here it goes again" said Garde. "Torch, don't do this" said Valor. "It isn't worth it, Torch!" said Roar.
Posted: Wed, 28/01/2015 16:33 (10 Years ago)
Also, not to be rude, but it bugs me how nearly always after a sentence there's ''[character name] said.'' I mean, you could put SO MUCH else here instead of that. [face expressions, emotions, feelings, intentions, etc.])
Makai swiftly jumped in front of Torch, growling. ''It's not his fault! He didn't want to capture them, he did it at the risk of his life! This ''Chess Team'' probably startled him before.'' - he spoke loudly, trying to convince Torch. After his loss of his friends, he never wanted to see death again.
Posted: Wed, 28/01/2015 16:37 (10 Years ago)
Posted: Wed, 28/01/2015 16:38 (10 Years ago)
Posted: Thu, 29/01/2015 03:47 (10 Years ago)
It's also annoying me. I always try to change it but IT SOUNDS EXACTLY THE SAME D: )
"Listen to him, Torch" said Valor. Torch turned at Makai, and saw his face. Torch remained silent, with his face expressing guilt. "I'm... I'm sorry... I'm sorry for being mean with you, Torch... I'm sorry because I actually had a choice... Now I shall fix my past" said Inferno, and fled to save Gallade and Froslass. Garde floated close to Torch. "Something to tell?" said Garde. Torch only reacted to follow Inferno.
Posted: Fri, 30/01/2015 13:31 (10 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 31/01/2015 14:26 (10 Years ago)
-Chess Castle-
"... Inferno entered the castle..." said Torch. The team quietly followed Torch. "The Castle is a puzzle itself, you shouln't be here" said Torch, knowing that his team would follow him.
(Sorry about the short text. I ran out of ideas with the Chess castle xD)
Posted: Sat, 31/01/2015 14:37 (10 Years ago)
...Maybe everyone has the jetpacks of something... xD)
''So... That's their hideout?'' - Makai muttered under his breath, trying to be close to the team in case of an attack. He still wanted a revenge on the kidnappers. He looked around and watched the scenery of the castle. It was like a different world on the inside.
Posted: Sat, 31/01/2015 14:47 (10 Years ago)
"Watch out. One step out of the room and you'll be lost" said a Sableye statue while laughing. ""
Posted: Sat, 31/01/2015 14:57 (10 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 31/01/2015 15:50 (10 Years ago)
-Chess Castle-
"We must move like one, so we don't get lost" said Torch. "OH NO. I FORGOT ABOUT MAGNEZONE!" shouted Garde. Torch was surprised (surprised?) by Garde's shout. "Calm down, i'm sure Magnezone knows how to get here" said Torch
-Meanwhile, at the hideout-
"BZZT FREEZE! BZZT DON'T MOVE! BZZT" said Magnezone. Magnemite looks around "BZZT WHERE'S EVERYONE?BZZT" said Magnemite. Goth, who was still there, cleaning the mess, looked at Officer Magnezone. "Um... Yeah... You got here... kinda late... They're now at Chess Castle..." said Goth. "BZZT CAN YOU BZZT SHOW ME BZZT THE WAY BZZT TO THE BZZT CHESS CASTLE? BZZT" said Magnezone. Goth smiled at Magnezone. She was happy to see someone that doesn't want to fight her... Or because she's a criminal and Magnezone didn't recognize her. "Sure thing" said Goth, and led officer Magnezone to the Castle.
Posted: Tue, 03/02/2015 17:13 (10 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 03/02/2015 17:15 (10 Years ago)
Posted: Tue, 03/02/2015 17:33 (10 Years ago)
(I kinda forgot about this, but the castle is in land, not in the sky like Sky Town. That's why we skipped the way to the castle xD )
Posted: Tue, 03/02/2015 18:06 (10 Years ago)