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Seeing the Delcatty cry, it was almost sad. But, I still had to take her friend away. Whisk her to her final resting place. I am the renegade Pokémon. I take the dead Pokémon to the world... Where they are safe forever. You guessed it, I am... Giratina.
The Delcatty was crying. There was a flood of tears from her face as she stared down at the small body of the Raichu. They had grown up together, and shared many memories. Now, all of those seemed to have been... gone. The Delcatty sighed, and laid down next to her dead friend, and continued crying. "The earth... Why? It's not fair... Why her? Why?" She wailed. Suddenly, a dark chill ran up her back. She turned to find Giratina in front of her. It wiped the little cat-like Pokémon's tears, and picked up the Raichu. It seemed to turn dark, and dissolve. Giratina simply nodded, and left, but Delcatty saw a small wave of the Raichu figure left, before it was lost too. It felt like a weight was lifted from the Delcatty's shoulders. She bent down, and whispered, "I, Elliot, embrace your name. Thank you, Giratina, for freeing me and my friend... Now... I have to get... Her lost revenge. For you..."

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Whew! Epic post. Tell me what you think, and I'll type more!

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Sorry about the delay of postage!
Elliot scowled, looking at the destruction. The earthquake had some power, and she had managed to escape, but not her friend. The ground split beneath the Raichu, and it crushed her. The Delcatty looked back, at her friend's lifeless and now soulless body, before trekking south, the opposite direction the earthquake came from.
The next town wasn't much better. It was still happy, like the Delcatty's knew, but a bunch of houses and roofs were gone. Luckily, the Pokemart and the Pokecenter were still there, with just a few cracks in the pavement. Elliot walked in, and the shop keeper welcomed her. Getting a few items from the counter, things trainers would use, she walked around. There was some basic stuff, like clothes, but the Delcatty's eye looked at the bag. It would add weight, but it could be helpful, She picked it up, before putting some Pokedollars on the counter, and left to store.

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After leaving the city, the Delcatty continued on her way with the bag slung over her back. It looked like a Garchomp's attack, since the marks were continued shortly after she headed left. But, it collapsed a mountain, and even a level 100 Garchomp could barely pull it off. She knew. Before her trainer was crushed by a chunk of mountain from a similar earthquake ten year before. But, she would find the cause of all these disasters. There were ones that weren't so harmful, like rain storms, but she would put an end to the abnormal ones. Like the rain storm now. She shook off her fur, being cold, and decided to head for the Buneary's Burrow. It was near here, just off the side of the mountain, and she thought she could shelter there for the night.

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Waking up, Elliot thanked the head Lopunny and walked out, feeling the cold rain on her back. She sheltered the parcel, and decided to head to Haronu City, the home of the burial yard and the blacksmith. She hoped that she could hitch a ride from the Ponyta Express in the closer Lassotine Town. Otherwise, she would have to lay off the upgrading for another day. And, the sooner the better in this world.
Scaling the mountain, Elliot stood at the top of the mountain. The only other way to get the Haronu City was to get the Pidgeot Air on the Junine Monument, which was even farther, so walking was the best option.

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(No one is commenting. Why people? I said it was okay! Are you afraid of me? D:)
After walking a decent amount of time, Elliot arrived in Lassotine Town. She almost kicked a rock after reading a schedule, then realizing that the last one left at midnight, not noon. He did a happy dance, and decided to go and explore the town. She read the sign of the town. It was smudged out. She read what she could "Lassotine Town, the ho... f the pony... ress and the best... rt in town." Elliot shook her head at the sign. "Old town." She shook her head.
So far, Elliot has gone far. All the way from Urrne town to Lassotine town. In the rain. So far, no one has joined her team, after losing Raichu. She has trekked from her hometown, and is now exploring a new one. Hopefully next time... She'll find a friend.

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Decent :)

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Title: Chapter #2!

Elliot, going back to the station, hopped on the 8-ponyta subway. Or, the Ponyta Express as it was called. She sat down with a bunch of other Pokémon, including a Hawlucha, Kecleon, and Girafarig. She asked Hawlucha something, but it was frightened but the Delcatty. The Kecleon didn't speak, so she asked the Girafarig. "Where are you heading?" To her surprised the Girafarig spoke. "I-I didn't think anyone would talk with that's happening!" Girafarig shook it's head. "Oh how rude of me. I'm Eve, short for Morning Eve. I'm heading to Haronu City. What's your name and where are you heading?" Eve asked Elliot. "Oh! I'm Elliot, or you can call me Elli. I'm also heading to Haronu city. I really didn't expect a reply!" Elli replied. Eve nodded, and they continued talking through the night until they took turns taking watch for when the subways stopped in Haronu.

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For once, it was peaceful. The Fletchling and Pidgey were chirping as the Ponyta express stopped in Haronu. "Morning, Elliot!" Eve nudged Elli, as it was Eve's turn to take watch as they stopped. Elliot opened her eyes, and shook her head. "We're here?" She asked. Eve nodded, and they got off before the subway took off again. They walked towards the town, and Elliot looked at Eve. "What brought you here?" Eve stayed silent for a second. "E-Everything worked out as planned. I hoped to meet someone on the train so I could form an exploration team. The guild is just outside of town." Eve said. "So-So I um... What hoping that... You could- Join me?" Eve stuttered. Elliot smiled and nodded. "I came here for the blacksmith. I'm going there, so I could drop my bag off then we could head there." Eve agreed, and Elli dropped the bag off, and off they went to the guild.

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