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Gryphaena OFFLINE   Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Thu, 23/04/2020 00:53 (5 Years ago) |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Thu, 23/04/2020 00:46 (5 Years ago) |
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----- For my second review, I'll give feedback to FurryStar's "PMD Team Eclipse Comic"! (found here: https://pokeheroes.com/forum_thread?id=79480) She is really good at making the characters recognizable, it is easy to see all the Eeveelutions, they don't look deformed. The colors are not too bright or too dark & I can read her handwriting. I've only played PMD Blue Rescue Team but I want to know more abput the PMD world, so I am excited to see more of her work. The only thing that I can think of to make it better is to have standardized panels instead of hand drawn ones. It might also be easier to make typed speech instead of writing also, but I don't know much about comics. [Read more] |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Thu, 23/04/2020 00:30 (5 Years ago) |
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All PH rules apply. Let's get to reviewing! :] --------- I'll start with my review of Cosmixx's Random Stories. Edit: (found here: https://pokeheroes.com/forum_thread?id=78390) First off, I appreciate the warning she included since I am a person who has legitimately been triggered before, enough to put my brain in panic mode & have altered thoughts & speech. The only thing about the Prologue I would change is grammar & format. Dialogue is supposed to be in quotation marks. Also, it seems to read a bit like a script & not a story, which is interesting, because I haven't read a script before that wasn't from Drama class. The second part of the Prologue is in a different color, purple instead of black, so I got the sense that the mood of the character was improved. We learn the name of the main character & that she likes being outside. So background information is building. In the third part of the Prologue, there is a sense of despair again with the black text but then there is also purple text so it is an interesting feeling. I'm hoping that Autumn's sister can help with the blackness in her emotions. [Read more] |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Thu, 23/04/2020 00:17 (5 Years ago) |
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I dunno, after I commented in your topic I felt like I messed up the flow. (So of course, I comment again to explain that I feel bad for messing up your thread. xD) Hope you get inspired again! :] [Read more] |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:44 (5 Years ago) |
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I hope comments are okay! :] [Read more] |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:41 (5 Years ago) |
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I'm not good at art so I don't think I'll ask anyone for a trade. Nice to see a familiar name from Poliwager on here. :] [Read more] |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:31 (5 Years ago) |
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I don't know where you guys are, but in my state people were resorting to flushing newspaper strips down the toilet. [Read more] |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:28 (5 Years ago) |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:24 (5 Years ago) |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:24 (5 Years ago) |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:20 (5 Years ago) |
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I don't like yellow text, it's hard to read. [Read more] |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:19 (5 Years ago) |
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Gryphaena OFFLINE Forum Posts: 284 |
Posted: Wed, 22/04/2020 23:18 (5 Years ago) |
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