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Endy OFFLINE   Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Wed, 08/03/2017 23:05 (8 Years ago) |
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I suggest bending the forearm a bit, else as of now it looks a bit rubbery with the way you've drawn it. @Rhunes Not sure if you'll see this or not, however I personally believe that the way you've drawn the glowing looking light blue markings for #4 doesn't really fit that well with the rest of the piece, and thus looks a bit weird and out of place. I suggest perhaps drawing their raw shape instead of adding that kind of texture to it? @Error That looks pretty good, however the common problem you've been having are for the lines. They're honestly pretty 'messy' if you will because of how bumpy they kind of are. If you are using a computer to draw this, I suggest using a curved line tool, since you can't really put any line variation anyways. If you aren't- then a simple fix would just to be more careful next time. omfg I love it's design but I couldn't bid on it because I didn't have enough stuff arrghh [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 07/03/2017 22:41 (8 Years ago) |
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You're welcome, and I don't think it's the design of the clothing that's causing the issue, I think it's more of how the top clothing was drawn. I believe that adjusting the location a bit would fix the issue. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 07/03/2017 22:14 (8 Years ago) |
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I'll agree with you, the forearm just needs to be a bit shorter! @Error I suggest to use a more saturated colour for the glowing parts, to really make it 'glow'! @Rep Ooh nice! Although the hips for the paper bag character looks a bit weird. The clothing sort of makes it seem as if the right hip is located slightly lower than the left one. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 07/03/2017 02:14 (8 Years ago) |
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That's quite cool! Although I do think that the shape overall is a bit uneven, and therefore looks slightly odd. I believe it'll help if the lines could be more even and parallel, just as it is on the actual logo. I just commented on meme's since it was the only one I really had critique for. Honestly I really don't think I'll be able to reply to everyone's art every time people submit, so if it's alright I'll just reply to some that I have critique for, unless I have some time to comment on everyone's. This is because honestly you guys post quite a bit-which is great-but it's still a bit hard to keep up with comments, since before I know it you've in total all posted like 50 or something haha. I also can't just comment on a few because then I feel like I'm offending people by not replying to theirs so I've decided that I'll try to reply to everyone's art on times like the weekends, while on other days I'll just comment on some that I have critique for. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sat, 04/03/2017 17:27 (8 Years ago) |
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I agree with kit ont he eyebrow, but perhaps you've already resolved that : ) @kit That's beautiful! @ThatGayGuy I guess it'll maybe look better if the white border weren't as thick, as it's a bit distracting from the actual picture. yes, I know that stickers have white borders, but I think a slightly thinner border would work better : ) I really like those pixels as well, especially the first one. In a way they look quite 2 dimensional. @Foxly I really like those pixels, you've really improved on them. @Seilie Those are honestly amazing! @Kitsu Those all looks really great, and I really don't have any critique in mind for them! @Popplio Honestly I think your art has improved quit a bit from that. Good job! [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Thu, 02/03/2017 02:12 (8 Years ago) |
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Those are really good, you did so well on the animated avi and I really like the choice of background for the Pokesona art. @Rhunes Oh boy-I'm a sucker for ghost type themed things, I think I'll definitely be planning to check out your adoptable shop for that Duskull Chimecho fusion! @Technology You did really well on that gif, however the only critique I can give is that you could perhaps have the hair move as well, or it just looks more like an immobile block as of now. @Foxly Good Job! Although You should make the left hand lines a different colour-perhaps white- as it really isn't visible as of now against the black half of their face. @Error Those are really cute! But maybe it'll look better if you added lines to the costumes as well? @The-Doctor Wow, those hands are honestly fantastic. And you've given the piece such an interesting vibe! @Panta Hmm, I'd say that the shorts have a weird opening to them, as usually if you were to draw relatively flat shorts(by that I mean lack of folds and/or creases) like those, you'd have an oval for an opening. However in that piece it's sort of a half oval. That aside, it's really good! @Lizz My gosh that's so beautiful and elegant! [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Wed, 01/03/2017 02:36 (8 Years ago) |
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Oh wow that looks gr8, can't wai tot see it done :000 @Foxly Ooh I love the colours, and it's really nicely done! [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 28/02/2017 23:23 (8 Years ago) |
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Alright, it's sad to see you go. But maybe someday you'll decide to come back again, and we'll always welcome you. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 28/02/2017 23:04 (8 Years ago) |
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I can't see two of them, but they all look amazing omg especially the yveltal and ghost type ones because I'm biased af @Tech The nose seems a bit too 'flat' but other than that, I really like it! [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 28/02/2017 22:53 (8 Years ago) |
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This is because salt now barely checks on EAC and they just want me to temporarily fill in for them. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 28/02/2017 22:34 (8 Years ago) |
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I would be interested to owo @Foxly I see, sorry haha And that's really well done! Great job. Although, someone already said this, but when you blink your eyes actually close from the top, and it looks a bit strange seeing one go from down to top. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Tue, 28/02/2017 21:53 (8 Years ago) |
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I really like the pixel animation, and it's really good for a first try! @Foxly That's really clever, and-is it based off a Dratini? :o @Suiren I personally like the second one better, the character just stands out! @Crystal I love the dotted line look! It's the first time I've seen anything like it! @Popplio It's so cute! Although, my only advice would be to fix the line where the animated creature sits on, or else it looks like it's "detaching" right now. @Rhunes That expression on the cat is absolutely hilarious! @Isranul'sCreator Honestly, that's breathtaking! It seems to have a blue glow around it and I love it! @Error Bun sans is best buns. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but the way the shoulders are drawn and the lack of elbows really just "fits" with the head. It makes it so much easier to visualize a fluffy bunny under all that coat. @Noctis I hate lineart too, which is why you never see LINES in any art I do lmao I really like the colours, and the only critique I can give is that-the forehead seems a bit small honestly, I think it'll help if you were to reduce the spacing between the nose and the mouth, by just moving the whole upper face down just a bit. @All So- I'm going to admit, there have been times where I've seen you guys submit new art, but didn't really make any comments on it-usually because those times usually involve having art I couldn't think of critiques with. And now I realize that it's better if I were to say a "that's really good!" Than to not post anything about it just because I wasn't sure what to say on it for critiques. And I'm really sorry for that now because I realize that people because of that can/will begin to feel ignored, if a lot of people were to do the same. And I think that was what was actually happening, no one really wanted to be like- "No your art doesn't matter to me whatsoever", but I believe that a lot of people really thought "All I really can comment is a generic 'good job', so I don't really need to comment on it." Although personally, I can't see the "friend group" that a lot of people were talking about, so that just confuses me a bit, mainly because I think I'm really not that active recently. But besides that, I'm really sorry for every one who felt that they got ignored, and I'll try to be more active on here so that I can give more feedback. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sun, 26/02/2017 21:00 (8 Years ago) |
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"Wait, you're one of the journey-ers too?!" The memory suddenly came flooding back, "I KNEW I've seen you somewhere before!" "Wait- then where are the others? Y'know where they've all scattered to?" Chry asked, but then quickly added "Oh and sorry about the Toxic-you might wanna check at a PokeC-" He paused, "Weren't we all going to a PokeCenter before we got attacked?" [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sun, 26/02/2017 19:50 (8 Years ago) |
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At that moment, the Pokemon spoke, verifying Chry's confusion. "Wh- hurt you?" His memory recalled of the whole group diving away and scattering at an ear piercing scream, and then larger Pokémon seemingly attacking out of nowhere which then led to- to... He briefly remembered falling into something, and then black. This Pokémon also looked extremely familiar. "Wait-You- Are you.. Who are you?!" He finally decided, going back to his threatening voice. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sun, 26/02/2017 18:50 (8 Years ago) |
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He stumbles for a few moments, and then tripped on a almost Pokémon like object. When he finally became fully awake and aware, he turned to face a grey and purple flat face, with big yellow eyes. Chry let out a yelp, and in his panic threw Toxic at the Pokémon. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sun, 26/02/2017 17:20 (8 Years ago) |
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By chasing it down, it'll be wasting time. Dessin also had no knowledge of the Pokémon's Abilities, or amount of Hp for that matter. If the Pyukumuku had a lot of Hp, and Innards Out. It could get ugly for Dessin, as it did not want that Innards Out recoil. Finally, it turned and left the scene. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sun, 26/02/2017 17:07 (8 Years ago) |
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Quickly wiping it away, it turned to find the Pyukumuku hoping away, it was fortunate that this species of Pokémon had horrible speed, meaning even an Aegislash could outspeed it. Not taking any chances, Dessin turned into it's blade form, and slammed Sacred Sword into the Pokémon. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sun, 26/02/2017 15:46 (8 Years ago) |
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If it was a journey-er, that would be most satisfactory. If it wasn't, then any Pokémon that had seen the fight and then told others about it, would be troublesome. Thus it grabbed the lump, and revealed the unconscious Pyukumuku. Dessin then traveled towards the others, holding the Pokémon. [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sun, 26/02/2017 01:55 (8 Years ago) |
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Alright then, feel free to join back any time! [Read more] |
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Endy OFFLINE Forum Posts: 1,248 |
Posted: Sat, 25/02/2017 20:08 (8 Years ago) |
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"Would that be wise?" It asked the man. Turning back, It once again used Shadow Sneak, this time to travel away, to rid itself of the risk that any Pokémon in the PokeCenter could become a threat to him. [Read more] |