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Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Wed, 22/11/2017 21:57 (7 Years ago)
	Oh- I kinda forgot about this thread. Since I'll probably be dead anyways, Meme is the vigilante. I forgot to go cop on anyone else, sorry D: [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Sun, 19/11/2017 18:52 (7 Years ago)
	Abstaining [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Sun, 19/11/2017 14:53 (7 Years ago)
	Oh jeez;; Yeah, this wasn't the best of starts. But, hey, let's hope we can turn it around! [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Fri, 17/11/2017 01:52 (7 Years ago)
	In ^^ [Read more]

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Posted: Sun, 12/11/2017 04:02 (7 Years ago)

@Furret oh man, if I had nuggets I'd ask for one..

@Meme looks good! As far as critiques go, you might want to make the shoulders more visible, and the cape more.. relaxed? Gravity? I'm not quite sure how to describe it. (Take my advice with a grain of salt, please)

@lizzagna Those look beautiful!!

@Corvo Good job, everything looks nice!

I feel like my critiques won't mean as much because I'm probably one of the youngest people here :'D

Here's a little wip I have. I really like it so far, so I'm really looking for advice as to how I can make it better before I go to lineart.

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...Should I make something for the advent calendar?

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Posted: Fri, 03/11/2017 21:19 (7 Years ago)

Critique for @Lilac ~~Please keep in mind I am not a professional and the best thing you could do to improve upon your art is look at reference pictures ^^~~

I'm glad Fire Alpaca is working for you, yay! I like the coloring and I have no problem with that. What I have trouble understanding is where the dog's ~~I assume~~ shoulder is facing. In the position it's in it looks like the shoulder is underneath the tongue, but because of the slightly awkward angle it could go on either side and it's a bit confusing. I also can't tell if it's supposed to be anthropomorphic or not, especially given how the shoulder is angled. The only other thing I have a problem with is the bottom jaw. If you look at a dog ~~or canine like creature~~ their jaw extends farther than drawn in your picture. Yes, the tongue is covering the lower jaw, but more shading could have been done to show where the lower jaw ends.

Other than that, I think it's amazing! I really like your style of art! ~~The only other small thing I would critique is the ears, they look a bit off but otherwise fine.~~

~~Like I said, I'm not a pro so take my advice with a grain of salt ;-;~~

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Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Sun, 29/10/2017 07:04 (7 Years ago)
	I was going to critique, but everyone else's was spot on ;-; Anyways, I did a thing and it's really late and I'm probably going to regret this later, but here it is. Show hidden content There was going to be a background, but it's way too late for me to finish that now ^^' [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Sat, 28/10/2017 19:06 (7 Years ago)
	;-; Rip Good luck everyone! [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Thu, 26/10/2017 14:01 (7 Years ago)
	Not voting ^^ [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Wed, 25/10/2017 06:06 (7 Years ago)
	Poor Hau D: Good luck next round! [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 24/10/2017 00:09 (7 Years ago)
	Not voting ^^ [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Sun, 22/10/2017 06:25 (7 Years ago)
	Haha, I was watching the never-ending story and I wasn't on for a long time ;-; Welcome back to the Mafia, XD [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Wed, 18/10/2017 04:00 (7 Years ago)
	I feel bad for not being active here ;w; So, please critique this! I'll add critiques for other people eventually. It's the first time being on the computer for a while. Show hidden content I hope you guys like it ;w; Here is the Stash link for it QwQ [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 17/10/2017 06:25 (7 Years ago)
	Other way around [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 17/10/2017 06:21 (7 Years ago)
	That makes more sense as to why Hau wasn't talking, haha. ~~sorrrry~~ I have no suspects honestly. I'll just spy whoever. But remember, even we don't know one of our fellow mafia. They might turn on one of us ~~It's late where I am, so I'm going to sleep. Bye guys~~ [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 17/10/2017 06:17 (7 Years ago)
	Haha, I'll try?? It'll be random picking then, as long as you don't kill me by votes or something. My role is only finding out other people after all; I can't kill unless we vote [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 17/10/2017 05:58 (7 Years ago)
	Fight me >:0 I'll get ink all over you Edit: I'm the spy. It was a lucky break I spied the doctor but it is kinda a god shield. ~~please don't reveal your roles and plans out in the open like that, it really takes the fun away from the game.~~ [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 17/10/2017 01:50 (7 Years ago)
	I was about to mention that, Haha! I looked over the roles again, and if the guard plays it right, then they can potentially kill the mafia. We might not be as screwed as I thought ^^ [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 17/10/2017 01:44 (7 Years ago)
	And the mafia knows who the doctor is. That's troublesome. ~~I totally didn't forget what the vigilante does. We're more screwed than I thought~~ [Read more]

Myamoo547 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 16	Posted: Tue, 17/10/2017 01:35 (7 Years ago)
	Oh geez. I was away from my phone. That was an.. eventful night [Read more]

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