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SandeviRae
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Posted: Fri, 12/02/2016 13:24 (9 Years ago)

(I'm sorry, but your form remains rejected)
(You don't really need more detail in whatever strange dreams he has, you need more detail on how your character looks and acts, as well as having a character not almost completely based off of someone from a video game.)
(This is rp is also set in modern times, so airships aren't really a thing?)
(But yeah, those dreams of your character's aren't really enough to facilitate the accepting of your form, sorry)

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SandeviRae
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Posted: Sun, 07/02/2016 20:33 (9 Years ago)

(Detailed - adj. having many details or facts; showing attention to detail.)
(To put it simply, your form is very short and does not give any depth to the character at all. Your form is almost bare compared to pretty much everyone else's forms. TrueChara's form is about as minimal as I'll accept, not to mention that this roleplay is meant to be at least somewhat literate.)
(Sorry if I sound rude, but I'm not sure this roleplay is quite right for you. If you do not wish to revise your form or create a new character, please discontinue posting here, thanks.)

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SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Sun, 07/02/2016 09:02 (9 Years ago)
	(Sorry, but I mean, that doesn't really matter in relations to this rp? I mean, in even says in the rules to please have at least a somewhat detailed form.) [Read more]

SandeviRae
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Posted: Sun, 07/02/2016 08:24 (9 Years ago)

(Updated memory list up in the first post btw, ya'll should check that if you haven't so far)

Azalea let out a groan of dismay as light streamed through the window of the hotel room. After spending several minutes trying to ignore reality, she scowled and threw back the covers, digging into her bag for her spare set of clothing. She switched to the comfortable pair of jeans and a black t-shirt with an pixelated game logo on it. Azalea's face scrunched up as she tried to recall what that was all about, to no avail. She folded up the clothing she had been wearing from the night before, shoving them unceremoniously into her tote and shrugging on her spare sweater, a simple gray zip-up with silver stripes.

Azelea slipped her bare feet into her sneakers, tugging them over her scraped ankles and noticing the colored bandages on them with curiosity. She had noticed the bandages on her arms and legs earlier, but had never actually checked what was beneath them. The perplexed young woman shook her head, deciding that she would check later. Right now, she needed something to eat.

Azalea checked out of the hotel, tote clutched in her hand as she checked google for the closest place to get some food. She glanced around her, noticing the sidewalk led past a serene looking park. She might as well take the long way, she thought with a smile, seeing as she was in no hurry. She casually strolled through the park, following the paved trail with cheer, pausing only when she caught a glance of a young man seated on the nearest park bench. "Aw man, this is really weirding me out."

Azalea could do nothing as the memory crashed down on her, much more violently than the one she had had the night before.

It was bright outside, and they were walking through the park. It was very calming, he alost didn't catch what the person walming beside him said as-
This wasn't right.
"Hey, are you even listening?" "Hmm? Oh, yeah, sorry. What were you saying agai-"
This wasn't her.
"Hey, c'mon man, pay attention! I don't want to fail history because of yo-"
Who was this?

One moment, she was taking a calming walk through a local park, the next, she was on the ground, gasping for air as she clawed at her throat. How embarrassing.

(Whoops let's cut straight to some drama
I guess inheriting the memories of someone else is detrimental to your health
Anyways looks like Az here is on a one way trip on the pain train)
(Also sorry if I rp Van totally ooc I'm very tired)

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SandeviRae
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Posted: Sun, 07/02/2016 06:12 (9 Years ago)

Elva couldn't help but to smile, beaming at Ein's joyous smile, her gentle voice chiming as she stifled a happy laugh at Akash's joke. "Well, if we are to be wed, we would surely need some space for planning!" She chirped, her face cheery and much less reserved than she had been moments before. She smiled, feeling more relaxed and at ease than she had felt all night.

(Gasp! Elva is actually... A huge dork! Man, what a plot twist)

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SandeviRae
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Posted: Sat, 06/02/2016 22:38 (9 Years ago)

(@True Chara
Accepted, but it'd also be absolutely fantastic if you could maybe put a little more detail into your form possibly? I'll work on a new character to swap memories with her in a moment, or maybe reshuffle some of the existing switches)
(@Toa
UHHH
I'm sorry to say it, but I have a little more than a few issues with your form
For one thing, your character is based off of a character from existing media
That wouldn't be much of a issue if he wasn't literally just an outline of a person
Another thing, your form is extremely lacking in detail
As in, almost bare of it?
Sorry, but your form is rejected)

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SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Fri, 05/02/2016 23:56 (9 Years ago)
	43k for the quadrant koranchi ahh [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Tue, 02/02/2016 22:37 (9 Years ago)
	Could I bid 30k for the blossom king? [Read more]

SandeviRae
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Posted: Mon, 01/02/2016 13:49 (9 Years ago)

Well, since nobody's said anything, I'm assuming this means that I'll be making the first post

The first thing she felt was the cold, hard texture of the sidewalk, the midnight air cool against her skin. Her eyes flickered open, gaze directed at the sparkling stars above. Confusion flashed through her thoughts as she lay there, completely alone. Where was she? What was going on? She pushed herself to her feet, a bit off balance and wobbly. Her eyebrows scrunched together as she searched her memory banks for any scrap of information, only to be met with the vast blankness of what could only be amnesia. Pressing her hands against the sides of her head, she concentrated, a vague memory resurfacing. She gasped, a miniscule piece of information washing through her mind. Azalea Banks, age 21. Favorite color, seafoam green. Allergic to peanuts. This was her, Azalea.

She felt relieved that she now knew at least a little about herself, though it was still unnerving being alone out here with no memory. She glanced around, her eyes settling on a brown tote bag she hadn't noticed was there before. It must be hers, she was sure of it, she thought as she picked up the tote, opening it and observing its contents. It's contents weren't all that unusual, containing a cell phone, a wallet, a small travel pack of tissues, some napkins, and a small makeup bag. Pushing these aside, Azalea noted that there was also a spare set of clothes and a first aid kit.

She picked up the phone, turning it on with the press of a button. The screen lit up, a welcome message flickering across the screen, confirming that the phone did indeed belong to her. She thought for a moment before opening an internet browser and looking up the nearest hotel. It was several blocks down, not that far from where she was now. "How convenient." She said, marveling at how alien yet familiar her voice sounded to her as she began walking. It didn't take long for her to arrive at the hotel, checking out one of the cheaper rooms and plopping down onto the white bed. The back of Azalea's mind tickled, then tingled, then turned into a strange fizzy feeling, the memory washing over her in a wave.

He was standing the edge of the wall, a group of people egging him on. "C'mon man, it's only a couple of feet. You could totally do a flip if you wanted!" His friend cheered, clapping him on the back. "Oh, I'll show you a flip," He replied with a laugh, shaking his hands out as he edged away from the wall. He paused for a moment, shooting the onlookers a smile before taking a running start, leaping off of the wall.

Azalea sat up with a gasp, breathing heavily with a hand over her heart. "Well, that was certainly... Unusual, to say the least." Azalea observed. Those weren't her memories. And if she had someone else's memories, that would mean somebody else had her's. "Looks like I'll have to do some searching tomorrow." She said to the ceiling, slipping under the covers as she drifted off into a silent sleep.

(whoops that turned out far longer than i intended xp)

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SandeviRae
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Posted: Wed, 27/01/2016 03:28 (9 Years ago)

@-TheSans-
Oh uh
Well I mean I don't mean to try and sound rude or anything, but do you mind maybe reworking your characters' personalities? It's just kinda like, I kinda want to avoid "crazy" types of characters. If the description is indepth enough, it'd be fine, but like characters that "go crazy" or have kind of contradictory personalities are the kinds that I kind of want to avoid
Also you may want to reread the rules, sorry ;w;

Oh! I also forgot that I was going to be shuffling up the memories! Here are the swapped mems btw:

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Original owner of memories -> Who got them
Azalea -> Ryker
Kiley -> Fabice
Van -> Azalea
Ryker -> Kiley
Fabice -> Van

I might switch these a bit more if more people join, but this's it for now

@Wade
Okie dokie, I'll post first if Death doesn't feel like doing so

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SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Wed, 27/01/2016 02:08 (9 Years ago)
	so anyways, do either of you guys want to start orrr..? cuz i mean if neither of you want to i could make the first post so [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Mon, 25/01/2016 15:59 (9 Years ago)
	Prerequisites are basically what you already know how to do Like for color spasms, the prerequisites are basic recolors and basic animation Critiquing is basically constructive criticism Saying you're okay with it basically means you're open to having what you did wrong pointed out to you Please edit your form accordingly [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Thu, 21/01/2016 00:41 (9 Years ago)
	whoops I forgot to subscribe this BUT AHH HOLY CARP THIS IS MAGNIFICENT THANK YOU This absolutely wonderful ahhh <333 [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Wed, 20/01/2016 17:25 (9 Years ago)
	Could I bid 32k on the ruler of roses koranchi? [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Wed, 20/01/2016 16:26 (9 Years ago)
	As soon as you're done you're accepted eyy [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Wed, 20/01/2016 13:13 (9 Years ago)
	//smashes that accept button [Read more]

SandeviRae
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Posted: Wed, 20/01/2016 03:40 (9 Years ago)

You wake up to the glittering stars of the night sky. It takes a couple seconds for you to realize what is wrong with this situation, being as you're laying on the sidewalk of an unfamiliar road. As you glance around, pushing yourself to your feet, you try to recall how you got here, and what you were last doing. You are struck with confusion when you realize you can't seem to remember much of anything, besides some basic information about yourself. You can remember your age, your birthday, name, even what might be an address to what must be where you live, but anything past that? Nothing. Just a startling blankness, a gap in your recollection. You pause, a faint memory flickering as you struggle to recall the memory. You catch flickers of faces, slices of conversation, just before it occurs to you the wrongness of how it feels. At first, you aren't sure why it feels this way, before it strikes you.

The memories aren't yours.

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Your character wakes up one night with no recollection of who they are, besides some basic information about themselves. Besides this, they have almost no recollection of their past, leaving them in quite a tricky situation. To make matters even more confusing, they also appear to be seeing bits and pieces of the memories of someone else, the story of whom you will get to write.
How perplexing.

Rules:

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-Most PH rules apply
-Mild swearing is acceptable
-No Godmodding, powerplay, Mary-Sues or Gary-Stus.
-3 character limit
-If you read the rules, put "Recollection" in the "Other" part of your form
-Be fair to others, and don't be a drama llama
-Avoid arguing, spamming, and complaining, especially with the creator of the rp
-Your character only experiences "flashes" of memories at a time, so please don't have your character simply "know" everything about a person or their memories
-3 sentence minimum for each post
-I suggest making adult characters. Having your character go to school with no memory would be a pain
-This rp is meant to be somewhat/semi literate, so please put detail into your posts, your forms especially
-Due to the rule directly above this one, if a form is rejected three times, the player receives a warning. Three warnings and the player is banned from the rp.

Forms:

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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
Relationships/History:
Other:
Questions/Concerns:

Accepted:

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Kiley & Van - Death
Fabrice & Wyker - Wade
Marjory - TrueChara

Swapped memories

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Original owner of memories -> Who got them
Azalea -> Ryker
Kiley -> Marjory
Van -> Azalea
Ryker -> Kiley
Fabice -> Van
Marjory -> Fabice

My forms:

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Name: Azalea Banks
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Appearance: Azalea is a compact and slim-looking girl, with waist length russet hair and hazel green eyes. She's of a fairly average height, and often wears more casual, comfortable clothing, like jeans and t-shirts. She has a slight European look to her, and has several scars around her shoulders and arms that she prefers to cover up, as well as bruises and cuts all along her body, especially her back and arms.
Personality: Azalea is a fairly outgoing girl, with a generous, friendly personality and a cheerful smile. She's very stubborn and more than a little headstrong, with convictions to boot. Though awfully confused about this whole memory mix-up, she's positively determined to fix everything. Azalea is the type to go off on ridiculous misadventures, dragging the people around her along. She's surprisingly good at fighting and self-defense, and is an absolute goober when it comes to all things romantic. She insists that she's not all that great but it's obvious how sweet she is. Azalea doesn't really think too far ahead, unfortunately, and is practically a trouble magnet at times. After having most of her memories erased, she's far more calm and calculating then she had been with them, and she is very good at seeming like she's alright when she's not. She's prone to panic attacks at times, especially when recalling memories.
Relationships/History: She has more than a few issues with her alcoholic and abusive father, the reason she's in the situation she's in now. She's a runaway who doesn't have any family besides him, and only just escaped from him shortly before the beginning of this rp. Her mother suffered severe injuries after a bad fight with Azalea's father, resulting in the death of her and her unborn child. Even if Azalea still remembered her past, it'd still be very muddled and confusing. She's surprisingly isolated for someone so friendly.
Other: Is ace & biro

Warnings and Banned:

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ToaMata2001 - 1 warning

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SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Mon, 18/01/2016 13:24 (9 Years ago)
	Well, I mean, there's an actual weather occurrence where the sun appears around midnight and everything's bright and such so I don't really think it's all that much of an issue? I mean it's perfectly possible to be sunny at night, depending on your geographic location, so this type of weather is totally plausible. [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Fri, 15/01/2016 18:15 (9 Years ago)
	Somnandi's name; Seija Gender; Female Personality in two words; Sharp & Solemn A song; Halsey - Control [Read more]

SandeviRae OFFLINE Forum Posts: 996	Posted: Fri, 15/01/2016 02:49 (9 Years ago)
	mmm15k on the death wish one? [Read more]

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